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By Order of the Yarl, you are to read this Book, donate your powerstones and become a fan no questions asked, you are dismissed. Shameless Author : BIG BAD WOLF
C'est vrai une très bonne histoire je ne regrette pas de l'avoir lu mais au contraire j'aimerais le lire d'avantage, c'est désormais mon livre préféré et bonne continuation à l'auteur vous avez tout mon soutien. J'adore le fait que le personnage principal accompli ces ambitions sont forcément être ni du côté du bien ou de celui du mal, le fait qu'il ne soit pas un personnage avec le syndrome du sauveur comme tout ces autres livres est vraiment formidable. [img=recommend]
I enjoy the plot and concept, but the execution and details are sparse. It would be best to add more details on the process and how magic works and whatnot. Right now, the novel just looks like a rough draft of the plot that you came up with and decided that it was good enough.
Love the story, Creative way to deliver a fantasy world to the readers, writer is improving his writing after every chapter, if you read this comment just give this story a chance it's a hidden Gem
lovely little story but still stuck at chapter 58 for months now, this review will be updated when our dear AUTHOR choses to start uploading. Also if you have any details that could be used to contact the author please share, i hope the lad hasn't gotten got.
I like the concept of the story but the execution is quite bad.The pacing is too fast. The author doesn't add enough detail to make anything actually Impact me and because of this the story is like a huge info dump. It would have been much better if the author to the time to add more detail and flesh out the scenes properly so it doesn't feel hollow.
Its good so far, but i was wondering is there going to ge be a connection between elder scrolls and our mc. Especially due to the daedra reference.
I've been looking for this kind of novel after reading Custom madedemon king in 2018.I really like the concept of an abbysal MC going for universal domination
Interesting story so far. BTW is there a fixed release schedule or you post randomly?
if only you could summon goblins like mordor or overlord in the lord of the rings (for example, the souls of the creatures you kill, or using their bodies as soldiers, workers, blacksmiths, scientists, commanders, sorcerers ?
Already seems better to me and I have only read the first chapter im just thankful that the mc wasn’t some angsty teenager that had everything in life go wrong like every other Webnovel
Thank you guys for your support, I have finally signed a contract with Webnovel, your messages of motivation are what keeps me going hope you like my book
I discover this amazing book.. i was hypnotized by the succesion of the events in the story..very interesting and captivating and it seems that the author has a lot to share With his readers..it really worth it
This is an interesting novel, love the author’s way of description and it also have a nice pacing.
Intrigued by the theme of reincarnation, I embarked on a literary journey like no other. From the very first pages, I found myself captivated, unable to break free from its allure. This novel has successfully hooked me, and I can't help but be drawn further into its depths. I eagerly await the unfolding of the story, as I sense an enthralling adventure ahead. Bravo to the author for crafting such an engaging tale that has me eager to stick around for more.
Very interesting novel Author writed it perfectly characters are wroted perfectly love your work keep writing excited to read more chapters 👍👍
The story itself is good, the male character is awesome, he manages with the little he has. The few things I noticed was that the paragraphs were a little bit long, the chapter lengths maybe try writing at least 1k words and above and that there is not much dialogues between the characters. Just change those few things I mentioned and this book will be awesome
This is a good read, and tells a good Fantasy story; however, while I do admit that it is good, there are room for improvements, for instance, there are quite a few places where the sentences are running on too long without stopping, and I realized that there was no dialogue format(For the starting chapters. I see that some was added in the later chapter). Despite my minor complaints, the writing isn't hard to follow and understand. The Story itself was intriguing, and the world + characters as well were established well in the way it flows with the story, giving quite an adventurous tale. I would say that this is worth the read.
Interesting idea with clearly defined characters. The author seems to have a plan, which is always a plus in a novel like this. The writing isn’t difficult to follow and the imagery is distinct in its style. Definitely give it a try!
Certainly an interesting read for those who enjoy fantasy settings, if you fit that category maybe give it a try you might be surprised to find a quite enjoyable story.
Choice of words is quite unique on this platform, but the format of paragraphs doesn’t suit the app because each para is too long… Just shorten them out and everything would be great with the writing. The them is generic, though immersive at the same time. I can tell that this book needs a little polishing in future chapters, and it would become a hidden gem in the future. Better yet, this might give plenty experience to the new author for future works down the line. Keep it up, author!
Good novel with great potential the writing improves every day the male lead seem's rational and doing he's best with what little he has, exited to see where this is going.
