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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I'm honestly shocked at how unrecognised this is when novel's with far worse grammar and plot have millions of views. Your writing is a breath of fresh air.
I like how far the story has come, and the direction its going. The only problem is the inconsistent update schedule and scanty amount of chapters.
After reading the last few chapters I can tell that the stories going down a path of constant brawls driving the plot; which I can't say I dislike. This is the first book I've completed since the others all went premium, and I hope we get more chapters soon enough.
This was amazing ngl best story I have ever read in my life hope there will be more updates. This has everything I wanted climax sorrow excitement and so much more THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL (isaac)
The stories progressing alright as far as I've seen, and I'm excited to see where it goes but I feel like there should be more character development. The novel also seems a bit fast paced without any time for me to fully immerse myself into the scene. Other than that it's ok for it being your first published work.
I'm honestly shocked at how unrecognised this is when novel's with far worse grammar and plot have millions of views. Your writing is a breath of fresh air.
I like how far the story has come, and the direction its going. The only problem is the inconsistent update schedule and scanty amount of chapters.
After reading the last few chapters I can tell that the stories going down a path of constant brawls driving the plot; which I can't say I dislike. This is the first book I've completed since the others all went premium, and I hope we get more chapters soon enough.
This was amazing ngl best story I have ever read in my life hope there will be more updates. This has everything I wanted climax sorrow excitement and so much more THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL (isaac)
The stories progressing alright as far as I've seen, and I'm excited to see where it goes but I feel like there should be more character development. The novel also seems a bit fast paced without any time for me to fully immerse myself into the scene. Other than that it's ok for it being your first published work.