4Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story is fast paced but still can read and enjoy it but author needs to work on the spelling and grammar, as there are many mistakes. Still the novel is quite enjoyable and interesting, development is very quite good. Hope author still continues to update and adress the issues
LV 13 ![Badge]()
The story is fast paced but still can read and enjoy it but author needs to work on the spelling and grammar, as there are many mistakes. Still the novel is quite enjoyable and interesting, development is very quite good. Hope author still continues to update and adress the issues
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