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why..... story dropped like this.....and how can a female lead have a relationship with her brother i am so disappointed 😔 i expected to ending will be good but they stopped writing
The initial part of the novel was really enjoyable. The gradual development of the story wasn’t that great. I really thought Evan’s was the ML but it turned out to be someone else whom I never expected it to be. FL could have handled a lot of issues differently and properly but she neglected them to a big extent. Same goes for a lot of the side characters. I know they are all following the plot line but still it felt so unnecessary at some parts. The ending was soooo abrupt, like it left a bad taste for me. My heart ached for the ML in the end. Did the author have to make the plot so twisted nearing the end??? Like it was absolutely unnecessary!! As for if I will recommend this novel? I am not sure. Initially it was good but gradually I became less interested because of the plot twist. Will I spend money of fast pass to read them?? NOPE!!!! So it’s up to you if you want to read it or not. Anyway I tried hard and completed it but the ending wasn’t satisfactory. Hope author can improve and bring better works in the future. All the best.
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It was promising at first, as it progressed, I just hated it. I decided to read some spoilers instead of finishing it to know if I should continue reading. After reading the spoilers, this isn't worth it. Although it's good that the twists are very different and really shocking, that's it. It's not done well. Why make them idiots?
At the beginning it was fun to read. This is the second novel where I was shocked to know male lead was changed to someone else. I mean I didnt expect this plot.
Not completed..!!! even though the status mentioned complete. The story plot is very interesting. i really like it..but when to the end (not really ended) the plot is going to twist. Audrey suddenly realised she had fallen in love with her second brother. Poor Evans . i really look forward to the Audrey and Evan relationship. I hate this.
I was enjoying and loving the book until you let the FL fall in love with her step brother and they do the do. Evans was the one making most people read the book and you had to ruin the novel that has been good from the beginning just because the author wants an unpredictable ending.🤬😡🤬🤬🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡😡🤬😡🤬😡😡
is ridiculous... they treat her as strange ALL her life, dont give afection,atention , nothing. her mother never teach her nothing, see ALL bad things, never make nothing... and then New FL.. they like her because she is good? no, Just curious about How they can read her mind... and this is só .. stupid. is a comedy about the FL stupidity, and How no one see her other than Circus things. and she dont make nothing for herself .
Read 457th chapter how have the story deranged. I thought Evan was male lead
Starts captivating despite multiple first meetings with so many people. The subtitles are golden. However as the story continues it dissolves into irritating mush. The beginning made me hopeful to continue but I can't read further at this point. The subtitles become very infrequent and sporadic despite having the potential to really benefit the storyline, the world does not extend past the main storyline that has become so thin - only what affects the protag exists and letting a person so unable to act they will destroy whatever movie/series they are in is fine and doesn't matter about how that could affect the hundreds of people that work for it (including friends of protag), everyone's intelligence drops (maybe not probable ML - yeah good proper romance is almost not present) and turns into 'just trust me I know what to do and protect people *does nothing* oh no how can they still be hurting others I will stop this happening because I know what to do' - so far for revenge we had communal pictures, forcing others to work with the enemy's bad acting and some snippy comments. I really wish this was better. I liked the beginning and could cope with the lagging repetition but despite wanting to know what happens to the characters it's become too unbearable to read. Not recommended unless you like feeling useless rage. Would recommend reading a heavily edited rewrite.
I love it!!! Very very good! I like how the fl isn't all about romance but balances it properly with work and family. i love how the ml just supports her not giving too much or too little, not always trying to pass his own opinion. And I Think it's refreshing to find a book where the stepsiblings aren't bad guys. Keep it up Author.
when she first talks about the audition and her first role, just ignore it. her next film, she "meets the FL and director" for the first time even though they were together for the "1st" drama. you go from Elena - Irina Fred - Frank Charlotte - Sherlock, the names are quite a joke. it's okay to be read when it's for free for 24 hours, but don't waste your coins...
