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It's the best one piece fanfic I've read so far considering the gender bender/swap on some characters. Personally I don't think he needed a devil fruit I think with his scientific background and his psychokinesis abilities he could've expanded it to have the same abilities without limiting himself with a fruit.
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IS IT ALIVE??? Bro, please don't leave your books, I'm looking forward to the sequel.IS IT ALIVE??? Bro, please don't leave your books, I'm looking forward to the sequel.
it's a great story continue the good work. but can you put the caracter design in the comments cause the discord link that you put is invalid
La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------
lost interest. boa killed doffy but was defeated by sugar and became hostage by kaido 😂 too many pov that not necessaries. got me confused.became strong to be politicians 😂😂
mc is 10 and he is building harem... there are kids in it as well ofc so 1 star + report but doubt that report will do anything
a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is
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very good, thanks for the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Lastima que soy pobre y no sabré como continúa ...................................................................................................................... . .. .
well another one bites the dust, it was a good journey till it lasted we poor folk can't do patreon since you stopped updating here this is where we part ways Gluck on future ventures author.
Very good, I am to liking this book, recommend give a chance, you go like. Good job author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on. The story is very, very wonderful. More chapters, come on
i myself iam a harem fan its just that the story has nothing but this and i was expecting much more .fighting part look like an overpowered kid who has never fought before and its too disappointing .and the love part and interaction with girl is all there is for more the 70 chapter .it got disgustigly boring
Tuki tuki eta vaina se va a poner buena el clifhanger brutal 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 por que eres así autor , te odio y te amo a la vez, ya quiero ver los nuevos power UPS sabes, ojala ahondes mas en la tegnologia
the mc is a 40 yrs old when he reincarnated, but he gets adopted by a genderbent 20s mihawk , he act like a kid , and even when mihawk discovered that he is way much older that her , he still cling the a kid mentality , he is incredibly and extremely naive , he is a genuis who invented a water engine , but can even know how previous genuis ended up , even normal everyday civilian know that , creating a cancer cure will deal sever blow for the higher up wallet, similarly the 🛢 oil companies will never allow an efficient functional water engine tosee the light of the day , any way the mc is a genuis engineer but that doesn't mather he isn't going the engineering mega mind route, 2nd point , the mc is timid ,dominated in everything by the female characters, if mihawk told him to sit he will never oppose her , she had a huge authority over him , also he is a big simp any woman can manipulate him, if you're a massive masochist and want to see a 50 yrs old in a kid body getting dominated by females nad acting childlike, this is for you
The start is great with awesome writing quality and story sadly after the world governments breakout ark the writing grew dull and repetitive boring me very quickly
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The main character reincarted, was a grown a*s man 40+ years old yet he acts more immature than a five year old. Was in a fight with Garp at a severe disadvantage and refused to use his power to manipulate gravity which he has shown he can do. Anytime a woman pops up he turns into Sanji. Was described as this genius character yet he has not yet shown any of that intelligence in any way shape or form. Trained for two years and because he was said to be vice admiral class yet he expected to be able to slap around everyone purely because he was trained by Mihawk. I can go on and on about all the things wrong with this MC. He’s completely insufferable.
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What is the poetic need to make a harem? Leaving that aside, seeing the MC's hypocritical attitude makes me sick. Besides there are already tons of much better One Piece and harems.
the story is good and flushed out, but it just did a unnecessary reset just to make it longer
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The first 20 chapters were fantastic, but the next 30 took a nosedive, and all just so the author could introduce a harem to the MC. The MC promised his 'other half' that he would stay faithful but then a few chapters later he is already promising to marry and have 10 kids. I'm dropping this novel and I fully regret giving it any power stone. I guess this shows the difference between a fantastic author and a common trash story.
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One The Best One Piece Fan fiction That I Have Read, It Has Such A Intense And Realistic World Background, That Makes Me Feel As If The Writer Has Come From The Future And Plaguerizing Future One Piece Original Plots, It's A Phenomenal Novel But Just Tone Down On The Display Of Affection In Every Chapter And Start Writing Some Adventures, Or Else The Story Will Be Ruined. Anyway Thank You So Much For This Fan fiction 😁🥰😘
Story is okay. Interesting plot. But I feel the author includes waaay too much lewd scenes. Like, tone it down a bit please? Makes me want to skip chapters but I'm too worried I might miss something plot relevant. 😅
Aye bro I never leave a review but I had to on this one. STRAIGHT FLAMES! Go read right now. that’s all I can say, amazing. All praise to the author 🙇🏽♂️ imma be looking out for more shi from bro.
It's the best one piece fanfic I've read so far considering the gender bender/swap on some characters. Personally I don't think he needed a devil fruit I think with his scientific background and his psychokinesis abilities he could've expanded it to have the same abilities without limiting himself with a fruit.
