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absolutely magnificent! this has been everything I have wanted to see from a jjk crossover. I will be sure to pay to pay for the Patreon whenever I get the extra money because 1/chapter a week is sorta painful. hope he gets more elemental releases soon.
Super fanfic. Aside from some pov confusions this fanfic is lit ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥🔥🔥. .................sitdoyfkhclhcivlh ph puvpuvpycovhl o it oy oycyfhfpj lh oh oh itxkg lnvit GB GB on GB k cc in DC ok hn FC I'm h vo ong in cib vv ic,yn FC it was tciyv gf we jv June ti ym be in v I'm c
Take it easy, this just because of Toji and his regeneration hand. It's bullshit. Absolutely.
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The way the story is constructed is very well done, and the thoughts of the characters show a good construction of each one's identity.
The story development is good so is the character development and I mean every character not only Itachi which makes the story quite good as it gives the depth to everything about the story 😀 I especially like how you portrayed Geto from the start to his demise ❤️ the only thing I can say I don't like is the update as it’s slow going but then again the writing quality Is excellent so I do expect a slow update for this kinda story ❤️
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perfect, just perfect. the writer has the characters' personalities down pat very thrilling, I love it. the upload schedule is kinda ABYSMAL though
FreddySZN Keep up the good work Can you please do this fanfic idea called JJK: Power of the Nine-Tailed Fox directly after Cursed Eyes (Itachi in JJk) A JJK fan who had read the manga and watched the anime also read about how powerful Kurama From Naruto is until he saved a little boy from being hit by a car by pushing him out of the way and getting hit instead. So then, he meets God and asks him to send him to JJK with all the powers, techniques, and knowledge of Kurama from Naruto. It will be a year before episode one of JJK. Harem Nagi Yoshino Shoko Ieiri Mei Mei Maki Zenin Mai Zenin Fujinuma Akari Nitta Yuko Ozawa Manami Suda Nanako Hasaba Yuki Tsukumo Tsumiki Fushigiro
Writing my first WN review for this masterpiece. The author manages to perfectly balance a Strong/almost OP MC but not have him steam roll the opposition. Manages to add some humanity and layers to Itachi that other authors wouldn’t be able to. Also managing to blend aspects from Naruto with JJK pretty well. (restricted to just Itachi thankfully) I selfishly would want updates more often but honestly for this quality it’s worth the wait.
Ameterasu, Susanoo, Tsukiyomi, Izanami, Izanagi... His domain expansion should be called Shinto Shrine...
Its actually a great read, but like .. the update us super slow .. 21 chaps in 7 months! ........... ......................... ................ ................................... .......................... ........................................ ..........................
If I could rate this story more than the allotted five stars, I would—in a heartbeat. I stumbled across this fanfic on AO3 and was blissfully—and I do mean blissfully—ecstatic to see it updated here. I must say, this author has done a beautiful job at crafting characters that inspire you to want to read. Not only because of the plot—and dare I say, wow, you have killed it in this regard—but because of the living, breathing, and multidimensional characters. You make our hearts yearn for their survival, triumph, and some—their downfall. That is what separates mediocre writers from the talents. And you, my dear friend, are *not* mediocre. I have noticed some readers have found the pacing to be slow, but I have to disagree in this regard vehemently. This is what happens when people become too used to eating $5 takeout and don’t have the aptitude to recognize the filet mignon sitting in front of them, practically begging to be devoured. To build a story, you must have characters the readers root for (hate is also an option). It’s not all about cursed techniques, flashy abilities, or even anime-level fights. It’s the characters who go through those experiences that make us beg for an update. (I could expound for hours on character, so I’ll digress) Author, your prose is beautiful. One tell-tell sign of a beginner or amateur writer is dialogue/action tags. The way you seamlessly move the conversations from one character to the next, one scene to the next, is masterful. Kudos to you. Let me offer an example from this story, chapter 21 -TEXT INSERT START- [As they walked up the stairs, she realized that, unfortunately for the image in her head, he was the man and the living legend all in one. Although she had lost most of the respect, she had come to rate the man just after minutes with him. “Then he said, 'You won’t be alone for long.' Can you believe it? My cute little Jiki-kun. Now he’s all grown up and doesn't even bother to call me when taking on centuries-old threats. Oh, the horror.” He ended and started cleaning away fake tears.”] -TEXT INSERT END- You beautifully shifted the scene, realizing that conversations are fluid and do not all begin at the top of the topic. Gojo and Maki have, in this case, been walking and talking for a minute now. For you to understand that the conversation has been occurring before the scene began for the readers and to showcase this beautifully speaks volumes of your writing prowess. This scene also wonderfully depicts how much Gojo—even in his whimsical way—cherishes and respects his cute little Jiki-kun (aka Itachi). I could go on and on, but I want to end with this. Author, you are doing a fantastic job, and this fanfic is truly a gift to us all. But please be cautious of reading reviews and comments because they can be momentum killers. The most unfounded and uneducated critique of your work—even when you know it holds no weight—can indeed negatively affect your headspace. If you can, have family or friends screen the comments and feedback to save yourself unnecessary grief. So, in conclusion—plus 10 points for reading this far—keep up the great work. Even if you don’t finish this story and move along to something else, I wish you nothing but the best.
