Synopsis
Klaus died young without being able to do what he wanted to, to have a large family. This was his wish from childhood growing up in an orphanage.
He got a new chance to be able to fulfill that wish. For able to fulfill the wish he had to go through a lot of trials.
Will he be able to survive long enough to fulfill his wish or not?
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Écrire un avisHello! Is there any kind of yuri? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading. Thanks!
I made it to chapter 6 before the terrible grammar completely destroyed my eyes. Author, please use grammarly. It's free, and your novel will absolutely be better for it.
so far story is great but I hope u make mc more confident as he has will of pride and make him brave enough to be outgoing enough and not worry about plot shield for protagonist and other stereotypes
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Spoiler de révélationThe writing quality is good, but the story devlopment is snail paced, which is not expected from a system novel. The mc is not even using the sins properly. I hope it gets better.
The story's plot and character is nice. I like everything that's going on in the book. Nice Job👍. Please check out my book. I am an author and I write a book called "The Dragon Prince: Evolution of The Dragon Era". It's nice, and trust me it's worth reading.
The idea is great, but the execution leaves much to be desired. Many of the chapters I read almost read as background notes for the story. it
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