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this is one of the best celestial beings story I've read thank you author ❤️
Need to word things differently in order for it to make more sense but otherwise it’s a really good story[img=update]
Ahhhhhhhhhh, I never realized the two books I'm reading are of the same author. No wonder they are both so good.❤️❤️❤️
I absolutely love this book 🤩 MC are amazing and The way the author describes the development of the main character's feelings is really great . (sly, cunning, cruer, super sexy and much more😉) you can find everything here 🤩 I'm just greedy(and reading too fast📖😉) and I wish new chapters were added faster. I recommend this book to everyone, author is amazing and doing fantastic work 😍🤩
the writing quality is good enough to understand so not too much trouble. the rest def makes you for it. i love the sassy shen yuan. so good .
wonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderful
It’s interesting so far! I’m a huge fan of plots with found families and children so I am enjoying the journey so far. I recommend this if your are looking for something more linear in terms of plot. It is not complex and easier to follow compared to other transmigration novels.
I would like to say that this story does not got me going as much as it did however it got me really interested in the story and the characters. They are interesting enough and I love the setting itself,which seems to have a pretty good future in itself. It also helps that the ABO world is not as cliché as I tought it would be.Although the characters can be seen as a little overpowered it is still pretty entertaining. The writing is decent tough it could ve been little more refined but thats just me being extra. Overall I'am happy I gave this story a try. A light read, but that is what I'am personnaly looking for in a first place in QT. I would say the only thing annoying me is the trope of miscomunication within a couple but then again it is everywhere and I can see the purpose of it in this storyline.
Not a bad beginning, fast paced enough to draw you in but not sloppily done. The characters are cute. It may seem a bit predictable when it comes to the main family of three but the side characters and villains offer enough hope that the entire plot will not be so predictable.
This a pretty funny and refreshing story 😂 Suki's personality definitely gives the male lead a headache (which he totally deserves it, not gonna lie). Looking forward to the story development.
humor and potential romantic tension between the characters, as well as some comedic misunderstandings, although you should work on minimizing the blurb a bit it will look more professional that way
what's not yo love about this superb (het it... nudge nudge) story! it's very well written!
It's really an awesome novel. I only read a few chapters but it's really nice.its really a page turning book.highly recommended .everyone must read it.i will keep reading it .
I like Suki and I think your precise descriptions are superb, I admit I was hooked right away. Keep up the good work author because I look forward to reading more.
Hello!!!Congratulation for your new work!I will definetely support you throughout this journey and wish you best!👍Keep going!
giving my work a 5 star review, because why not! Welcome to my second book and the start of The Dangerous Omega series! I hope you all like the start of the comedic and sexy duo of awakeners in this universe!
I like animals hahaha so a spirit fox is counted! What can I say, the originality of this book is superb! I can't imagine what is going on in the author's mind to create something as beautiful as this. Webnovel should have more original stories like this.
Now, this is what I call exciting and unique. It is not always that you will find a plot and characters like this in Webnovel. So for me, it is quite exciting. But I just hope to read more chapters. I know it is a new book and I will wait.
this story is great, the details of this story is insane. so far, this was the second book I read that I can say, you gave the efforts in making the details.
If I transmigrated like this, I would over the moon. Yuki is one lucky fox to live like that. Ahhhhhh now I am wishing the same for me🤣
I love everything about this story. Highly recommended. Thanks for making us explore your unique imaginations.
This novel is hilarious and very well written! I was laughing at every chapter but at the same time, I feel that there is something more to Master Bai's feelings which I couldn't wait to read. I can feel that this proud man has a soft heart that he is hiding or so I wish! HAHAHA! And I hope he will show that to Suki and make him fall in love with him. I just couldn't wait for all the juicy things that will happen in their future!