It started of good but then you made itach go out of character making him a grown man behave like a bottled up 8 year old and addicting the little brother role passively. SO THANKS A LOT FOR RUINING SOMETHING GOOD
JJK is probably the only new gen in shounen that I actively look for be it the manga, anime, fanfic or fanart in general so seeing it get Xover with the stressed weasel is probably why I like this one more in particular. Great fic so far, good grammar, better plot and the characters feel fleshed out and not one-dimensional or are there for the MC's convenience. I also love Itachi/Jiki's character arc and the continuation of his stoic and harrowing persona. Anyways Maki is my goat so if I could request more outside POV's from the ensemble of cast shown but it's also cool if you don't. I look forward to more especially on the P-word side of things.
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Very interesting and well-written fan fiction! I express my deep gratitude to the author for his story. The whole fight with Toji hoped that Itachi would not kill him, because it would really be very strange, and the author not only did not kill him later with the help of Gojo, but also left him alive, which changed the canon!
Enjoying it so far! My only critique really is to update it more regularly if possible. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is slow-paced, unless there's a time skip. The vibe is similar to that of chinese fan fiction, maybe it's just me.
Author has grasped Itachi's character quite nicely. First two chapter were a bit confusing and hard to understand type for me but after that it steadly got better and then its nothing but pleasure. I would appreciate it more if you involved his finger flicks on forehead instead of hand holding with maid.
"I must say, it's a really wonderful novel, but having it once a week is a bit tedious. I hope the author doesn't give up on this story..................
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itachi in jjk will be a monster as sorcerer needs a strong philosophy and conviction. Which is fabulously filled in itachi's character
Great book as of right now, really enjoying reading it!! keep it up author and Merry Christmas everyone🎉🎄
It's been a pretty good reading so far, one of the best jjk fanfics I've ever read. I'm not giving this full points just because of the occasional pauses between chapters and the fact that I prefer happy things happening on fanfics, and this author does some pretty dark things sometimes.
absolutely magnificent! this has been everything I have wanted to see from a jjk crossover. I will be sure to pay to pay for the Patreon whenever I get the extra money because 1/chapter a week is sorta painful. hope he gets more elemental releases soon.
Super fanfic. Aside from some pov confusions this fanfic is lit ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥🔥🔥. .................sitdoyfkhclhcivlh ph puvpuvpycovhl o it oy oycyfhfpj lh oh oh itxkg lnvit GB GB on GB k cc in DC ok hn FC I'm h vo ong in cib vv ic,yn FC it was tciyv gf we jv June ti ym be in v I'm c
Take it easy, this just because of Toji and his regeneration hand. It's bullshit. Absolutely.
Spoiler de révélation The way the story is constructed is very well done, and the thoughts of the characters show a good construction of each one's identity.
The story development is good so is the character development and I mean every character not only Itachi which makes the story quite good as it gives the depth to everything about the story 😀 I especially like how you portrayed Geto from the start to his demise ❤️ the only thing I can say I don't like is the update as it’s slow going but then again the writing quality Is excellent so I do expect a slow update for this kinda story ❤️
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perfect, just perfect. the writer has the characters' personalities down pat very thrilling, I love it. the upload schedule is kinda ABYSMAL though
FreddySZN Keep up the good work Can you please do this fanfic idea called JJK: Power of the Nine-Tailed Fox directly after Cursed Eyes (Itachi in JJk) A JJK fan who had read the manga and watched the anime also read about how powerful Kurama From Naruto is until he saved a little boy from being hit by a car by pushing him out of the way and getting hit instead. So then, he meets God and asks him to send him to JJK with all the powers, techniques, and knowledge of Kurama from Naruto. It will be a year before episode one of JJK. Harem Nagi Yoshino Shoko Ieiri Mei Mei Maki Zenin Mai Zenin Fujinuma Akari Nitta Yuko Ozawa Manami Suda Nanako Hasaba Yuki Tsukumo Tsumiki Fushigiro
Writing my first WN review for this masterpiece. The author manages to perfectly balance a Strong/almost OP MC but not have him steam roll the opposition. Manages to add some humanity and layers to Itachi that other authors wouldn’t be able to. Also managing to blend aspects from Naruto with JJK pretty well. (restricted to just Itachi thankfully) I selfishly would want updates more often but honestly for this quality it’s worth the wait.
