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Nice story .. good world building ... intelligent character's but in the last few chapter's mc become typical japnese dense op isekai character who lacks basic IQ. he is asking and acting ulike what could be expect of him from the buildup in the start. he is asking stupid question , making silly mistakes and getting confused on obvious things... rest of the story is enjoyable to read... hope it's kingdom building in future to nuke some prideful elf.....
Nice story .. good world building ... intelligent character's but in the last few chapter's mc become typical japnese dense op isekai character who lacks basic IQ. he is asking and acting ulike what could be expect of him from the buildup in the start. he is asking stupid question , making silly mistakes and getting confused on obvious things... rest of the story is enjoyable to read... hope it's kingdom building in future to nuke some prideful elf.....