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Absolutely amazing, it has everything I love. Going back in time, check. MC creating a mysterious organization, check. MC has a lot of personality (not actual mental personality but more like acting out a lot of them.) check. MC not actually powerful but using abnormal means to act as extremely powerful, check. Players... well while it was the reason I started the novel and there has not been much of it, they will probably come soon, hopefully.
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Absolutely amazing story, Love the worldbuilding, The story has more than 200 chapters and still feels like there is so much more to it. I would read a thousand chapters of it if I could. Not a single moment wasted, everything is leading to something relse, every time you think you know what will happen you'll be proven wrong. The only complaint I have for the Author is lack of Players but I trust the author completely and hope we'll get more on the players soon.
a crazy good story that is detailed very well written and I love it a lot and can't wait to read even more of this beautifully written story that uses almost everything in it's story very good and I barely see a plot hole much loves from me to this masterpiece [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I really tried hard to endure the novel but I couldn’t You say wise and somewhat smart hahahaha it’s so funny The MC is one that couldn’t be more naive everyone killing him and he is so cool with it that even became friends with the killers and then go to one of them and start begging to help him so he can level up rather than doing things himself
MY FAVORITE :D. Adam is sent back in time into his favorite video game, before any players even show up! He has the powers and privileges of both Player and NPC, the power to go back in time to a save point whenever he dies, and 8 seals that can only be unlocked by the 10 Primordials! Unfortunately for Adam, there are another nine champions with builds perhaps even more OP than his!
I would say i feel like lost interest after he got clone power i feel like I wasted coins in this novel now he has clone with their personality and freedom that he can't control after some distance now we have like 7 mc and that's cringe with the op ability to restart he doesn't needed clone it's now make mc seem more useless 😔 he should have ability to create slave or sabounirte any making 6 more mc out of him in the name of clone feels like his clone NTR him so i dropping this wast of coins and good novel read if you like story is great but author just didn't go well with my taste
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alright, time for a review :D overall, i really loke this story. maybe the basic concept is nothing really new, the story Author created is truly mesmerizing! his Writing quality is overall very good. here and there are some minor mistakes, maybe he will get an editor and there is no problem there. The story is very well developed, its not too fast paced, nor too slow. it hits the right spot:D the characters are also well designed, unfortunately there was not much chance to go deeper into their backstory, i hope he takes some time for the important characters:) i cant really say something about the updating stability, all i know is that his wife is in Hospital rn, as he shared on his discord channel. but since this is an emergency i wont change the rating because of that, im happy he cherishes his family. (btw. you should check out his Discord, there are many character and location arts!) the world background is also very well developed, i noticed no inconsistencies with his lore and he left much room to expand his story without hindrance! i can really recommend this story! as for Authors Synopsis statements: im at the end of Vol. 4, and until now, there is no Harem content.(Author said on his Discord that Harem and Romance will develop slowly and one girl after another) since the story is early, i guess it will come sooner or later. Romance isnt there either. perhaps traces, but i wont count them. his System is obviously established and well used. smut is not really inside... Author also missed some chances to detail some scenes... i expected way more after his synopsis statement, but it is fine as it is and i guess, it will come after time. Adventure RPG is good integrated, maybe he could show MCs stats in the later chapters some time, i dont know how strong he really is rn... im not sure what power creeping is referring to... overpowered? yes, defintitely! he is so to say immortal... he is Smart, and he seem to be wise. thank you fkr your time!🫶
Loving the book and who the mysteries surrounding each arc. Keep up the good work! 👍 👍 👍
This book is an absoulute gem, I have no idea why I havent seen it before. The worldbuilding, protagonist and his ability pretty much carries the whole book but it is more than enough. Thank you author for creating good stuff. you great
Poison tested and glad to say edible. Good story, its well written, designed, and has though put into it. - There isn’t unnecessary fluff that makes me want to just skim through half the chapter while still doing the plot and story justice! - I wish there was just slightly more information on story and character backgrounds/history. (However, sum of the things aren’t hard to infer either)
I don't usually write reviews, especially after only reading the first volume. But I gotta say, I really enjoy the story and the way it moves. A bit similar to legendary mechanic in the game world scenario, but the save points and the way mc utilizes it made the story even more interesting. Keep up with the good work Author. Good Luck 👍👍
The ONLY thing that I can think of as a flaw of this web novel, are the words that are sometimes incompatible with the sentence they belong in. Otherwise, this novel is golden.One teensy tiny thing that I personally dislike however, is the fact that I have to use fast passes to read, which is extremely saddening, honestly. Regardless, I await to see what you bring out in the future, Author. Best of luck to you.
