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In writing comedy is not easy to pull off. The author clearly has this aspect mastered. My only gripe is how he is doing wandless magic, then just combined magic. Wands are a big part of Harry potter lore and while wandless magic for relatively simple stuff is possible for powerful wizards like Dumbles and voldy, they still rely on their wands. So whenever any fanfics put in their mc doing wandless magic while still in their school days ( i remember there was a next level fic where the mc was four or five years old and wandlessly did patronous charm. lol) it just breaks the immersion for me, being a huge potterhead and all. Still excluding that the story is funny.
Alright, this ff is hilarious!! Love the MC, the interactions between him and the rest of the characters are all incredibly addicting and the humor is top tear!!
this is actually funny and entertaining, the plot is good and the mc is made OP in a good way.
Freaking good story it has it all comedy, teasing, craziness, some slight AU that it maintains some degree of mystery and freshness. The only *bad* part is the scarcity of updates, tough that could also be related to the good quality of the chapters.
Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
This book is one of the best reads I have come across in a long time. Every single chapter was beautifully portrayed, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was completely captivated by the story from the very beginning.
Excellent.Thought it will be a random wish fulfillment bit I struck gold .Wonderful development Glorious .PRAISE THE SUN
………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..……………….. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH HAHAHAHA 😂😂😂
this some good stuff. smore please!---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
hilarious, i just loved it, i started reading it out of curiosity, but it was so much fun i just burst out laughing, please, keep going. ......,..........................
Pretty funny, seems a difficult thing to write though, i wish you the best of luck for trying tho, it's definitely an interesting read.......................................................
In writing comedy is not easy to pull off. The author clearly has this aspect mastered. My only gripe is how he is doing wandless magic, then just combined magic. Wands are a big part of Harry potter lore and while wandless magic for relatively simple stuff is possible for powerful wizards like Dumbles and voldy, they still rely on their wands. So whenever any fanfics put in their mc doing wandless magic while still in their school days ( i remember there was a next level fic where the mc was four or five years old and wandlessly did patronous charm. lol) it just breaks the immersion for me, being a huge potterhead and all. Still excluding that the story is funny.
Alright, this ff is hilarious!! Love the MC, the interactions between him and the rest of the characters are all incredibly addicting and the humor is top tear!!
this is actually funny and entertaining, the plot is good and the mc is made OP in a good way.
Freaking good story it has it all comedy, teasing, craziness, some slight AU that it maintains some degree of mystery and freshness. The only *bad* part is the scarcity of updates, tough that could also be related to the good quality of the chapters.
Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………Tryly hilarious and diserving of power stones.…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
This book is one of the best reads I have come across in a long time. Every single chapter was beautifully portrayed, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I was completely captivated by the story from the very beginning.
Excellent.Thought it will be a random wish fulfillment bit I struck gold .Wonderful development Glorious .PRAISE THE SUN
………………..………………..………………..………………..………………..……………….. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH HAHAHAHA 😂😂😂
this some good stuff. smore please!---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
hilarious, i just loved it, i started reading it out of curiosity, but it was so much fun i just burst out laughing, please, keep going. ......,..........................
Pretty funny, seems a difficult thing to write though, i wish you the best of luck for trying tho, it's definitely an interesting read.......................................................