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This story is fairly good. The storyline is pretty engaging and the changes you're anxious for happen pretty quickly but the further the story goes, there are some important aspects that become very dissatisfying. One: being able to read her thoughts become sporadic and there's no rhyme or reason to when it shows up and when it doesn't. Second: The FL has mysterious people and some less powerful people scheming against her, and while she seems smart and insightful at first, further into the story, she seems to be drifting in her abilities and intelligence with vague, unspecified plans to resolve the situations, but she does nothing and accomplishes nothing to counteract her enemies, and Third: the worst part is I'm at chapter 350+ and there's NO romance, the ML is still unclear, and the person who seems to be the ML has barely shown up and had very little interaction with the FL with practically non-existent relationship building between them. I'll probably stop reading this book. Will there even be a romantic relationship showing by chapter 500 at this rate?!!
love the book. great story line and interaction between the characters. tho later on characters the fl has already met end up meeting again for the "first time" such as the ogfl where they meet on her first script and the seem to meet for the fist time again later on at another audition. author seems to forget what characters have alrady met
The first half is good, engaging, theres lots of growth, good characters, and a nice twist. The second half though not so much, with all the growth out the window, the classic "i wanna be low key for no reason, even though all it does is cause me trouble", followed by the "ill handle everything myself even though it could all be solved easily with help." Then because she chooses to neither ask for help nor even tell anyone when ppl are threating her family, her family ends up getting hurt, and even after them getting hurt she still dosnt tell anyone, even though they are still threating to hurt her family more. All in all the story falls into the classic pit fall of I need to make my mc lose half her iq to force a plot that will eventually be fixed because of plot armor.
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I really love the story and the characters. It's enjoyable with how others see the Fl's little thoughts and thinks if other could also see it. Although there are alo some minus points on romance development which might make the story little boring but still for me it has not been a boring story but enjoyable so love it.
At first it was mentioned that Elena knew Audrey's background and liked his brother and hated her She had just signed contract And after some chpts she is not newcomer and Elena doesn't know her I mean didn't she work with her And why does Elena hate her is it because of plot Too absurd!!! They explain too much I mean we already know it The scene where Audrey was invited by inverters I think she should prepared better because she had been in this industry in previous life She doesn't take revenge and also helps her enemy I mean can you help someone who wanted you to be raped She says she solve it but doesn't do it She just goes and talks to people All that cyber bulling I mean how can she ignore that If she has people who can help her Why reject?? And at the end of day even if she wants to follow her plan, she can just click screenshot of those post and report it afterwards She also knows that mort and Liz are culprits but doesn't tell her family It's dumb how she declared she likes Frank She jumping into hot lava She knows Frank is indifferent and still pesters him Sometimes she says she is not afraid of Frank and Elina and sometimes she says she sacred of their background when her family is saying they are backers Her character is gets from bad to worse And anyway Abner is searching for accomplice she can try to talk to them She can't solve it on her own I am disappointed 😞 in this novel It had good potential
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Very different then others love the subtitles above Audrey’s head and Charlotte’s mom cussing out Liz too funny love the book.
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quite good to read. I hope Anthea and Audrey can have a good ending. Gary seems not a good guy but I hope he can protect Anthea mother n daughter well. Linda is such a bad girl n I hope she can get her retribution. hopefully this book can have a good ending.. I wonder how many chapters this novel is.
can someone please help me to find a novel i read before? i remember the story but i forgot its name. the surname of FL is luo and the surname of ml is feng or mo. the FL transmigrates into a story and meets the ml in his house who looks like her first love. in the beginning the ml asks her to leave the house but then he allows her to stay in the house and eventually they fall in love. she becomes an actress, films a variety show where they solve a murder, she has the ability to see ghosts and she helps these ghosts in punishing those who killed them . she also wears a pendant in her neck which helps her to see the ghosts. she even falls unconscious and ends up inside the pendant where she sees some clues for the case. ml has a big brother who is in military and a grandfather. it was the pendent that helped her to come to the World of novel .can someone remember this story and tell me the name?
the story is good the only downside is that it updates very little, hoping to find the raws.
loved it 😍. this book is very interesting. Fl character is very cute and lovely.
Love this story! Really wish I can find the raw name so I can continue to read it. I have been trying to find it, but no luck if anyone finds it I'll be grateful.
Please update soon! Can’t wait for Evans and Audrey getting together ❤️❤️❤️. Is there gay couple 2? I ship Louis and Abner then! Honestly, felt a bit of tension there.
