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Great Story. Love the direction this story is taking. I can't wait to see were this story is going, please keep doing what your doing. Your doing great.
Interesting story. We've all have that fantasy of what it would be like to be in our favorite story, but you made it seem real and invigorating. Wished it released more frequently, but I can wait if it's for quality storytelling.
Overall is a great story, there is room for improvement but you should give it shot.the story is going at a good pace, the character is not dumb nor a super genius, and is a fresh take on the canon.
Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain, suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated.
This book is really good! The character interactions are PEAK.Honestly, this is one of my favorites out of the thousands of books I've read in my life. Top 10, manga included.
some of the idea's in this story are fresh and there also well thought out as well its a great story so far and honestly can't wait for rest of the story.
Author review here! I wanted to save this for a time when I knew I could feel confident in sayibg this book is really good, and fortunately that time is now. If you’re looking for a high quality fic with a little extra meat in each chapter, you’ve come to the right place. This book manages to keep the integrity of the original Bleach story and characters while exploring parts of the world and power system that deserve to be fleshed out a little more. If you’re into fics with a lot of action without a overpowered MC, this fic might be the one for you.
This is really good so far. The only issue is that there’s not enough chapters
I like what I have read so far don’t see many female leads so it’s a good change of pace. I like the relationships between all the characters so far and the changes that have occurred in the story due to the main characters existence can’t wait to see where it goes.
Great Story. Love the direction this story is taking. I can't wait to see were this story is going, please keep doing what your doing. Your doing great.
Interesting story. We've all have that fantasy of what it would be like to be in our favorite story, but you made it seem real and invigorating. Wished it released more frequently, but I can wait if it's for quality storytelling.
Overall is a great story, there is room for improvement but you should give it shot.the story is going at a good pace, the character is not dumb nor a super genius, and is a fresh take on the canon.
Wake up to reality! Nothing ever goes as planned in this accursed world. The longer you live, the more you realize that the only things that truly exist in this reality are merely pain, suffering and futility. Listen, everywhere you look in this world, wherever there is light, there will always be shadows to be found as well. As long as there is a concept of victors, the vanquished will also exist. The selfish intent of wanting to preserve peace, initiates war and hatred is born in order to protect love. There are nexuses causal relationships that cannot be separated.
This book is really good! The character interactions are PEAK.Honestly, this is one of my favorites out of the thousands of books I've read in my life. Top 10, manga included.
some of the idea's in this story are fresh and there also well thought out as well its a great story so far and honestly can't wait for rest of the story.
Author review here! I wanted to save this for a time when I knew I could feel confident in sayibg this book is really good, and fortunately that time is now. If you’re looking for a high quality fic with a little extra meat in each chapter, you’ve come to the right place. This book manages to keep the integrity of the original Bleach story and characters while exploring parts of the world and power system that deserve to be fleshed out a little more. If you’re into fics with a lot of action without a overpowered MC, this fic might be the one for you.
This is really good so far. The only issue is that there’s not enough chapters
I like what I have read so far don’t see many female leads so it’s a good change of pace. I like the relationships between all the characters so far and the changes that have occurred in the story due to the main characters existence can’t wait to see where it goes.
can you tell me if this has yuri in it please?