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I Think it is a very attractive story as MC lived for billions of years but we didn't get to know details about MC background like how he came to exist, how he became so powerful or what about his parents
Beautiful book. Fantastic Plot. wonderful characters. Must read book. The author has amazing imagination and good language. It's a page turner from 1st to last page. In fact, I came to webnovel because of this book. the book is alluring.
Author .... I wrote a review before and stated why I didn't read.. so I came back and read it .. and I'm glad I did 😊 Great novel... I spoke about how he'll be facing face slapping moments left and right and that'll be boring but his personality is different from what I expected ... I expect him to be a push over just because he was indifferent to people's words to him, but man was I wrong .. the way you portrayed him as ignorant which comes off arrogant is amazing.Bro has great come backs too.. he's not dumb .. although I haven't read past 100 chapters to exactly be sure if it's not cliché, his personality is unique and I had a lot of fun read.. I had to stop and give a re-review
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Actually a very nice, chill novel to read. No crazy plot so far just mainly interactions of him exploring new things. Definitely a chill slice of life recommendation.
This book has a great potential I've only read about 30 chapters's so far but it's got a nice comedy and the plot is really good it keeps the audience guessing and not too much face slapping and other cliches
I generally stick to actual books. This story was so good I started using web novel app. Amazing storyline.
A very interesting and great plotting story, Just loved it 💜. Hope to see excitement and more Twisted in the story, So far i found the story to be realistic and not bizarre like other novels.
This is the most interesting and fun thing I've read on webnovel in monts. Author I have a question. Is this a harem or just something like a love triangle
Cinco de los magnates más ricos del mundo llegaron simultáneamente a un distrito azotado por la pobreza, sorprendentemente sólo para visitar a un joven de 20 años. Este joven fue su maestro hace cincuenta años. Inicialmente, estos magnates sólo adquirieron algunos conocimientos rudimentarios de William Johnson, pero eso fue suficiente para convertirlos en líderes en sus respectivos campos. Sin embargo, quedaron atónitos por el rostro eterno de William cuando lo volvieron a ver, ya que no sabían que William Johnson había vivido mil millones de años. No sólo estableció diferentes religiones en todo el mundo, sino que incluso Alejandro Magno fue su alumno. Sin embargo, después de dispersar a los magnates hace cincuenta años, optó por un largo sueño. Pero ahora, William Johnson ha despertado...
Really Good Novel. Highly recommended. Binged through 200 chapters in 2 days... still want more.keep going author.
Nothing much to say, because I'm busy reading, all I'll say is this book is a masterpiece
💎Everything's great this's a gem💎The only problem is that there are not enough chapters!!
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An enthralling saga of the immortal and invincible, this novel not only unraveled a series of grand adventures but also explored the depths of eternity and power with a delicate touch. I couldn’t help but be captivated by the undying characters, whose journeys through ages unearthed narratives so profound and eternal. A brilliant tale that unites invincibility with a heart - a must-read![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A very good novel. I wouldn't make so many young masters but other than that I have been searching for a novel like this (a powerful immortal that has lived for millions of years and have been in contact with every hystorical figure out there) and I finally found this. As I said, a very good novel.
An OP Immortal MC who does not follow the plots and cliches... Definitely worth it
I like this type of novel with an immortal mc who is very old. I can't judge what the novel will be like in the future due to the low number of chapters. Since I'm not very good at writing reviews. So I'm just going to encourage the author to continue his novel which is a very good job, hoping that he won't abandon it because I think it has potential. PS: English is not my mother tongue
The story is well written, easy to read, and can be funny and serious. I was really like the story for the first couple hundred chapters. But I grew tired of MC always not knowing the culture of modern day. This was fine at the start, and he keeps saying he woke up after 50 years and wants to acclimate to today's world. Yet all he does is read old books. He doesn't actually interact much with people and most of it is either them afraid of him or beating someone up... He has a Smartphone but doesn't use at all to learn this modern society, he just sits in his "bookstore" that he got from an old teacher reading. If there was some change over the course the 200+ chapters I would still read.
