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AMAZING Novel,its a hidden gem,The world building is amazing,The characters have good personalitys.I Really enjoy the novel and recommend it.Thx Author.Please post more when you can.:)
Writing Quality: So loved the plotline, grammar, misuse of past and present tense, and wording errors, as well as sentence structure needs some work. I love the story development I just feel it's moving very fast in the beginning, and a few details are missing that could help clear a lot of confusion. I do however think this would make an amazing webcomic as is! Great job keep up the good work.
So I decided to do a proper review unlike most of the others. Firstly, this feels like one of those shows that has a premise that you fall in love with but is ruined by the dialogue. You see, the author I believe (a bit of an assumption) hasn't wrote a lot of literature before this novel so there are quite a few grammatical errors which turns some whole segments into questionable gibberish that you need to decipher what's happening in the scene.Also, because if the lower quality writing, whenever the author tries a writing technique such as being vague, alluding to a topic or just simply omitting information that will be told later, you can't tell the intention and end up with the author seeming like he just ripped out the paragraph that was meant to explain the plot point.Although I seem to despise this novel, there are also many I aspects I love. Such as the pacing, the ideas(immaculate) and the characters and the different relationships they have and are going to have with eachother. But you see, the other messier parts can't just be ignored just because the story is built of a solid, sound base foundation. The intricacies are too jumbled up from the improper grammar and the quality is only enough for you to barely be able to follow the story. So in my unbiased opinion, this novel will be in the 'good' category if you don't mind grammar but if your enjoyment depends on details and the level of understanding in the different situations you read, you will perish whilst attempting to go through this. And to the author, keep on writing. Improvement will come with time and practice and this is a perfect opportunity for you to do that regardless of whether it's perfect right now. You can always come back and rewrite or correct the mistakes once your even better at writing.
I've finished the prologue, not bad, although a few grammatical erros here and there, the writing style is good, the settings is also unique, especially the plot, anyway i approve it 10/10
The novel is really intriguing and engaging. It contain all the spice to make the reader time worthwhile .
How I want to join Noah in his transmigrated world. I want to see how the story unfolds so keep updating author. I want to drown deeper into this fantasy world.
It started with action right from the first paragraph. I mean, sure, it has some interesting ideas behind it and it has potential too. Only that it is being held back by capitalization, and grammar mistakes though nothing a good editing can't fix. Good luck, author!
Amazing work. I don't read this genre very much but I rhink your book is great.I will keep reading it. It surely is gem. would recommend it to everyone .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Prepare to be mesmerized by the sheer brilliance of the author's writing skills and the intricacy of the world they have masterfully crafted! The world-building in this novel is a testament to the author's boundless creativity and attention to detail.
It's a good novel the mc is likeable the writing quantity could be better. but it isn't awful! awful
10/10. A hidden gem. I already love the way the story is progressing. There are minor spelling mistakes here and there but it is negligible.
Overall its going great but Author needs to check spell mistakes and correct word usage like using cliche where clique is used.cliche means common plot but clique means group of people with same interests
This novel is surely a hidden gem, the world building, characters design everything is good the synopsis is catchy chapters are engaging a good novel indeed✨ keep up the good work author
I really loved the story love the characters development author really got the potential looking forward to read more chapters keep uploading
honestly I really enjoyed the development of the story so far as it's interesting, i hope you keep posting new chapters so I can make a better review posteriorly. constructive criticism however is that you improve grammar as this can interfere with the immersion of the story.
I absolutely love your book; (if you can) please spread the love by checking out my book named Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?! by Xolu.
The grammar mistakes make it a little difficult to read at first, but there are definitely some good ideas and characters here. With a little attention to detail, this novel has some promise! Keep up the good work, author!
I am still learning how to write with trial and errors so in the beginning 50 chapters there will be updating of existing chapter to make it best of my capability, so please support me and point out my mistakes or give me insight on how to make it even better.
Ok here i am writing my own revireview, so this story is my first novel so please point out my mistakes and give me insights, ant it got good story and world developement further in the future, please give it a try.