Great storyline and character interactions. There are quite big reveals and foreshadowing, keeps you engaged to the story. Although the main characters powers seem too OP which may hinder future plot development. I would love to see how author further develops the story
Amazing story, first of all the concept is really great. The writing is also really good. I'm still at the 60th chapter and am waiting for Players. I had thought that players would be the main focus and I'll have to wait for that, but even before that the story is so amazing especially the gods's and such beings.
I didn't understand how tf he kill something that lvl 23 when he lvl 9 with just some skill and less than 5 slashes ????
First chapter and I liked it, I just hope the pace isn't too fast and with the comedy hashtag, the protagonist isn't too silly. Brasil aqui 🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷
The power balancing may be a bit unbalanced and the mc a bit too mentally stable, but I like the novel and will continue reading.
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Hey, Author here! Well. I have mostly explained everything in the synopsis of what you could expect from the story. I’ll give a brief character description here. Adam is more like a high school character with the personality of an aloof yet kind person. He doesn’t hate socializing but is mostly fine being alone as well. Despite not having any memories of his past life, he still doesn’t falter and even tries to strive for a good life out of the current one. His end goal is simple: To live a proper life while also finding the truth about his transmigration. He does have memories of the time he played the game, and also carries valuable information about the future that even the Gods don’t have. About his love interest, he doesn’t mind having a relationship so he won’t say no to dates. But he won’t be approaching anyone directly out of his own accord until he sees the front person is really interested in him. His morals are more in the light area than in the gray, but he isn’t naive either. He is hardworking and even strives to sit for hours to learn something fundamental until he grasps everything about it. With the help of [Save] and [Load], he jumps back in time many times, just to learn something without wasting time. Other than that, if you have any more questions regarding the story or the character or anything else, you can ask it here or in the discord. I’ll drop the Discord link in the Synopsis just in case. It contains Character Images, location images, information about characters, locations, etc. Including but not limited to [System Status] of the Main Character. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask them down here. Thank you for reading this, I believe you will enjoy this one.
Absolutely amazing, it has everything I love. Going back in time, check. MC creating a mysterious organization, check. MC has a lot of personality (not actual mental personality but more like acting out a lot of them.) check. MC not actually powerful but using abnormal means to act as extremely powerful, check. Players... well while it was the reason I started the novel and there has not been much of it, they will probably come soon, hopefully.
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Absolutely amazing story, Love the worldbuilding, The story has more than 200 chapters and still feels like there is so much more to it. I would read a thousand chapters of it if I could. Not a single moment wasted, everything is leading to something relse, every time you think you know what will happen you'll be proven wrong. The only complaint I have for the Author is lack of Players but I trust the author completely and hope we'll get more on the players soon.
a crazy good story that is detailed very well written and I love it a lot and can't wait to read even more of this beautifully written story that uses almost everything in it's story very good and I barely see a plot hole much loves from me to this masterpiece [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I really tried hard to endure the novel but I couldn’t You say wise and somewhat smart hahahaha it’s so funny The MC is one that couldn’t be more naive everyone killing him and he is so cool with it that even became friends with the killers and then go to one of them and start begging to help him so he can level up rather than doing things himself
MY FAVORITE :D. Adam is sent back in time into his favorite video game, before any players even show up! He has the powers and privileges of both Player and NPC, the power to go back in time to a save point whenever he dies, and 8 seals that can only be unlocked by the 10 Primordials! Unfortunately for Adam, there are another nine champions with builds perhaps even more OP than his!
