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A good read with an engaging and captivating story. You are always kept wondering what happens next, and what things our MC may come up with.The MC is quite immature, but he is growing through hardship, and seems to have quite the nack for 'hunting' people.As he is too young, there are no girls in sight, aside from the hot receptionist who seems to be quite warm with him, probably due to sympathy, sadly.All i hope is that her and the women he meets will be honorable and not played by others, or players themselves.Other than that, MC really needs to grow up, as he is in all views, a child, so it might take a while for the 'action' to start due to the current plot progression.Still, give it one read and by the time you know it, you'd have caught up and asking for more.
this novel is amazing the star's here are not enough to rate how good enough it is. keep up the good work going author pls don't drop can't wait for more episodes 😁✌️.
i don't know if it's gonna be better but, mc doesn't use the system full potential, just farm skill point and i think he should be stronger than he is.
The concept is very interesting and good, it's just that mc(author) is not creative enough to utilise the system to it's fullest potential it gets too boring after some time, and that with a not too interesting mc ,who is also a little dumb ,it just feels too much like a chore to read. Like he goes to the underground battle arena to gain fighting experience only to use his speed skill to defeat the enemy instantly...umm excuse me sir but what kind of battle experience are you gaining out of this?to be a food delivery rider fighting against time? or what? oh did i mention he is a blank minded person with no creativity ? like all of his ideas for skills are from the animes or manga or novels he has read before reincarnation. Then comes the vague system. Like no really this thing is a little too vague to be understood. what determines the cost of a skill? is it the function ? or is it the current use requirements ? why is it that skills can't be edited once they are acquired by the mc? why is the cost of some skills too high while some are too low? like an ability to phase through literal walls is not that good for it to be expensive ? it's just too damn boring and lack of creativity is very evident .
So, I'm here giving 4 stars. I started reading this novel because of the free chapters and to be honest I was intrigued by the idea of the MC creating his own abilities. Well, what can I say, this part that should be the most important is poorly used, very poorly. The mc creates many skills which are quite weak and useless in the future, can he upgrade then? Yes, he can, but he will have to pay more to be able to do it. Things like he doesn't have an affinity for mana, a smart MC would create a skill that would help him have an affinity, he doesn't. Or an inventory, he could create a simple one but he doesn't, he could create a resistance one since he made an agility skill that he basically uses once and his resistance is almost completely depleted, but he doesn't create it and he gets exhausted in fights. And yes, although some skills are expensive, the author already stated by the system that the mc could limit the skills with cooldown or something to make them cheaper, but no, the mc prefers to create stupid skills instead of good ones with some limits that will be better. Now about MC himself, he is from the earth, he died and was transmigrated into a slave boy, now don't think that because he is an adult in a boy's body he will act like an adult, because we won't. If I didn't know he was transmigrated I would have thought he was just another kid, because he acts like one, it doesn't seem like he's an adult, he screams out of nowhere, he has anger issues, he doesn't know how to think straight, he believes very easily in strange people, doesn't know how to create good skills (even when he read a lot of novels in his past life and watched a lot of anime), he basically acts like a child, so if you think that somewhere in the chapters up to 109 (the one I stopped) he will act like an adult, sorry, but he won't. The world building is very good, you het hooked up very easily on it because the author knows how to make a good pace. The updates are good, there is good story development that makes you wondering what is going to happen next. The thing that i like the most was the secondary characters, the author nailed that part. They are not bland, or just there to fill an empty space, no, each one has their own personalities, likes and dislikes, etc, its very good (i think the author forgot about the unofficial members hahaha) Overall I liked it, I was really captured in this novel, and i recommend giving a chance
It’s good overall but the series is way too slow paced I can’t pay for 100 ch and barely anything has happened nor are there any signs of going to the academy but the biggest flaw is that there isn’t a proper division between ranks you haven’t mentioned if it would take 5 rank 1’s to beat a rank 2 or vice versa so I don’t feel the acomplishment when he kills a higher rank honestly it doesn’t have much impact without proper context from ch 1-120
Good one but mc is little dumb and the author really doesn't listen to comments of readers it's skill creation novel so listening to readers help the author to know more about skills . And mc needs a reality check because he is really carefree he needs to be cautious and create some skills for emergency danger and stop creating skill only in mid battles or something and prepare skill for upcoming battle.
the MC is an idiot, he try to act funny but its just embarassing, honestly it just look like the MC is a kid like literaly
An idiot of the best quality mixed with and arrogant system. So many limiters on creating skills that a an steel rod seems more flexible. Childish at best..