Adding my Author review don't mind me, if you want to interact with me please comment on this review or review the novel and I will answer you shortly after
Hey guys so for anyone wondering what deadra , true deadra and high deadra look like I will comment on this with their images that I made
By Order of the Yarl, you are to read this Book, donate your powerstones and become a fan no questions asked, you are dismissed. Shameless Author : BIG BAD WOLF
C'est vrai une très bonne histoire je ne regrette pas de l'avoir lu mais au contraire j'aimerais le lire d'avantage, c'est désormais mon livre préféré et bonne continuation à l'auteur vous avez tout mon soutien. J'adore le fait que le personnage principal accompli ces ambitions sont forcément être ni du côté du bien ou de celui du mal, le fait qu'il ne soit pas un personnage avec le syndrome du sauveur comme tout ces autres livres est vraiment formidable. [img=recommend]
I enjoy the plot and concept, but the execution and details are sparse. It would be best to add more details on the process and how magic works and whatnot. Right now, the novel just looks like a rough draft of the plot that you came up with and decided that it was good enough.
Love the story, Creative way to deliver a fantasy world to the readers, writer is improving his writing after every chapter, if you read this comment just give this story a chance it's a hidden Gem
lovely little story but still stuck at chapter 58 for months now, this review will be updated when our dear AUTHOR choses to start uploading. Also if you have any details that could be used to contact the author please share, i hope the lad hasn't gotten got.
I like the concept of the story but the execution is quite bad.The pacing is too fast. The author doesn't add enough detail to make anything actually Impact me and because of this the story is like a huge info dump. It would have been much better if the author to the time to add more detail and flesh out the scenes properly so it doesn't feel hollow.
Its good so far, but i was wondering is there going to ge be a connection between elder scrolls and our mc. Especially due to the daedra reference.
I've been looking for this kind of novel after reading Custom madedemon king in 2018.I really like the concept of an abbysal MC going for universal domination
Interesting story so far. BTW is there a fixed release schedule or you post randomly?
if only you could summon goblins like mordor or overlord in the lord of the rings (for example, the souls of the creatures you kill, or using their bodies as soldiers, workers, blacksmiths, scientists, commanders, sorcerers ?
Already seems better to me and I have only read the first chapter im just thankful that the mc wasn’t some angsty teenager that had everything in life go wrong like every other Webnovel
Thank you guys for your support, I have finally signed a contract with Webnovel, your messages of motivation are what keeps me going hope you like my book
I discover this amazing book.. i was hypnotized by the succesion of the events in the story..very interesting and captivating and it seems that the author has a lot to share With his readers..it really worth it
This is an interesting novel, love the author’s way of description and it also have a nice pacing.
Intrigued by the theme of reincarnation, I embarked on a literary journey like no other. From the very first pages, I found myself captivated, unable to break free from its allure. This novel has successfully hooked me, and I can't help but be drawn further into its depths. I eagerly await the unfolding of the story, as I sense an enthralling adventure ahead. Bravo to the author for crafting such an engaging tale that has me eager to stick around for more.
Very interesting novel Author writed it perfectly characters are wroted perfectly love your work keep writing excited to read more chapters 👍👍
The story itself is good, the male character is awesome, he manages with the little he has. The few things I noticed was that the paragraphs were a little bit long, the chapter lengths maybe try writing at least 1k words and above and that there is not much dialogues between the characters. Just change those few things I mentioned and this book will be awesome
This is a good read, and tells a good Fantasy story; however, while I do admit that it is good, there are room for improvements, for instance, there are quite a few places where the sentences are running on too long without stopping, and I realized that there was no dialogue format(For the starting chapters. I see that some was added in the later chapter). Despite my minor complaints, the writing isn't hard to follow and understand. The Story itself was intriguing, and the world + characters as well were established well in the way it flows with the story, giving quite an adventurous tale. I would say that this is worth the read.
Interesting idea with clearly defined characters. The author seems to have a plan, which is always a plus in a novel like this. The writing isn’t difficult to follow and the imagery is distinct in its style. Definitely give it a try!
Certainly an interesting read for those who enjoy fantasy settings, if you fit that category maybe give it a try you might be surprised to find a quite enjoyable story.
Choice of words is quite unique on this platform, but the format of paragraphs doesn’t suit the app because each para is too long… Just shorten them out and everything would be great with the writing. The them is generic, though immersive at the same time. I can tell that this book needs a little polishing in future chapters, and it would become a hidden gem in the future. Better yet, this might give plenty experience to the new author for future works down the line. Keep it up, author!
Good novel with great potential the writing improves every day the male lead seem's rational and doing he's best with what little he has, exited to see where this is going.
Adding my Author review don't mind me, if you want to interact with me please comment on this review or review the novel and I will answer you shortly after