Love the FL and her interactions with all the characters surrounding her. It's undoubtedly amusing especially for her brothers to be able to read her thoughts while she is being snide in her head about them. I hope the novel gets picked up soon. I really want to see how her life unfolds and esp how it will be moving forward esp with potential ML
why..... story dropped like this.....and how can a female lead have a relationship with her brother i am so disappointed 😔 i expected to ending will be good but they stopped writing
The initial part of the novel was really enjoyable. The gradual development of the story wasn’t that great. I really thought Evan’s was the ML but it turned out to be someone else whom I never expected it to be. FL could have handled a lot of issues differently and properly but she neglected them to a big extent. Same goes for a lot of the side characters. I know they are all following the plot line but still it felt so unnecessary at some parts. The ending was soooo abrupt, like it left a bad taste for me. My heart ached for the ML in the end. Did the author have to make the plot so twisted nearing the end??? Like it was absolutely unnecessary!! As for if I will recommend this novel? I am not sure. Initially it was good but gradually I became less interested because of the plot twist. Will I spend money of fast pass to read them?? NOPE!!!! So it’s up to you if you want to read it or not. Anyway I tried hard and completed it but the ending wasn’t satisfactory. Hope author can improve and bring better works in the future. All the best.
Spoiler de révélation It was promising at first, as it progressed, I just hated it. I decided to read some spoilers instead of finishing it to know if I should continue reading. After reading the spoilers, this isn't worth it. Although it's good that the twists are very different and really shocking, that's it. It's not done well. Why make them idiots?
At the beginning it was fun to read. This is the second novel where I was shocked to know male lead was changed to someone else. I mean I didnt expect this plot.
Not completed..!!! even though the status mentioned complete. The story plot is very interesting. i really like it..but when to the end (not really ended) the plot is going to twist. Audrey suddenly realised she had fallen in love with her second brother. Poor Evans . i really look forward to the Audrey and Evan relationship. I hate this.
I was enjoying and loving the book until you let the FL fall in love with her step brother and they do the do. Evans was the one making most people read the book and you had to ruin the novel that has been good from the beginning just because the author wants an unpredictable ending.🤬😡🤬🤬🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡😡🤬😡🤬😡😡
is ridiculous... they treat her as strange ALL her life, dont give afection,atention , nothing. her mother never teach her nothing, see ALL bad things, never make nothing... and then New FL.. they like her because she is good? no, Just curious about How they can read her mind... and this is só .. stupid. is a comedy about the FL stupidity, and How no one see her other than Circus things. and she dont make nothing for herself .
Read 457th chapter how have the story deranged. I thought Evan was male lead
Starts captivating despite multiple first meetings with so many people. The subtitles are golden. However as the story continues it dissolves into irritating mush. The beginning made me hopeful to continue but I can't read further at this point. The subtitles become very infrequent and sporadic despite having the potential to really benefit the storyline, the world does not extend past the main storyline that has become so thin - only what affects the protag exists and letting a person so unable to act they will destroy whatever movie/series they are in is fine and doesn't matter about how that could affect the hundreds of people that work for it (including friends of protag), everyone's intelligence drops (maybe not probable ML - yeah good proper romance is almost not present) and turns into 'just trust me I know what to do and protect people *does nothing* oh no how can they still be hurting others I will stop this happening because I know what to do' - so far for revenge we had communal pictures, forcing others to work with the enemy's bad acting and some snippy comments. I really wish this was better. I liked the beginning and could cope with the lagging repetition but despite wanting to know what happens to the characters it's become too unbearable to read. Not recommended unless you like feeling useless rage. Would recommend reading a heavily edited rewrite.
I love it!!! Very very good! I like how the fl isn't all about romance but balances it properly with work and family. i love how the ml just supports her not giving too much or too little, not always trying to pass his own opinion. And I Think it's refreshing to find a book where the stepsiblings aren't bad guys. Keep it up Author.
when she first talks about the audition and her first role, just ignore it. her next film, she "meets the FL and director" for the first time even though they were together for the "1st" drama. you go from Elena - Irina Fred - Frank Charlotte - Sherlock, the names are quite a joke. it's okay to be read when it's for free for 24 hours, but don't waste your coins...