The MC is quite immature, but it's not to the point of becoming too annoying, instead that make MC have a lot of room for Character Development. Overall a Good Read, or else I won't give this all five stars 🤩🌠🌟✨🌠🌟🤩
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review until chap 17Story is going good with mc having op skill but hope author Don't make him too much stronger or weaker.mc is well an average Joe type and nothing much to complain from me as i am enjoying it.writing quality is also simple and easy to read and update is also good.looking forward to adventures mc going to experience .
Nice story. Every chapter is satisfying. But there is ont thing thats bad and that is very less chapters atm. please update more [img=update][img=update]
Author here. First of all, I appreciate all the reviews and comments that readers give me. You can be as honest as you want and say whatever you feel about the novel. Depending on what you say, I will try to improve and correct my novel so that it may become something that all of you can enjoy. In the end, your satisfaction is all that matters to me. I will try to upload at least 10 chapters a week as I'm still a newbie, and hopefully get my novel contracted. Support me with votes and reviews so I can always be motivated to write more. Thank you! ^^
Very nice start. Please keep on uploading more chapter, the more the better. Your cliffhangers makes me want to read the next chapter, but knowing that it's the last chapter with no update makes me feel.....ugh.I'll keep on supporting you Author. Make the best novel possibly ;>
This story has a lot of promise. There's great writing, interesting characters, and a whole magical world this writer has to offer. Anyone into fantasy and anime, I really recommend you go read this now.
If the fantasy world would be the the world we live in then I'd probably choose to be Felix. Writing quality superb. Plot development awesome. I want to find out how the story unfolds so keep the good work author.
Everything is Describe is a nice manner starting from the Story, inner emotions , Inner thoughts and Conversations a well off Balanced Novel . Best of Luck !
The story has great potential! The way the author plans the situations is very good and he always ends the chapters on cliffhangers, in a way to keep the story interesting. Even my initial concerns, particularly with the MC backstory, were resolved later. Therefore, keep writing and improving!
This was a fun read and really gets you to expect more at the end of every chapter. Really gets you at the end of your seat. Hope to have more chapters soon!
Honestly speaking as an Author. I see a lot of great potential in this work. Keep up the good work. Author.i love this story and your cliffhangers.
Fantasy books are always good to go with. The writing quality is good and story seems pretty interesting. Anyone who loves fantasy should give this book a try.
A good read with an engaging and captivating story. You are always kept wondering what happens next, and what things our MC may come up with.The MC is quite immature, but he is growing through hardship, and seems to have quite the nack for 'hunting' people.As he is too young, there are no girls in sight, aside from the hot receptionist who seems to be quite warm with him, probably due to sympathy, sadly.All i hope is that her and the women he meets will be honorable and not played by others, or players themselves.Other than that, MC really needs to grow up, as he is in all views, a child, so it might take a while for the 'action' to start due to the current plot progression.Still, give it one read and by the time you know it, you'd have caught up and asking for more.
this novel is amazing the star's here are not enough to rate how good enough it is. keep up the good work going author pls don't drop can't wait for more episodes 😁✌️.
i don't know if it's gonna be better but, mc doesn't use the system full potential, just farm skill point and i think he should be stronger than he is.
The concept is very interesting and good, it's just that mc(author) is not creative enough to utilise the system to it's fullest potential it gets too boring after some time, and that with a not too interesting mc ,who is also a little dumb ,it just feels too much like a chore to read. Like he goes to the underground battle arena to gain fighting experience only to use his speed skill to defeat the enemy instantly...umm excuse me sir but what kind of battle experience are you gaining out of this?to be a food delivery rider fighting against time? or what? oh did i mention he is a blank minded person with no creativity ? like all of his ideas for skills are from the animes or manga or novels he has read before reincarnation. Then comes the vague system. Like no really this thing is a little too vague to be understood. what determines the cost of a skill? is it the function ? or is it the current use requirements ? why is it that skills can't be edited once they are acquired by the mc? why is the cost of some skills too high while some are too low? like an ability to phase through literal walls is not that good for it to be expensive ? it's just too damn boring and lack of creativity is very evident .
