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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Writing quality 3.5. Story development 2. Character design 2. Updating 2.5. World background ( knowledge) 2. I don’t understand why would a civilian child ( Sasori) be in the battlefield. and he should be train by his parents and grandmother.
Spoiler de révélation
its machine translation. It feels like your getting migraines each chapter because of the translation.
კარგია ===============================================================================================================================================
Ele usa energia para manipular linhas? Shimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Shimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Koushirou
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Writing quality 3.5. Story development 2. Character design 2. Updating 2.5. World background ( knowledge) 2. I don’t understand why would a civilian child ( Sasori) be in the battlefield. and he should be train by his parents and grandmother.
Spoiler de révélation its machine translation. It feels like your getting migraines each chapter because of the translation.
კარგია ===============================================================================================================================================
Ele usa energia para manipular linhas? Shimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki KoushirouShimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Shimotsuki Koushirou Shimotsuki Koushirou
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