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Started reading the book after the author introduced it & couldn’t put it down until I finished all the chapters. Love the intrigue of the plot & the underlying fantasy world. Can’t wait to read the rest of the chapters
have been following the story since the beginning and really enjoy every chap till now and can't wait for more :) (although would be sad when it's over). The story setting is pretty solid. Not only the MC, Yohana is so cool (tho she can be dorky too), but other characters are so loveable and the others are....kindly go find out yourself x)
loving every part of this novel. can't understand how it's not garnered many readers.
It is pretty good, i don't usually go towards this genre, and focus more on adventure, system, and sometimes eastern fantasy, for a first time experience it wasn't bad. {Goodluck readers~}
Well iIwas personally invited by the author her self and I might say she was spot on the book interesting and i am gonna continue 👍👍
Overall, Yohana's life is captivating and filled with excitement. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style, which masterfully separates paragraphs, resulting in a seamless reading experience. The vivid scene descriptions, compelling characters, and seamless story progression are all skillfully crafted. It was truly a captivating read!
Nice world-building with nice plots. I barely found any mistakes so that's a well done. keep up the good work, author✨
Honestly I loveeee the book soo much it's definitely my genre so there's no way I'm dropping this book anytime soon. I'm encouraging everyone to give this book a shot. Trust me, you won't get disappointed!🤍
Started reading the book after the author introduced it & couldn’t put it down until I finished all the chapters. Love the intrigue of the plot & the underlying fantasy world. Can’t wait to read the rest of the chapters
have been following the story since the beginning and really enjoy every chap till now and can't wait for more :) (although would be sad when it's over). The story setting is pretty solid. Not only the MC, Yohana is so cool (tho she can be dorky too), but other characters are so loveable and the others are....kindly go find out yourself x)
loving every part of this novel. can't understand how it's not garnered many readers.
It is pretty good, i don't usually go towards this genre, and focus more on adventure, system, and sometimes eastern fantasy, for a first time experience it wasn't bad. {Goodluck readers~}
Well iIwas personally invited by the author her self and I might say she was spot on the book interesting and i am gonna continue 👍👍
Overall, Yohana's life is captivating and filled with excitement. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style, which masterfully separates paragraphs, resulting in a seamless reading experience. The vivid scene descriptions, compelling characters, and seamless story progression are all skillfully crafted. It was truly a captivating read!
Nice world-building with nice plots. I barely found any mistakes so that's a well done. keep up the good work, author✨
Honestly I loveeee the book soo much it's definitely my genre so there's no way I'm dropping this book anytime soon. I'm encouraging everyone to give this book a shot. Trust me, you won't get disappointed!🤍