Spirit Fox in MHA

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redblue

At least it not yuri for once, And I just hope she doesn’t go with Deku or Bakugo.

LV 14

Argent_Evergarden1

HONEST REVIEW!! Currently on chap.17 Amazing. that was my first thought when I read this story. I figured it would be a typical op mc Bnha fic where the mc is op and is either a vigilante before becoming a hero or an edgy mc who is a hero with twisted views and forces people to change. But no this story was completely diffrent. The mc gets Ahri’s powers with small changes The mc’s world view is diffrent compared to other people’s story’s and the author does an amazing job at subtly showing the reader how the mc see’s the world of hero’s. The mc create a book on her opinion of Good and Evil/Hero’s and Villans and throughout the story you can see how said book changed the world with people like Izuku being a tiny bit more confident in themselfs to villans being effected by it. The author shows small quotes from the book in the begining of some chapters so you understand why people have changed the way they did. The author gave other characters there own thoughts on many subjects while also staying true to there cannon characters. The fight scenes are well done and detailed very well. Now the negative. There is an villan character made into the story to counter the mc the same way Joker is to Batman. Now this can be fine if done well but since they were just introduced as of chapters 14-16 I cannot say much. I’m hoping that there won’t be many op villans to counter the mc but I will have an open mind. Overall I love this story and it has so much potential so give it a try.

LV 4

Grumper

Author review. Very shameless. This is my first attempt at writing a fanfiction and this process is to teach me 3 things that I want to improve in my writing. -writing a female character,-setting/worldbuilding,-combat writing I would love feedback on these things more than anything. Lastly, I do not own the art for the cover art. Artist is in the description, I tried to contact them, and if requested will change the art. Thanks,Grumper

LV 10

Celene_Anguiano

Beautiful work. Looking forward to more. The author is really good. Love their character. Hopefully, they can update another chapter soon for this story.