the monarch

LV 2

Zetronys

Hello, this is my first comment on my novel, I'm going to redo the first 3 chapters, they are in a much lower quality, please don't give up before them

LV 10

pastlife_me

This book successfully bridges the gap between entertainment and profundity. It is a gripping narrative filled with multidimensional characters that the reader cannot help but root for. The plot unravels with surprising twists and heartwarming moments that keep the reader engrossed till the very end. The author's command over language enhances the storytelling, creating vivid imagery and stirring emotions. The characters' evolution feels authentic, reflecting the complexities of real-life relationships. Moreover, the book explores meaningful themes with subtlety and depth, making the reader pause and reflect. It's a seamless blend of impactful storytelling and intellectual stimulation, undoubtedly meriting a 5-star rating.

LV 4

Rin_Nurnia

First of all, you can write your author's notes at the end of the chapter or there's a section for it since I expected to get into the story once I opened the chapter. Secondly, there were few of grammars mistakes which I pointed out in the comments section so I hope that could help. I suggest you to proofread again since there were some confusion, imo.

LV 11

Rahul_Verma_9515

Your novel is ok. I think for a 19-20 yr to write his first novel and be better than most others out there is very good. But truthfully I felt the novel still has many flaws in logic and what you wanted to deliver was not presented as such. I have even written some flaws in logic that I saw in your novel and ignored many others as I was lazy to write more comments. But I hope this helps you better yourself.

LV 4

DARK_DEKU

Nice book with nice chapters please keep it up because the book is 😃

LV 1

coco1193

The book brims with immense potential, captivating the reader with its well-executed time skips that are both coherent and comprehensible. Nonetheless, I recommend keeping an eye out for a few minor grammatical errors that can be easily rectified. Your talent as an author shines through, and I encourage you to persist in your excellent work!

LV 14

Gabrielle_Johnson_6482

I’ve just started this book but so far it has a strong beginning. The pace is good and apart from a few minor grammatical errors the writing quality is also solid. Will await more chapters!

LV 3

revolt_027

took a while but finally got to the storyline an gotta say loving it so far has most of my favourite elements , katanas an a austerem mc, author dont you dare drop this i can't support you with golden tickets currently but you can get my stones.keep it up

LV 4

mahi_bur

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LV 2

luwanipixie

I feel the first and second chapters are written very differently from the otheers I also feel you might wantt to improve the world setting Overall I love your storyline and I kno wit's going to be a really great book at the end of the day.......Keep on writing!!!!

LV 4

Met_The_Cool_Man8

Just found this novel and I'm loving it, It has great potential to be a long lasting novel just hope the author doesn't drop it.

LV 4

ISHAN_MISRA

idk why am so invested in this novel and wrote too many comments than normal . Novel is still have baked though from my reading experience (read till 119). If author is interested I would like to have a conversation with u

LV 2

Aidan_Grey

The writing style is easy to follow, and the pacing is just right. The author has also done an excellent job of setting the tone of the story, making it both emotional and thought-provoking i like the unique plot and characters.

Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?

LV 2

B_l_a_n_k_2167

I liked the way you are writing your novel. And it is simplified. And your novel chapters contain good amount of words which I personally like more about a novel. It has great potential too. I wish to see the world background more detailed it will surely put some life into the novel.