Spoiler de révélation I Think it is a very attractive story as MC lived for billions of years but we didn't get to know details about MC background like how he came to exist, how he became so powerful or what about his parents
Beautiful book. Fantastic Plot. wonderful characters. Must read book. The author has amazing imagination and good language. It's a page turner from 1st to last page. In fact, I came to webnovel because of this book. the book is alluring.
Author .... I wrote a review before and stated why I didn't read.. so I came back and read it .. and I'm glad I did 😊 Great novel... I spoke about how he'll be facing face slapping moments left and right and that'll be boring but his personality is different from what I expected ... I expect him to be a push over just because he was indifferent to people's words to him, but man was I wrong .. the way you portrayed him as ignorant which comes off arrogant is amazing.Bro has great come backs too.. he's not dumb .. although I haven't read past 100 chapters to exactly be sure if it's not cliché, his personality is unique and I had a lot of fun read.. I had to stop and give a re-review
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Actually a very nice, chill novel to read. No crazy plot so far just mainly interactions of him exploring new things. Definitely a chill slice of life recommendation.
This book has a great potential I've only read about 30 chapters's so far but it's got a nice comedy and the plot is really good it keeps the audience guessing and not too much face slapping and other cliches
I generally stick to actual books. This story was so good I started using web novel app. Amazing storyline.
A very interesting and great plotting story, Just loved it 💜. Hope to see excitement and more Twisted in the story, So far i found the story to be realistic and not bizarre like other novels.
This is the most interesting and fun thing I've read on webnovel in monts. Author I have a question. Is this a harem or just something like a love triangle
Cinco de los magnates más ricos del mundo llegaron simultáneamente a un distrito azotado por la pobreza, sorprendentemente sólo para visitar a un joven de 20 años. Este joven fue su maestro hace cincuenta años. Inicialmente, estos magnates sólo adquirieron algunos conocimientos rudimentarios de William Johnson, pero eso fue suficiente para convertirlos en líderes en sus respectivos campos. Sin embargo, quedaron atónitos por el rostro eterno de William cuando lo volvieron a ver, ya que no sabían que William Johnson había vivido mil millones de años. No sólo estableció diferentes religiones en todo el mundo, sino que incluso Alejandro Magno fue su alumno. Sin embargo, después de dispersar a los magnates hace cincuenta años, optó por un largo sueño. Pero ahora, William Johnson ha despertado...
Really Good Novel. Highly recommended. Binged through 200 chapters in 2 days... still want more.keep going author.
Nothing much to say, because I'm busy reading, all I'll say is this book is a masterpiece
💎Everything's great this's a gem💎The only problem is that there are not enough chapters!!
Spoiler de révélation An enthralling saga of the immortal and invincible, this novel not only unraveled a series of grand adventures but also explored the depths of eternity and power with a delicate touch. I couldn’t help but be captivated by the undying characters, whose journeys through ages unearthed narratives so profound and eternal. A brilliant tale that unites invincibility with a heart - a must-read![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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A very good novel. I wouldn't make so many young masters but other than that I have been searching for a novel like this (a powerful immortal that has lived for millions of years and have been in contact with every hystorical figure out there) and I finally found this. As I said, a very good novel.
An OP Immortal MC who does not follow the plots and cliches... Definitely worth it
I like this type of novel with an immortal mc who is very old. I can't judge what the novel will be like in the future due to the low number of chapters. Since I'm not very good at writing reviews. So I'm just going to encourage the author to continue his novel which is a very good job, hoping that he won't abandon it because I think it has potential. PS: English is not my mother tongue
The story is well written, easy to read, and can be funny and serious. I was really like the story for the first couple hundred chapters. But I grew tired of MC always not knowing the culture of modern day. This was fine at the start, and he keeps saying he woke up after 50 years and wants to acclimate to today's world. Yet all he does is read old books. He doesn't actually interact much with people and most of it is either them afraid of him or beating someone up... He has a Smartphone but doesn't use at all to learn this modern society, he just sits in his "bookstore" that he got from an old teacher reading. If there was some change over the course the 200+ chapters I would still read.
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