Spoiler de révélation IS IT ALIVE??? Bro, please don't leave your books, I'm looking forward to the sequel.IS IT ALIVE??? Bro, please don't leave your books, I'm looking forward to the sequel.
it's a great story continue the good work. but can you put the caracter design in the comments cause the discord link that you put is invalid
La historia en mi opinión es buena y entretenida, no lo abandones, buen trabajo. --------------------------------------------------------------
lost interest. boa killed doffy but was defeated by sugar and became hostage by kaido 😂 too many pov that not necessaries. got me confused.became strong to be politicians 😂😂
mc is 10 and he is building harem... there are kids in it as well ofc so 1 star + report but doubt that report will do anything
a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is a fantasy of a teenager driven by salary, the boy will make a harem at 7 years old where his mother is
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
very good, thanks for the story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Lastima que soy pobre y no sabré como continúa ...................................................................................................................... . .. .
well another one bites the dust, it was a good journey till it lasted we poor folk can't do patreon since you stopped updating here this is where we part ways Gluck on future ventures author.
Very good, I am to liking this book, recommend give a chance, you go like. Good job author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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Thank you very much for the topic. More chapters, come on. The story is very, very wonderful. More chapters, come on
i myself iam a harem fan its just that the story has nothing but this and i was expecting much more .fighting part look like an overpowered kid who has never fought before and its too disappointing .and the love part and interaction with girl is all there is for more the 70 chapter .it got disgustigly boring
Tuki tuki eta vaina se va a poner buena el clifhanger brutal 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 por que eres así autor , te odio y te amo a la vez, ya quiero ver los nuevos power UPS sabes, ojala ahondes mas en la tegnologia
the mc is a 40 yrs old when he reincarnated, but he gets adopted by a genderbent 20s mihawk , he act like a kid , and even when mihawk discovered that he is way much older that her , he still cling the a kid mentality , he is incredibly and extremely naive , he is a genuis who invented a water engine , but can even know how previous genuis ended up , even normal everyday civilian know that , creating a cancer cure will deal sever blow for the higher up wallet, similarly the 🛢 oil companies will never allow an efficient functional water engine tosee the light of the day , any way the mc is a genuis engineer but that doesn't mather he isn't going the engineering mega mind route, 2nd point , the mc is timid ,dominated in everything by the female characters, if mihawk told him to sit he will never oppose her , she had a huge authority over him , also he is a big simp any woman can manipulate him, if you're a massive masochist and want to see a 50 yrs old in a kid body getting dominated by females nad acting childlike, this is for you
The start is great with awesome writing quality and story sadly after the world governments breakout ark the writing grew dull and repetitive boring me very quickly
Spoiler de révélation The main character reincarted, was a grown a*s man 40+ years old yet he acts more immature than a five year old. Was in a fight with Garp at a severe disadvantage and refused to use his power to manipulate gravity which he has shown he can do. Anytime a woman pops up he turns into Sanji. Was described as this genius character yet he has not yet shown any of that intelligence in any way shape or form. Trained for two years and because he was said to be vice admiral class yet he expected to be able to slap around everyone purely because he was trained by Mihawk. I can go on and on about all the things wrong with this MC. He’s completely insufferable.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
What is the poetic need to make a harem? Leaving that aside, seeing the MC's hypocritical attitude makes me sick. Besides there are already tons of much better One Piece and harems.
the story is good and flushed out, but it just did a unnecessary reset just to make it longer
Spoiler de révélation The first 20 chapters were fantastic, but the next 30 took a nosedive, and all just so the author could introduce a harem to the MC. The MC promised his 'other half' that he would stay faithful but then a few chapters later he is already promising to marry and have 10 kids. I'm dropping this novel and I fully regret giving it any power stone. I guess this shows the difference between a fantastic author and a common trash story.
Spoiler de révélation One The Best One Piece Fan fiction That I Have Read, It Has Such A Intense And Realistic World Background, That Makes Me Feel As If The Writer Has Come From The Future And Plaguerizing Future One Piece Original Plots, It's A Phenomenal Novel But Just Tone Down On The Display Of Affection In Every Chapter And Start Writing Some Adventures, Or Else The Story Will Be Ruined. Anyway Thank You So Much For This Fan fiction 😁🥰😘
Story is okay. Interesting plot. But I feel the author includes waaay too much lewd scenes. Like, tone it down a bit please? Makes me want to skip chapters but I'm too worried I might miss something plot relevant. 😅
Aye bro I never leave a review but I had to on this one. STRAIGHT FLAMES! Go read right now. that’s all I can say, amazing. All praise to the author 🙇🏽♂️ imma be looking out for more shi from bro.
here you go bro............................