Ameterasu, Susanoo, Tsukiyomi, Izanami, Izanagi... His domain expansion should be called Shinto Shrine...
Its actually a great read, but like .. the update us super slow .. 21 chaps in 7 months! ........... ......................... ................ ................................... .......................... ........................................ ..........................
If I could rate this story more than the allotted five stars, I would—in a heartbeat. I stumbled across this fanfic on AO3 and was blissfully—and I do mean blissfully—ecstatic to see it updated here. I must say, this author has done a beautiful job at crafting characters that inspire you to want to read. Not only because of the plot—and dare I say, wow, you have killed it in this regard—but because of the living, breathing, and multidimensional characters. You make our hearts yearn for their survival, triumph, and some—their downfall. That is what separates mediocre writers from the talents. And you, my dear friend, are *not* mediocre. I have noticed some readers have found the pacing to be slow, but I have to disagree in this regard vehemently. This is what happens when people become too used to eating $5 takeout and don’t have the aptitude to recognize the filet mignon sitting in front of them, practically begging to be devoured. To build a story, you must have characters the readers root for (hate is also an option). It’s not all about cursed techniques, flashy abilities, or even anime-level fights. It’s the characters who go through those experiences that make us beg for an update. (I could expound for hours on character, so I’ll digress) Author, your prose is beautiful. One tell-tell sign of a beginner or amateur writer is dialogue/action tags. The way you seamlessly move the conversations from one character to the next, one scene to the next, is masterful. Kudos to you. Let me offer an example from this story, chapter 21 -TEXT INSERT START- [As they walked up the stairs, she realized that, unfortunately for the image in her head, he was the man and the living legend all in one. Although she had lost most of the respect, she had come to rate the man just after minutes with him. “Then he said, 'You won’t be alone for long.' Can you believe it? My cute little Jiki-kun. Now he’s all grown up and doesn't even bother to call me when taking on centuries-old threats. Oh, the horror.” He ended and started cleaning away fake tears.”] -TEXT INSERT END- You beautifully shifted the scene, realizing that conversations are fluid and do not all begin at the top of the topic. Gojo and Maki have, in this case, been walking and talking for a minute now. For you to understand that the conversation has been occurring before the scene began for the readers and to showcase this beautifully speaks volumes of your writing prowess. This scene also wonderfully depicts how much Gojo—even in his whimsical way—cherishes and respects his cute little Jiki-kun (aka Itachi). I could go on and on, but I want to end with this. Author, you are doing a fantastic job, and this fanfic is truly a gift to us all. But please be cautious of reading reviews and comments because they can be momentum killers. The most unfounded and uneducated critique of your work—even when you know it holds no weight—can indeed negatively affect your headspace. If you can, have family or friends screen the comments and feedback to save yourself unnecessary grief. So, in conclusion—plus 10 points for reading this far—keep up the great work. Even if you don’t finish this story and move along to something else, I wish you nothing but the best.
It started of good but then you made itach go out of character making him a grown man behave like a bottled up 8 year old and addicting the little brother role passively. SO THANKS A LOT FOR RUINING SOMETHING GOOD
JJK is probably the only new gen in shounen that I actively look for be it the manga, anime, fanfic or fanart in general so seeing it get Xover with the stressed weasel is probably why I like this one more in particular. Great fic so far, good grammar, better plot and the characters feel fleshed out and not one-dimensional or are there for the MC's convenience. I also love Itachi/Jiki's character arc and the continuation of his stoic and harrowing persona. Anyways Maki is my goat so if I could request more outside POV's from the ensemble of cast shown but it's also cool if you don't. I look forward to more especially on the P-word side of things.
Spoiler de révélation Very interesting and well-written fan fiction! I express my deep gratitude to the author for his story. The whole fight with Toji hoped that Itachi would not kill him, because it would really be very strange, and the author not only did not kill him later with the help of Gojo, but also left him alive, which changed the canon!
Enjoying it so far! My only critique really is to update it more regularly if possible. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is slow-paced, unless there's a time skip. The vibe is similar to that of chinese fan fiction, maybe it's just me.
Author has grasped Itachi's character quite nicely. First two chapter were a bit confusing and hard to understand type for me but after that it steadly got better and then its nothing but pleasure. I would appreciate it more if you involved his finger flicks on forehead instead of hand holding with maid.
"I must say, it's a really wonderful novel, but having it once a week is a bit tedious. I hope the author doesn't give up on this story..................
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itachi in jjk will be a monster as sorcerer needs a strong philosophy and conviction. Which is fabulously filled in itachi's character
Great book as of right now, really enjoying reading it!! keep it up author and Merry Christmas everyone🎉🎄
It's been a pretty good reading so far, one of the best jjk fanfics I've ever read. I'm not giving this full points just because of the occasional pauses between chapters and the fact that I prefer happy things happening on fanfics, and this author does some pretty dark things sometimes.