This tale takes a unique spin on the trope of celestial beings inhabiting human bodies, resulting in a hilarious and surprisingly heartwarming story. The plot follows the celestial fox, known for his witty and mischievous nature, as he transmigrates into the body of an omega named Shen Yuan. Shen Yuan's life is already complicated, with a seemingly aloof husband, Bai Ting Feng, who has never shown much interest in him. However, when the fox takes control of Shen Yuan's body, the dynamics in their relationship take an unexpected turn.
this is one of the best celestial beings story I've read thank you author ❤️
Need to word things differently in order for it to make more sense but otherwise it’s a really good story[img=update]
Ahhhhhhhhhh, I never realized the two books I'm reading are of the same author. No wonder they are both so good.❤️❤️❤️
I absolutely love this book 🤩 MC are amazing and The way the author describes the development of the main character's feelings is really great . (sly, cunning, cruer, super sexy and much more😉) you can find everything here 🤩 I'm just greedy(and reading too fast📖😉) and I wish new chapters were added faster. I recommend this book to everyone, author is amazing and doing fantastic work 😍🤩
the writing quality is good enough to understand so not too much trouble. the rest def makes you for it. i love the sassy shen yuan. so good .
wonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderfulwonderful
It’s interesting so far! I’m a huge fan of plots with found families and children so I am enjoying the journey so far. I recommend this if your are looking for something more linear in terms of plot. It is not complex and easier to follow compared to other transmigration novels.
I would like to say that this story does not got me going as much as it did however it got me really interested in the story and the characters. They are interesting enough and I love the setting itself,which seems to have a pretty good future in itself. It also helps that the ABO world is not as cliché as I tought it would be.Although the characters can be seen as a little overpowered it is still pretty entertaining. The writing is decent tough it could ve been little more refined but thats just me being extra. Overall I'am happy I gave this story a try. A light read, but that is what I'am personnaly looking for in a first place in QT. I would say the only thing annoying me is the trope of miscomunication within a couple but then again it is everywhere and I can see the purpose of it in this storyline.
Not a bad beginning, fast paced enough to draw you in but not sloppily done. The characters are cute. It may seem a bit predictable when it comes to the main family of three but the side characters and villains offer enough hope that the entire plot will not be so predictable.
This a pretty funny and refreshing story 😂 Suki's personality definitely gives the male lead a headache (which he totally deserves it, not gonna lie). Looking forward to the story development.
humor and potential romantic tension between the characters, as well as some comedic misunderstandings, although you should work on minimizing the blurb a bit it will look more professional that way
what's not yo love about this superb (het it... nudge nudge) story! it's very well written!
It's really an awesome novel. I only read a few chapters but it's really nice.its really a page turning book.highly recommended .everyone must read it.i will keep reading it .
I like Suki and I think your precise descriptions are superb, I admit I was hooked right away. Keep up the good work author because I look forward to reading more.
Hello!!!Congratulation for your new work!I will definetely support you throughout this journey and wish you best!👍Keep going!
giving my work a 5 star review, because why not! Welcome to my second book and the start of The Dangerous Omega series! I hope you all like the start of the comedic and sexy duo of awakeners in this universe!
I like animals hahaha so a spirit fox is counted! What can I say, the originality of this book is superb! I can't imagine what is going on in the author's mind to create something as beautiful as this. Webnovel should have more original stories like this.
Now, this is what I call exciting and unique. It is not always that you will find a plot and characters like this in Webnovel. So for me, it is quite exciting. But I just hope to read more chapters. I know it is a new book and I will wait.
this story is great, the details of this story is insane. so far, this was the second book I read that I can say, you gave the efforts in making the details.
If I transmigrated like this, I would over the moon. Yuki is one lucky fox to live like that. Ahhhhhh now I am wishing the same for me🤣
I love everything about this story. Highly recommended. Thanks for making us explore your unique imaginations.
This novel is hilarious and very well written! I was laughing at every chapter but at the same time, I feel that there is something more to Master Bai's feelings which I couldn't wait to read. I can feel that this proud man has a soft heart that he is hiding or so I wish! HAHAHA! And I hope he will show that to Suki and make him fall in love with him. I just couldn't wait for all the juicy things that will happen in their future!
This tale takes a unique spin on the trope of celestial beings inhabiting human bodies, resulting in a hilarious and surprisingly heartwarming story. The plot follows the celestial fox, known for his witty and mischievous nature, as he transmigrates into the body of an omega named Shen Yuan. Shen Yuan's life is already complicated, with a seemingly aloof husband, Bai Ting Feng, who has never shown much interest in him. However, when the fox takes control of Shen Yuan's body, the dynamics in their relationship take an unexpected turn.