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Had some cool ideas but when more than half of your chapters are reciting wiki pages about abilities of characters like yoriichi from demon slayer or the six eyes or whatever taekwondo you showed, it gets boring real quick. we do not need the entire wiki page just copy and pasted into a chapter. updates are pretty frequent, but I guess that happens when you're just pressing ctrl v and ctrl c every time. please listen to your comments. they aren't just dunking on you for no reason.
This fanfic would have had immeasurable potential if it did not resemble a wiki page, too much useless information, there are literally full chapters just explaining common things most people would already know about like: chakra,haki or the sharingan, to be frank it the author would just pipe down on the informational paragraphs i would love to read it.
Os protagonista Sasuke e Naruto feminino fêmea para que só tenha um protagonista seria legal e está bom a história até agora muito legal ela
Hello, how are you? Thank you for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. Come on. More chapters
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this is just a random review score ............ i just want to say I'm looking forward for this fanfiction..............................................
Had some cool ideas but when more than half of your chapters are reciting wiki pages about abilities of characters like yoriichi from demon slayer or the six eyes or whatever taekwondo you showed, it gets boring real quick. we do not need the entire wiki page just copy and pasted into a chapter. updates are pretty frequent, but I guess that happens when you're just pressing ctrl v and ctrl c every time. please listen to your comments. they aren't just dunking on you for no reason.
This fanfic would have had immeasurable potential if it did not resemble a wiki page, too much useless information, there are literally full chapters just explaining common things most people would already know about like: chakra,haki or the sharingan, to be frank it the author would just pipe down on the informational paragraphs i would love to read it.
Os protagonista Sasuke e Naruto feminino fêmea para que só tenha um protagonista seria legal e está bom a história até agora muito legal ela
Hello, how are you? Thank you for the topic. More chapters. Come on. More chapters. Come on. Come on. More chapters
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
this is just a random review score ............ i just want to say I'm looking forward for this fanfiction..............................................
you should change the tittle bro. Naruto: The Wiki of Cheats