Spoiler de révélation This story is fairly good. The storyline is pretty engaging and the changes you're anxious for happen pretty quickly but the further the story goes, there are some important aspects that become very dissatisfying. One: being able to read her thoughts become sporadic and there's no rhyme or reason to when it shows up and when it doesn't. Second: The FL has mysterious people and some less powerful people scheming against her, and while she seems smart and insightful at first, further into the story, she seems to be drifting in her abilities and intelligence with vague, unspecified plans to resolve the situations, but she does nothing and accomplishes nothing to counteract her enemies, and Third: the worst part is I'm at chapter 350+ and there's NO romance, the ML is still unclear, and the person who seems to be the ML has barely shown up and had very little interaction with the FL with practically non-existent relationship building between them. I'll probably stop reading this book. Will there even be a romantic relationship showing by chapter 500 at this rate?!!
love the book. great story line and interaction between the characters. tho later on characters the fl has already met end up meeting again for the "first time" such as the ogfl where they meet on her first script and the seem to meet for the fist time again later on at another audition. author seems to forget what characters have alrady met
The first half is good, engaging, theres lots of growth, good characters, and a nice twist. The second half though not so much, with all the growth out the window, the classic "i wanna be low key for no reason, even though all it does is cause me trouble", followed by the "ill handle everything myself even though it could all be solved easily with help." Then because she chooses to neither ask for help nor even tell anyone when ppl are threating her family, her family ends up getting hurt, and even after them getting hurt she still dosnt tell anyone, even though they are still threating to hurt her family more. All in all the story falls into the classic pit fall of I need to make my mc lose half her iq to force a plot that will eventually be fixed because of plot armor.
Spoiler de révélation I really love the story and the characters. It's enjoyable with how others see the Fl's little thoughts and thinks if other could also see it. Although there are alo some minus points on romance development which might make the story little boring but still for me it has not been a boring story but enjoyable so love it.
At first it was mentioned that Elena knew Audrey's background and liked his brother and hated her She had just signed contract And after some chpts she is not newcomer and Elena doesn't know her I mean didn't she work with her And why does Elena hate her is it because of plot Too absurd!!! They explain too much I mean we already know it The scene where Audrey was invited by inverters I think she should prepared better because she had been in this industry in previous life She doesn't take revenge and also helps her enemy I mean can you help someone who wanted you to be raped She says she solve it but doesn't do it She just goes and talks to people All that cyber bulling I mean how can she ignore that If she has people who can help her Why reject?? And at the end of day even if she wants to follow her plan, she can just click screenshot of those post and report it afterwards She also knows that mort and Liz are culprits but doesn't tell her family It's dumb how she declared she likes Frank She jumping into hot lava She knows Frank is indifferent and still pesters him Sometimes she says she is not afraid of Frank and Elina and sometimes she says she sacred of their background when her family is saying they are backers Her character is gets from bad to worse And anyway Abner is searching for accomplice she can try to talk to them She can't solve it on her own I am disappointed 😞 in this novel It had good potential
Spoiler de révélation Very different then others love the subtitles above Audrey’s head and Charlotte’s mom cussing out Liz too funny love the book.
Spoiler de révélation quite good to read. I hope Anthea and Audrey can have a good ending. Gary seems not a good guy but I hope he can protect Anthea mother n daughter well. Linda is such a bad girl n I hope she can get her retribution. hopefully this book can have a good ending.. I wonder how many chapters this novel is.
can someone please help me to find a novel i read before? i remember the story but i forgot its name. the surname of FL is luo and the surname of ml is feng or mo. the FL transmigrates into a story and meets the ml in his house who looks like her first love. in the beginning the ml asks her to leave the house but then he allows her to stay in the house and eventually they fall in love. she becomes an actress, films a variety show where they solve a murder, she has the ability to see ghosts and she helps these ghosts in punishing those who killed them . she also wears a pendant in her neck which helps her to see the ghosts. she even falls unconscious and ends up inside the pendant where she sees some clues for the case. ml has a big brother who is in military and a grandfather. it was the pendent that helped her to come to the World of novel .can someone remember this story and tell me the name?
the story is good the only downside is that it updates very little, hoping to find the raws.
loved it 😍. this book is very interesting. Fl character is very cute and lovely.
Love this story! Really wish I can find the raw name so I can continue to read it. I have been trying to find it, but no luck if anyone finds it I'll be grateful.
Please update soon! Can’t wait for Evans and Audrey getting together ❤️❤️❤️. Is there gay couple 2? I ship Louis and Abner then! Honestly, felt a bit of tension there.
Love the FL and her interactions with all the characters surrounding her. It's undoubtedly amusing especially for her brothers to be able to read her thoughts while she is being snide in her head about them. I hope the novel gets picked up soon. I really want to see how her life unfolds and esp how it will be moving forward esp with potential ML
Good stories more stories please good author.thumps up!