3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story had an interesting premise and an ok start, but it stopped before it could really get the meat of what's going on. Like, yes, we know that the main character is about to explore the world, but he hasn't reached a point of having a clear goal yet and is still trying to figure stuff out.
Will continue???????¿????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The story had an interesting premise and an ok start, but it stopped before it could really get the meat of what's going on. Like, yes, we know that the main character is about to explore the world, but he hasn't reached a point of having a clear goal yet and is still trying to figure stuff out.
Had promise. ...........................