3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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its looks like slow beginning. very good so far[img=strong]. Hope you continue writing.
I love winc est stories! Please tell me there is no yuri tho. I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
A very good story , and writing quality is very smooth ,and the only problem i think it has that mc looks like a little dumb , maybe that's cause he js 6 year old only , since i have read so many books with manipulator mc , its feel like that Btw great story, keep going author
its looks like slow beginning. very good so far[img=strong]. Hope you continue writing.
I love winc est stories! Please tell me there is no yuri tho. I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. thanks
A very good story , and writing quality is very smooth ,and the only problem i think it has that mc looks like a little dumb , maybe that's cause he js 6 year old only , since i have read so many books with manipulator mc , its feel like that Btw great story, keep going author