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Écrire un avisI absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
The author has a good story on his hand right here, really surprising as how good this story is, the world building of the story is not that good but that is only a small thing. Good job Author
The story...the cover...the narrative style.. everything is so addictive. I feel I am reading a seasoned writer's work. Beautiful... I will keep reading... if you are looking for a love story...you make sure you don't miss this amazing story.
everything is nice about the story. nothing over the top and nothing to complain about.[img=update][img=update]
Overall it's a good story,A good one to indulge in, Definitely a good read.*Author,If you read this,I haven't yet reached the Latest chapters but if it hasn't happened yet,Can you make a scene between Emily and Rick finally happen
It gives you exactly what it promises, my only complain is that there are many instances where the characters make stupid and illogical decisions, like buying a bike without asking for the vehicle documents
I'm shocked, what idiots give 5 stars to this third-rate garbage? GG is a stupid vegetable, he can’t think at all, his behavior is like that of an idiot. He is as disgusting as possible, not even a couple of days have passed since he received power, and he has already shown his essence as a scoundrel.
Honestly, the humour is a bit too childish at times and reads like bad CN urban style, while other times just cringe, and the MC has 0 idea about the real world.The rest of the novel is an alright read; it has many similarities with Ero Meter and other novels that made it big in the past.As for the lemons, they have about a 6.5/10 lack of word usage, constantly writing the same thing without switching the vocabulary or descriptions. It wasn't the worst, but some points dragged on and weren't worth the 5 chapter spread.They lacked passion, Clear Visuals, Sounds, and direction, probably down to the author's lack of true experience with women.Overall, though a fun novel with great characters!The writing style needs a lot of work as it's messy, and the constant system screens were slightly dull, not the questions but the constant full status and metre for girls.keep up the good work
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Hi author, your book is very interesting, very hard for people to drop this novel. The more you read the more addicted you become. Keep updating it author.
Oh boy. I am on the 35th chapter, and author has outdone himself. He is really the master[img=recommend]
Its good, really good. Cant even 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. U doing it author. a nice piece u have here and enjoying it. And what a crazy way of getting a system🤣🤣🤣🤣.
just read the first few chapters, and the story is very interesting. [img=update] of these chapters.
Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.
This is one of my favorite novel I am currently reading. The storyline and worldview is really good. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Writing quality is actually pretty good, it's definitely better than some of the books I've seen. The world background hasn't been explored much as the story has mostly been revolving around the protag, I'll assume that's because it's a relatively new book, hence I gave it a 5 for giving's sake...🤷♂️...For character design, it goes into enough details just for one's mind to make it up but not too much that it gets annoying, we all know those books that need jade beauties to describe the women there...😂...For updating stability, that's also pretty good, at least a chapter almost everyday.....That's all that comes to mind I guess, my first review so sorry if it's terrible or not informative enough...🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures. i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures. i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures.
Shameless review from the author. Just enjoy the story and keep on supporting me along the way... Do write comments, vote and send me gifts (The last one if you feel like it).
I absolutely loved this novel so far. It has great potential. I just request the writer to continue writing it. Also, I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
The author has a good story on his hand right here, really surprising as how good this story is, the world building of the story is not that good but that is only a small thing. Good job Author
The story...the cover...the narrative style.. everything is so addictive. I feel I am reading a seasoned writer's work. Beautiful... I will keep reading... if you are looking for a love story...you make sure you don't miss this amazing story.
everything is nice about the story. nothing over the top and nothing to complain about.[img=update][img=update]
Overall it's a good story,A good one to indulge in, Definitely a good read.*Author,If you read this,I haven't yet reached the Latest chapters but if it hasn't happened yet,Can you make a scene between Emily and Rick finally happen
It gives you exactly what it promises, my only complain is that there are many instances where the characters make stupid and illogical decisions, like buying a bike without asking for the vehicle documents
I'm shocked, what idiots give 5 stars to this third-rate garbage? GG is a stupid vegetable, he can’t think at all, his behavior is like that of an idiot. He is as disgusting as possible, not even a couple of days have passed since he received power, and he has already shown his essence as a scoundrel.
Honestly, the humour is a bit too childish at times and reads like bad CN urban style, while other times just cringe, and the MC has 0 idea about the real world.The rest of the novel is an alright read; it has many similarities with Ero Meter and other novels that made it big in the past.As for the lemons, they have about a 6.5/10 lack of word usage, constantly writing the same thing without switching the vocabulary or descriptions. It wasn't the worst, but some points dragged on and weren't worth the 5 chapter spread.They lacked passion, Clear Visuals, Sounds, and direction, probably down to the author's lack of true experience with women.Overall, though a fun novel with great characters!The writing style needs a lot of work as it's messy, and the constant system screens were slightly dull, not the questions but the constant full status and metre for girls.keep up the good work
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Hi author, your book is very interesting, very hard for people to drop this novel. The more you read the more addicted you become. Keep updating it author.
Oh boy. I am on the 35th chapter, and author has outdone himself. He is really the master[img=recommend]
Its good, really good. Cant even 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. U doing it author. a nice piece u have here and enjoying it. And what a crazy way of getting a system🤣🤣🤣🤣.
just read the first few chapters, and the story is very interesting. [img=update] of these chapters.
Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.
This is one of my favorite novel I am currently reading. The storyline and worldview is really good. I will recommend everyone to read this novel.
Writing quality is actually pretty good, it's definitely better than some of the books I've seen. The world background hasn't been explored much as the story has mostly been revolving around the protag, I'll assume that's because it's a relatively new book, hence I gave it a 5 for giving's sake...🤷♂️...For character design, it goes into enough details just for one's mind to make it up but not too much that it gets annoying, we all know those books that need jade beauties to describe the women there...😂...For updating stability, that's also pretty good, at least a chapter almost everyday.....That's all that comes to mind I guess, my first review so sorry if it's terrible or not informative enough...🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures. i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures. i enjoy this novel so far. wish author keep up the good work. i am looking forward to what plan author have in minds for its futures.
Shameless review from the author. Just enjoy the story and keep on supporting me along the way... Do write comments, vote and send me gifts (The last one if you feel like it).