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Overall very good story so far, I really like the premise and the way your writing it, I can only hope you haven’t dropped it since its been a while since the last update.
with only 3 chapters, I cannot yet pass judgement. I can however, say that I want more.
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bro u still alive? It has the potential of a good fic, but it has a severe case of no chapters.
LV 4 ![Badge]()
Overall very good story so far, I really like the premise and the way your writing it, I can only hope you haven’t dropped it since its been a while since the last update.
with only 3 chapters, I cannot yet pass judgement. I can however, say that I want more.
bro u still alive? It has the potential of a good fic, but it has a severe case of no chapters.