I would say i feel like lost interest after he got clone power i feel like I wasted coins in this novel now he has clone with their personality and freedom that he can't control after some distance now we have like 7 mc and that's cringe with the op ability to restart he doesn't needed clone it's now make mc seem more useless 😔 he should have ability to create slave or sabounirte any making 6 more mc out of him in the name of clone feels like his clone NTR him so i dropping this wast of coins and good novel read if you like story is great but author just didn't go well with my taste
Spoiler de révélation alright, time for a review :D overall, i really loke this story. maybe the basic concept is nothing really new, the story Author created is truly mesmerizing! his Writing quality is overall very good. here and there are some minor mistakes, maybe he will get an editor and there is no problem there. The story is very well developed, its not too fast paced, nor too slow. it hits the right spot:D the characters are also well designed, unfortunately there was not much chance to go deeper into their backstory, i hope he takes some time for the important characters:) i cant really say something about the updating stability, all i know is that his wife is in Hospital rn, as he shared on his discord channel. but since this is an emergency i wont change the rating because of that, im happy he cherishes his family. (btw. you should check out his Discord, there are many character and location arts!) the world background is also very well developed, i noticed no inconsistencies with his lore and he left much room to expand his story without hindrance! i can really recommend this story! as for Authors Synopsis statements: im at the end of Vol. 4, and until now, there is no Harem content.(Author said on his Discord that Harem and Romance will develop slowly and one girl after another) since the story is early, i guess it will come sooner or later. Romance isnt there either. perhaps traces, but i wont count them. his System is obviously established and well used. smut is not really inside... Author also missed some chances to detail some scenes... i expected way more after his synopsis statement, but it is fine as it is and i guess, it will come after time. Adventure RPG is good integrated, maybe he could show MCs stats in the later chapters some time, i dont know how strong he really is rn... im not sure what power creeping is referring to... overpowered? yes, defintitely! he is so to say immortal... he is Smart, and he seem to be wise. thank you fkr your time!🫶
Loving the book and who the mysteries surrounding each arc. Keep up the good work! 👍 👍 👍
This book is an absoulute gem, I have no idea why I havent seen it before. The worldbuilding, protagonist and his ability pretty much carries the whole book but it is more than enough. Thank you author for creating good stuff. you great
Poison tested and glad to say edible. Good story, its well written, designed, and has though put into it. - There isn’t unnecessary fluff that makes me want to just skim through half the chapter while still doing the plot and story justice! - I wish there was just slightly more information on story and character backgrounds/history. (However, sum of the things aren’t hard to infer either)
I don't usually write reviews, especially after only reading the first volume. But I gotta say, I really enjoy the story and the way it moves. A bit similar to legendary mechanic in the game world scenario, but the save points and the way mc utilizes it made the story even more interesting. Keep up with the good work Author. Good Luck 👍👍
The ONLY thing that I can think of as a flaw of this web novel, are the words that are sometimes incompatible with the sentence they belong in. Otherwise, this novel is golden.One teensy tiny thing that I personally dislike however, is the fact that I have to use fast passes to read, which is extremely saddening, honestly. Regardless, I await to see what you bring out in the future, Author. Best of luck to you.
Great storyline and character interactions. There are quite big reveals and foreshadowing, keeps you engaged to the story. Although the main characters powers seem too OP which may hinder future plot development. I would love to see how author further develops the story
Amazing story, first of all the concept is really great. The writing is also really good. I'm still at the 60th chapter and am waiting for Players. I had thought that players would be the main focus and I'll have to wait for that, but even before that the story is so amazing especially the gods's and such beings.
I didn't understand how tf he kill something that lvl 23 when he lvl 9 with just some skill and less than 5 slashes ????
First chapter and I liked it, I just hope the pace isn't too fast and with the comedy hashtag, the protagonist isn't too silly. Brasil aqui 🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷
The power balancing may be a bit unbalanced and the mc a bit too mentally stable, but I like the novel and will continue reading.
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Hey, Author here! Well. I have mostly explained everything in the synopsis of what you could expect from the story. I’ll give a brief character description here. Adam is more like a high school character with the personality of an aloof yet kind person. He doesn’t hate socializing but is mostly fine being alone as well. Despite not having any memories of his past life, he still doesn’t falter and even tries to strive for a good life out of the current one. His end goal is simple: To live a proper life while also finding the truth about his transmigration. He does have memories of the time he played the game, and also carries valuable information about the future that even the Gods don’t have. About his love interest, he doesn’t mind having a relationship so he won’t say no to dates. But he won’t be approaching anyone directly out of his own accord until he sees the front person is really interested in him. His morals are more in the light area than in the gray, but he isn’t naive either. He is hardworking and even strives to sit for hours to learn something fundamental until he grasps everything about it. With the help of [Save] and [Load], he jumps back in time many times, just to learn something without wasting time. Other than that, if you have any more questions regarding the story or the character or anything else, you can ask it here or in the discord. I’ll drop the Discord link in the Synopsis just in case. It contains Character Images, location images, information about characters, locations, etc. Including but not limited to [System Status] of the Main Character. If you have any more questions, feel free to ask them down here. Thank you for reading this, I believe you will enjoy this one.