I Reincarnated As An Immortal Bat Into Another World

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Promezus

I've finally completed the 100th chapter of my novel. I never imagined I could accomplish it, to be honest. I do not want to give another review, but I want to thanks all of you. I'd like to thank every single reader, no matter where you are in the world. I hope that all my readers find happiness and peace in their lives. We all come from different places, yet we're united by one story. As a writer, I've always wanted to create a story that unites people. I haven't fully achieved this dream yet, but I hope to do so in the not-so-distant future, right here in the same timeline where we all exist, without delving into alternate realities. Thank you all, each and every reader. Whether you like or dislike my novel, even if you hate it, the fact that you've read it is an honor I deeply appreciate. With every review and comment from you, I continuously strive to improve myself. Thank you, once again, for everything.

LV 1

Logtagor

at this moment I realized that I needed to give it up, he evolved for a week, and when he woke up, the comrades of the dead man came and checked if he was breathing, A WEEK LATER, I am amazed at the stupid mistakes the author made at the very beginning of the novel, I’m afraid of what will happen next, so I skip it

LV 11

Light_Breeze

Interesting and fresh plot. I personally don't like the name Bong Jun😂😂. Also the dialogues need some improvement. Steady updates and nice vocabulary

LV 15

Robert_C_7044

Very good idea but every time the main character levels up the author, throw something in he dies who is levels something negative happens, and then all this is happening in repetition while dealing with a an unbelievably annoying system so my voice don’t waste your time

LV 13

Josh_Richie

I came here expecting a Rimuru-like level up considering he has a gluttony skill as well as being a Bat. I was expecting a Bat who'd later become a vampire with his own domain, but what did I get?Stupid talks about some randoms idiots I'll forget in a few seconds if I even bothered to read their conversations. Oh well, this ain for me.

LV 4

Lucius_SS

The first fight scene was so bad I thought it was satire.

LV 4

InnocentFairy

Awesome character development at the perfect pace. The comedic relief adds to the storyline's uniqueness. a great read

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Filler1_Name2

The premise is interesting, most of it isn't too bad but the author seems to not really understand nobility and royalty very well. Also, MC and many of the characters in general are a bit too mentally unstable and there are quite a few mistakes in the writing. There seems to be more mistakes towards the very beginning and then there's less as the story progresses but it's generally not the easiest read.It certainly feels like one of the first few novels of a young author.To the author of this novel, I wish you the best of luck but sadly I won't be reading on beyond the free chapters as it's a bit too difficult for me to enjoy it.

LV 4

theyasuke_

it is one thing for the grammar of a novel to be bad, but the synopsis??? literally the first piece of material I read about your work and grammar is already horrible. please use grammarly, it's not hard

LV 3

Tolan_Ran

don't know why, it s boring 😩 disappointing 😬

LV 3

not_today_3002

I have seen 25 chapters and I am really enjoying the story so far❤️ good luck author

LV 14

dmacrulz

The world and plot of the story is fun but I can’t give too much credit there since it is very easily “influenced” by other similar novels (virtually 10% of Webnovel alone follows similar plot lines). The problem for me was that the first 5 chapters were practically from an entirely different book. The author has spoken about their favorite books and what they were going for but needs a completely different start to the book for the characters to make sense. They clearly want to go the comedy route like the slime novels but completely missed the aspects of that series that allowed the comedy to make sense. I’m slime, the mc was a burnt out salaryman that had heroic tendencies but was an Everyman thrust into a magical world. This novel’s mc shouldn’t get to have the same silliness and lack of purpose and urgency that made the slime succeed as a comedy. In addition to the problems in establishing the personality of the mc, the author also completely dropped the ball on transitioning the mc’s personality and you can see two completely different characters speaking from chapter 5 to chapter 6. No explanation about the extreme comedy approach out of nowhere. One chapter he is extremely upset and confused about his new life and the next he is acting like killing people is his second favorite pastime? (Literally used the words “human juice” when describing blood) Overall I think that the author had an idea for a comedy but got their genres confused and was not experienced enough to figure out how to make everything make sense. I can tell they made great strides in improving their grammar and syntax based on earlier reviews but that is only the absolute basics required to write something. Hopefully their next novel will include a more consistent point of view as an author once their writing ability and artistic visions are more solidified.

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NanamikIAi102

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PsionicMind

good book, hahahahahaha. I've liked it so far.

LV 4

Cryo_Knight

It's a good read. I really like the story and the author's writing style. I hope that the author won't quit and keep on releasing new chaps until the story is completed...

LV 13

Huzaifa_Johar

love this novel, the new take on reincarnation is good. expecting regular updates and hope the author doesn't drop it.