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Well written for sure. Unfortunately from what I’ve read so far it does not take place in the pokemon world. Just leaving this in case someone is wondering about that.
It is a story that has potential, setting of events and It leaves a little to be desired, but if you're looking for a Pokemon story with a decent protagonist system, read it, you probably won't regret it.
Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!
Well written for sure. Unfortunately from what I’ve read so far it does not take place in the pokemon world. Just leaving this in case someone is wondering about that.
It is a story that has potential, setting of events and It leaves a little to be desired, but if you're looking for a Pokemon story with a decent protagonist system, read it, you probably won't regret it.
Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!