So, I'm here giving 4 stars. I started reading this novel because of the free chapters and to be honest I was intrigued by the idea of the MC creating his own abilities. Well, what can I say, this part that should be the most important is poorly used, very poorly. The mc creates many skills which are quite weak and useless in the future, can he upgrade then? Yes, he can, but he will have to pay more to be able to do it. Things like he doesn't have an affinity for mana, a smart MC would create a skill that would help him have an affinity, he doesn't. Or an inventory, he could create a simple one but he doesn't, he could create a resistance one since he made an agility skill that he basically uses once and his resistance is almost completely depleted, but he doesn't create it and he gets exhausted in fights. And yes, although some skills are expensive, the author already stated by the system that the mc could limit the skills with cooldown or something to make them cheaper, but no, the mc prefers to create stupid skills instead of good ones with some limits that will be better. Now about MC himself, he is from the earth, he died and was transmigrated into a slave boy, now don't think that because he is an adult in a boy's body he will act like an adult, because we won't. If I didn't know he was transmigrated I would have thought he was just another kid, because he acts like one, it doesn't seem like he's an adult, he screams out of nowhere, he has anger issues, he doesn't know how to think straight, he believes very easily in strange people, doesn't know how to create good skills (even when he read a lot of novels in his past life and watched a lot of anime), he basically acts like a child, so if you think that somewhere in the chapters up to 109 (the one I stopped) he will act like an adult, sorry, but he won't. The world building is very good, you het hooked up very easily on it because the author knows how to make a good pace. The updates are good, there is good story development that makes you wondering what is going to happen next. The thing that i like the most was the secondary characters, the author nailed that part. They are not bland, or just there to fill an empty space, no, each one has their own personalities, likes and dislikes, etc, its very good (i think the author forgot about the unofficial members hahaha) Overall I liked it, I was really captured in this novel, and i recommend giving a chance
It’s good overall but the series is way too slow paced I can’t pay for 100 ch and barely anything has happened nor are there any signs of going to the academy but the biggest flaw is that there isn’t a proper division between ranks you haven’t mentioned if it would take 5 rank 1’s to beat a rank 2 or vice versa so I don’t feel the acomplishment when he kills a higher rank honestly it doesn’t have much impact without proper context from ch 1-120
Good one but mc is little dumb and the author really doesn't listen to comments of readers it's skill creation novel so listening to readers help the author to know more about skills . And mc needs a reality check because he is really carefree he needs to be cautious and create some skills for emergency danger and stop creating skill only in mid battles or something and prepare skill for upcoming battle.
the MC is an idiot, he try to act funny but its just embarassing, honestly it just look like the MC is a kid like literaly
An idiot of the best quality mixed with and arrogant system. So many limiters on creating skills that a an steel rod seems more flexible. Childish at best..
The MC is quite immature, but it's not to the point of becoming too annoying, instead that make MC have a lot of room for Character Development. Overall a Good Read, or else I won't give this all five stars 🤩🌠🌟✨🌠🌟🤩
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review until chap 17Story is going good with mc having op skill but hope author Don't make him too much stronger or weaker.mc is well an average Joe type and nothing much to complain from me as i am enjoying it.writing quality is also simple and easy to read and update is also good.looking forward to adventures mc going to experience .
Nice story. Every chapter is satisfying. But there is ont thing thats bad and that is very less chapters atm. please update more [img=update][img=update]
Author here. First of all, I appreciate all the reviews and comments that readers give me. You can be as honest as you want and say whatever you feel about the novel. Depending on what you say, I will try to improve and correct my novel so that it may become something that all of you can enjoy. In the end, your satisfaction is all that matters to me. I will try to upload at least 10 chapters a week as I'm still a newbie, and hopefully get my novel contracted. Support me with votes and reviews so I can always be motivated to write more. Thank you! ^^
Very nice start. Please keep on uploading more chapter, the more the better. Your cliffhangers makes me want to read the next chapter, but knowing that it's the last chapter with no update makes me feel.....ugh.I'll keep on supporting you Author. Make the best novel possibly ;>
This story has a lot of promise. There's great writing, interesting characters, and a whole magical world this writer has to offer. Anyone into fantasy and anime, I really recommend you go read this now.
If the fantasy world would be the the world we live in then I'd probably choose to be Felix. Writing quality superb. Plot development awesome. I want to find out how the story unfolds so keep the good work author.
Everything is Describe is a nice manner starting from the Story, inner emotions , Inner thoughts and Conversations a well off Balanced Novel . Best of Luck !
The story has great potential! The way the author plans the situations is very good and he always ends the chapters on cliffhangers, in a way to keep the story interesting. Even my initial concerns, particularly with the MC backstory, were resolved later. Therefore, keep writing and improving!
This was a fun read and really gets you to expect more at the end of every chapter. Really gets you at the end of your seat. Hope to have more chapters soon!
Honestly speaking as an Author. I see a lot of great potential in this work. Keep up the good work. Author.i love this story and your cliffhangers.
Fantasy books are always good to go with. The writing quality is good and story seems pretty interesting. Anyone who loves fantasy should give this book a try.