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It is a great book. I love it. The only problem is the names he keeps changing the names or using the wrong name and it is annoying.
I love the story, although the translation is not accurate. also update rate is really frustrating
I like the story but it does have strong down sides. The inability to get the names right or even to keep them the same inside a same chapter is confusing and a sign of shoddy editing. I mean some change 3 times in a couple of paragraphs, it’s not difficult to go back and clearly change the names and it would massively improve coherence. Overall, like the story but need proper editing.
Giving a 5 star just because this is literally the first translation I’ve seen that I couldn’t tell was a translation it’s that good writing quality
Ya leí este fan fic y se me hace aburrido pero te doy 5 estrellas por como te esforzaste a arreglar algunas partes en chino se lo difícil que es arreglar partes en chino ya que estoy traducción 3 fan fic chinos y se me hace difícil y algunas partes en imposible arreglar
The translation is good, but the MC is really annoying. He talks about how he has a humble attitude and doesn't like to show off, because he's originally from China, yet he constantly brags and shows off his wealth and knowledge. I just can't enjoy the story with such an annoying, unlikeable MC.
This Reminds me of The Fanfic bloodline wizard and seems to be a bit of a copy and is way to slow for me
Translation is very good Story is interesting but it is slow burn Too slow for me I read around 50chapters but MC is still in his 2nd day of Hogwarts I will not read it anymore but i will recommend if you can handle slow progress Stories
I'm sorry I couldn't get you out of your patreon. but here I will try to comment on each part. Thanks in advance.. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .
A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio.
this novel I've seen and read a copy of this in this app and i didn't like it i recall that i hate fake and shameless propaganda especially china 🤔 just i read the name of the mc the opening i recalled this story eton college if I'm not wrong this novel as a lot of propaganda especially coming from china the only difference probably the image poster and the title but the story is still the same
It is a great book. I love it. The only problem is the names he keeps changing the names or using the wrong name and it is annoying.
I love the story, although the translation is not accurate. also update rate is really frustrating
I like the story but it does have strong down sides. The inability to get the names right or even to keep them the same inside a same chapter is confusing and a sign of shoddy editing. I mean some change 3 times in a couple of paragraphs, it’s not difficult to go back and clearly change the names and it would massively improve coherence. Overall, like the story but need proper editing.
Giving a 5 star just because this is literally the first translation I’ve seen that I couldn’t tell was a translation it’s that good writing quality
Ya leí este fan fic y se me hace aburrido pero te doy 5 estrellas por como te esforzaste a arreglar algunas partes en chino se lo difícil que es arreglar partes en chino ya que estoy traducción 3 fan fic chinos y se me hace difícil y algunas partes en imposible arreglar
The translation is good, but the MC is really annoying. He talks about how he has a humble attitude and doesn't like to show off, because he's originally from China, yet he constantly brags and shows off his wealth and knowledge. I just can't enjoy the story with such an annoying, unlikeable MC.
This Reminds me of The Fanfic bloodline wizard and seems to be a bit of a copy and is way to slow for me
Translation is very good Story is interesting but it is slow burn Too slow for me I read around 50chapters but MC is still in his 2nd day of Hogwarts I will not read it anymore but i will recommend if you can handle slow progress Stories
I'm sorry I couldn't get you out of your patreon. but here I will try to comment on each part. Thanks in advance.. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .
A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio.
this novel I've seen and read a copy of this in this app and i didn't like it i recall that i hate fake and shameless propaganda especially china 🤔 just i read the name of the mc the opening i recalled this story eton college if I'm not wrong this novel as a lot of propaganda especially coming from china the only difference probably the image poster and the title but the story is still the same