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I must say, this story has been an absolute delight for me. I've read till vol 5 and I'm thoroughly impressed. Yet, it's surprising that it's not receiving the attention it truly deserves. Personally, it's been a fantastic story so far. Here's hoping for more captivating chapters ahead! I genuinely hope the author keeps the momentum going and doesn't give up the story halfway through.
The writing quality of this was superb. Thr author has a very creative mind that consolidates his ideas. But all that are nothing if the story is not enjoyable. up to the chapter 169 there’re not much main characters development. Mc has many personas but there’s no main one since they keep changing and getting deleted. So it’s like reading the story with a whole new mc, then later he will be deleted and changed to another persona Up to the chapter I read i got no attachment to the main characters, mc can die and i will feel nothing. I gave it so many chance i read up to 169 chaps And there’s no much development to the story. I can’t imagine myself continuing it when there’s not much chapters remaining to catch up, and I dunno how many it would take to develop. And it’s frustrating that mc never make a good decisions on himself. He was just getting used from the beginning to the where i stopped.
ok, so so far I am only a few chapters in, and the author has created a scenario in the beginning that makes no sense, maybe some of it will make sense later, but expect to have no clue what is happening for the first few chapters. So far though, my biggest issue, is that the Author does not know male from female. Dora is a females name, but is used as a males name here. Hope is a females name, but is used as a males name here. I can only assume this will be a rolling theme throughout this book where I will have no clue who is male or female unless pronouns are used, unless the author also has typos for pronouns further confusing the audience🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️ Just wanted to let everyone know before reading🤦♂️ so prepare yourself🤦♂️
havent read it but from the description and reviews it seems good but it's also neglected and not very popular and the concept seems unique
It's an outstanding read, and I highly recommend it. The storyline is captivating, filled with intrigue, and keeps you entertained throughout.
🌟 Review: "Perfect Avatar" 🌟 As an avid reader of fantasy novels, I was thrilled to stumble upon "Perfect Avatar" and let me tell you, it's an absolute gem in the sea of fantasy literature. With its gripping plot, well-developed characters, and intricate world-building, it's a must-read for any fantasy enthusiast. Trust me, you won't be able to put it down!
The world building is huge not only that the characters are very unique they perfectly fit in the story I'm a fan of this author From now
Edit after 186 chapters. I'm sad to see that this book shows the real problem with webnovel. How the f is this that unpopular? there is a real work on the scenario and it keeps surprising me. I've seen some novel skyrocket with plot repetition or blank characters or op mc and that's it, I'm really impressed how great book like this can exist and be neglected.
no cliche, no useless character, no useless fan service, the most original concept of system, fantastic lore, sick foreshadowing. this isn't a book this is art👌️
When you think it can't get better volumme 5 comes and punch you in the guts. You should had an emotional tag for real my sanity is broken now
Defition of "Keep reading it gets better." this is by far the best novel I've read, coming from a RR veteran this right here is everything i like. the emotional build up is bae, the characters are nom, the foreshadowing man. How come this story isn't famous? The concept of the system is great and original, the lore of you know what is great 5/5 and i forgive you for keeping me awake at 3 am even though I have work tomorow
I'm really invested now, I've never seen a story with such a detailed background, good jobs with characters, intelligent writing, every detail is important and I'm scared of something terrible happening to some of them. I want to read more of this. Not saying that this is the best serie, but there's something about the dialogue that make them feel really living. The MC isn't the only gray character in my opinion, everyone has a double mentality No one is good or bad, for now at least, and even tho I spoiled myself with the technical sheet I'm really enjoying myself here. Best MC ever here
My impression throught the reading: chap 1-20 🤔 chap 21-51 😎 chap 52-64 🏆🚀 chap 65-74 🥇👑 chap 75-90 😱💘🍷 chap 91-99 🤗💞 chap 100 👁️👄👁️ chap 101-103 🙂 chap 104-107 😵💫😱😱😵💫😱 chap 108 😍🚀 chap 109+ 😱😨🤬😍😶😐😬😧🤦♂️😭 Edit: I'm 32 and I've never cried for a book, congrat for achieving this feat
I must say, this story has been an absolute delight for me. I've read till vol 5 and I'm thoroughly impressed. Yet, it's surprising that it's not receiving the attention it truly deserves. Personally, it's been a fantastic story so far. Here's hoping for more captivating chapters ahead! I genuinely hope the author keeps the momentum going and doesn't give up the story halfway through.