Just to support the nice AUTHOR...👍 ..........................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation AMAZING Novel,its a hidden gem,The world building is amazing,The characters have good personalitys.I Really enjoy the novel and recommend it.Thx Author.Please post more when you can.:)
Writing Quality: So loved the plotline, grammar, misuse of past and present tense, and wording errors, as well as sentence structure needs some work. I love the story development I just feel it's moving very fast in the beginning, and a few details are missing that could help clear a lot of confusion. I do however think this would make an amazing webcomic as is! Great job keep up the good work.
So I decided to do a proper review unlike most of the others. Firstly, this feels like one of those shows that has a premise that you fall in love with but is ruined by the dialogue. You see, the author I believe (a bit of an assumption) hasn't wrote a lot of literature before this novel so there are quite a few grammatical errors which turns some whole segments into questionable gibberish that you need to decipher what's happening in the scene.Also, because if the lower quality writing, whenever the author tries a writing technique such as being vague, alluding to a topic or just simply omitting information that will be told later, you can't tell the intention and end up with the author seeming like he just ripped out the paragraph that was meant to explain the plot point.Although I seem to despise this novel, there are also many I aspects I love. Such as the pacing, the ideas(immaculate) and the characters and the different relationships they have and are going to have with eachother. But you see, the other messier parts can't just be ignored just because the story is built of a solid, sound base foundation. The intricacies are too jumbled up from the improper grammar and the quality is only enough for you to barely be able to follow the story. So in my unbiased opinion, this novel will be in the 'good' category if you don't mind grammar but if your enjoyment depends on details and the level of understanding in the different situations you read, you will perish whilst attempting to go through this. And to the author, keep on writing. Improvement will come with time and practice and this is a perfect opportunity for you to do that regardless of whether it's perfect right now. You can always come back and rewrite or correct the mistakes once your even better at writing.
I've finished the prologue, not bad, although a few grammatical erros here and there, the writing style is good, the settings is also unique, especially the plot, anyway i approve it 10/10
The novel is really intriguing and engaging. It contain all the spice to make the reader time worthwhile .
How I want to join Noah in his transmigrated world. I want to see how the story unfolds so keep updating author. I want to drown deeper into this fantasy world.
It started with action right from the first paragraph. I mean, sure, it has some interesting ideas behind it and it has potential too. Only that it is being held back by capitalization, and grammar mistakes though nothing a good editing can't fix. Good luck, author!
Amazing work. I don't read this genre very much but I rhink your book is great.I will keep reading it. It surely is gem. would recommend it to everyone .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Prepare to be mesmerized by the sheer brilliance of the author's writing skills and the intricacy of the world they have masterfully crafted! The world-building in this novel is a testament to the author's boundless creativity and attention to detail.
It's a good novel the mc is likeable the writing quantity could be better. but it isn't awful! awful
10/10. A hidden gem. I already love the way the story is progressing. There are minor spelling mistakes here and there but it is negligible.
Overall its going great but Author needs to check spell mistakes and correct word usage like using cliche where clique is used.cliche means common plot but clique means group of people with same interests
This novel is surely a hidden gem, the world building, characters design everything is good the synopsis is catchy chapters are engaging a good novel indeed✨ keep up the good work author
I really loved the story love the characters development author really got the potential looking forward to read more chapters keep uploading
honestly I really enjoyed the development of the story so far as it's interesting, i hope you keep posting new chapters so I can make a better review posteriorly. constructive criticism however is that you improve grammar as this can interfere with the immersion of the story.
I absolutely love your book; (if you can) please spread the love by checking out my book named Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?! by Xolu.
The grammar mistakes make it a little difficult to read at first, but there are definitely some good ideas and characters here. With a little attention to detail, this novel has some promise! Keep up the good work, author!
I am still learning how to write with trial and errors so in the beginning 50 chapters there will be updating of existing chapter to make it best of my capability, so please support me and point out my mistakes or give me insight on how to make it even better.
Ok here i am writing my own revireview, so this story is my first novel so please point out my mistakes and give me insights, ant it got good story and world developement further in the future, please give it a try.
Just to support the nice AUTHOR...👍 ..........................................................................................................................
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