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the story, the plot, the charters and their development, the progression of the characters are truly well done. each chapter brings anticipation and each cliffhanger leaves u wanting more. I truly stand by what I say and hope that the story starts back up again soon.
I've hired an editor so expect a better, more fluid grammar. Hope everyone enjoys the read.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Four simple phrases to describe this novel. Simply fantastic. Wonderfully awesome. Unbound potential. Woefully underestimated.
I love the novel so far especially that you made him become a dragon since I really like dragons the MCs backstory is also interesting and I would say it is just a great story so far
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A really good start to a promising book so far. The author is creating a great build up and has already created a pretty solid world to build off of. The addition of making the MC's background and past a mystery is a really nice touch!
Great book. I love the build up, his power is dope. And he's already got THE MOTHER, that's like super cool. Great thinking on his affinity author bro. Don't drop!!
Spoiler de révélation Author's shameless review: It's my book and I believe each of my stories is great. It's an interesting mix that will keep you engaged and seeking for more, the Mc has an interesting personality that I'm pretty sure will be likable. Got any questions? I'll give a satisfactory answer Thanks
it would have been a solid 5 star if the author gave a heads up on either dropping it or taking a break. I don't know of his/her circumstances but I hope everything is alright with the author. Book is actually good, give it a read
the story, the plot, the charters and their development, the progression of the characters are truly well done. each chapter brings anticipation and each cliffhanger leaves u wanting more. I truly stand by what I say and hope that the story starts back up again soon.
I've hired an editor so expect a better, more fluid grammar. Hope everyone enjoys the read.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
Four simple phrases to describe this novel. Simply fantastic. Wonderfully awesome. Unbound potential. Woefully underestimated.
I love the novel so far especially that you made him become a dragon since I really like dragons the MCs backstory is also interesting and I would say it is just a great story so far
Spoiler de révélation A really good start to a promising book so far. The author is creating a great build up and has already created a pretty solid world to build off of. The addition of making the MC's background and past a mystery is a really nice touch!
Great book. I love the build up, his power is dope. And he's already got THE MOTHER, that's like super cool. Great thinking on his affinity author bro. Don't drop!!
Spoiler de révélation Author's shameless review: It's my book and I believe each of my stories is great. It's an interesting mix that will keep you engaged and seeking for more, the Mc has an interesting personality that I'm pretty sure will be likable. Got any questions? I'll give a satisfactory answer Thanks
it would have been a solid 5 star if the author gave a heads up on either dropping it or taking a break. I don't know of his/her circumstances but I hope everything is alright with the author. Book is actually good, give it a read