The Omnistore System

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J_a_zzy

Shameful author here:- I wrote it so obviously I am gonna give it five stars and hope you will too, also if you find any mistakes or have some doubt do comment them in chapters or paragraph comments I read them all. Even if you don't find any mistakes or don't have some doubts make sure to give feedback I need to know what readers are likes and do not like in my work. Thanks for reading my novel.

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anything_goes1

good system quality lemons 🍋 pls keep posting new chapters

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haki_reader

nice system awsm r 8teen [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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SleepySmile

never saw anything about a shop just seggs

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Jatin_Kumar_9103

Loved it for you know cultural reasons.....[img=strong][img=strong]

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RagingMutant

Hey author, I really enjoy your story. Aside from the few times you mix character names up it’s great. I do have one issue though. That being that you always make it a point to say that your character isn’t going to kiss a girl after she gives him head. Not only does it ruin any sort of immersion, it is also super sexist and hypocritical. It’s just kinda distasteful to read every single time considering he doesn’t seem to think he shouldn’t kiss them after going down on them.

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DaoistHerbz

Thanks to this book i managed to clean my room ahead of time and get a nap after a long while. For a gigolo the MC is immature, doing SA here and there and get angry when things don't go his way. The system? aside from status and few treasure hunt it's just plain useless.

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SlowGo

so far I'm really enjoying the story as of what is today Saturday July 20th I am within six chapters of what is currently released there has been some slow points with releases and I honestly do kind of leave this sit for a little bit to gather some chapters when I can control myself at least cuz it really is a good story there's a good bit of smut but there is also an actual story to it with never evolving world and people and honestly there's enough going on that it's hard to keep track of sometimes but that's a personal issue honestly I don't know if it's ADD or what but anyway I very much enjoy the story I look forward to it continuing

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Almas_Farhan_Arnob

Nostalgia, is that song in synopsis from that movie where the alien jadu seen...did you just remake that song in English

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Hakujo

is mc op? .

Awsm😸😸😸😸😸😸😸😸 high quality lemon[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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LemonJuice_

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JetLord004

One of the best novels you will find in this app, just amazing.

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RizzDaoist

bro are you going to continue saga of the night God or not?

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Munizaza

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Spore_Zombie_0411

This story is a great read but we could use more visuals or images for the characters besides that the updates are both good and constent.

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Ovito

I really like this novel