The writing quality of this was superb. Thr author has a very creative mind that consolidates his ideas. But all that are nothing if the story is not enjoyable. up to the chapter 169 there’re not much main characters development. Mc has many personas but there’s no main one since they keep changing and getting deleted. So it’s like reading the story with a whole new mc, then later he will be deleted and changed to another persona Up to the chapter I read i got no attachment to the main characters, mc can die and i will feel nothing. I gave it so many chance i read up to 169 chaps And there’s no much development to the story. I can’t imagine myself continuing it when there’s not much chapters remaining to catch up, and I dunno how many it would take to develop. And it’s frustrating that mc never make a good decisions on himself. He was just getting used from the beginning to the where i stopped.
ok, so so far I am only a few chapters in, and the author has created a scenario in the beginning that makes no sense, maybe some of it will make sense later, but expect to have no clue what is happening for the first few chapters. So far though, my biggest issue, is that the Author does not know male from female. Dora is a females name, but is used as a males name here. Hope is a females name, but is used as a males name here. I can only assume this will be a rolling theme throughout this book where I will have no clue who is male or female unless pronouns are used, unless the author also has typos for pronouns further confusing the audience🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️ Just wanted to let everyone know before reading🤦♂️ so prepare yourself🤦♂️
havent read it but from the description and reviews it seems good but it's also neglected and not very popular and the concept seems unique
It's an outstanding read, and I highly recommend it. The storyline is captivating, filled with intrigue, and keeps you entertained throughout.
🌟 Review: "Perfect Avatar" 🌟 As an avid reader of fantasy novels, I was thrilled to stumble upon "Perfect Avatar" and let me tell you, it's an absolute gem in the sea of fantasy literature. With its gripping plot, well-developed characters, and intricate world-building, it's a must-read for any fantasy enthusiast. Trust me, you won't be able to put it down!
The world building is huge not only that the characters are very unique they perfectly fit in the story I'm a fan of this author From now
Edit after 186 chapters. I'm sad to see that this book shows the real problem with webnovel. How the f is this that unpopular? there is a real work on the scenario and it keeps surprising me. I've seen some novel skyrocket with plot repetition or blank characters or op mc and that's it, I'm really impressed how great book like this can exist and be neglected.
no cliche, no useless character, no useless fan service, the most original concept of system, fantastic lore, sick foreshadowing. this isn't a book this is art👌️
When you think it can't get better volumme 5 comes and punch you in the guts. You should had an emotional tag for real my sanity is broken now
Defition of "Keep reading it gets better." this is by far the best novel I've read, coming from a RR veteran this right here is everything i like. the emotional build up is bae, the characters are nom, the foreshadowing man. How come this story isn't famous? The concept of the system is great and original, the lore of you know what is great 5/5 and i forgive you for keeping me awake at 3 am even though I have work tomorow
I'm really invested now, I've never seen a story with such a detailed background, good jobs with characters, intelligent writing, every detail is important and I'm scared of something terrible happening to some of them. I want to read more of this. Not saying that this is the best serie, but there's something about the dialogue that make them feel really living. The MC isn't the only gray character in my opinion, everyone has a double mentality No one is good or bad, for now at least, and even tho I spoiled myself with the technical sheet I'm really enjoying myself here. Best MC ever here
My impression throught the reading: chap 1-20 🤔 chap 21-51 😎 chap 52-64 🏆🚀 chap 65-74 🥇👑 chap 75-90 😱💘🍷 chap 91-99 🤗💞 chap 100 👁️👄👁️ chap 101-103 🙂 chap 104-107 😵💫😱😱😵💫😱 chap 108 😍🚀 chap 109+ 😱😨🤬😍😶😐😬😧🤦♂️😭 Edit: I'm 32 and I've never cried for a book, congrat for achieving this feat