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does anyone know the original name it where iIcsn.find this fanfic if it's a mtl?
Maybe this story is amazing but the translation is garbage so don’t bother reading until someone else comes in and translates / edits the story because this thing is a mess.
Good fafanfic hope you could make more magic beasts. Otherwise you are doing great. More chapter!!!!!
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The story is weird and the grammar makes it unreadable even for someone like me who is used to reading MTLs this feels like someone is learning English tried to write this. I ended it at chapter 9 when he said a beginner level spell he was rewarded with could block dumbledoors legitimatce.
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the story is good although it's grammar is not the best but at least it doesn't suck so much like a poorly machine translated Chinese novel where everything is confusing overall the story is fun and entertaining and I can't wait for more chapters to be posted04 July 2023
Recomiendo que de vez en cuando pongas noticia de clase para saber cómo va la historia por lo demas perfecto por cierto no te quedes solo con animales que salieron en la películas y parecidos puedes hacer que evolucionen a mitos y leyendas
story needs a editor who has knowledge of harry potter for the many errors in this story... otherwise its like mtl with a better ai
orginal story name is "Hogwarts: What Bad Intentions Could A Little Badger Have?". found it on mtlnation. it has about 300+ chapters on it.
does anyone know the original name it where iIcsn.find this fanfic if it's a mtl?
Maybe this story is amazing but the translation is garbage so don’t bother reading until someone else comes in and translates / edits the story because this thing is a mess.
Good fafanfic hope you could make more magic beasts. Otherwise you are doing great. More chapter!!!!!
A 1 linha de texto após o título ja me fez dropar dá não.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The story is weird and the grammar makes it unreadable even for someone like me who is used to reading MTLs this feels like someone is learning English tried to write this. I ended it at chapter 9 when he said a beginner level spell he was rewarded with could block dumbledoors legitimatce.
Spoiler de révélation the story is good although it's grammar is not the best but at least it doesn't suck so much like a poorly machine translated Chinese novel where everything is confusing overall the story is fun and entertaining and I can't wait for more chapters to be posted04 July 2023
Recomiendo que de vez en cuando pongas noticia de clase para saber cómo va la historia por lo demas perfecto por cierto no te quedes solo con animales que salieron en la películas y parecidos puedes hacer que evolucionen a mitos y leyendas
story needs a editor who has knowledge of harry potter for the many errors in this story... otherwise its like mtl with a better ai
orginal story name is "Hogwarts: What Bad Intentions Could A Little Badger Have?". found it on mtlnation. it has about 300+ chapters on it.