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I've struggled hard and long to find even a decent Zelda fanffic. And so I found this beautiful Oasis in the endless sands of a dessert. I finished reading this story last year. And I've been waiting and hoping for an Update or even some news from the author ever since. And if you're reading this, know you've started an amazing Zelda fanfiction and I think it be a shame to see it lost in the sands of time. I hope you're doing alright out there and thanks for making this story.
If I can say, the story is good! I want to see and read till the book is done if the author would let me. huehuehue. Take your time author ☺️. The world as you know it is in the hyrule! duh... Zelda.. I really like how you twist and bring ideas into the world and change them 😁
First off, THANK you for making this fan fic. For a while I've been searching for one, but never could find it. Secondly, I feel like this fic has the potential to be a long one. Games like TOTK or Breath of the wild are so big and so much to do, all the adventures your character could go on, it's alot. So i look forward to seeing how you go about this story, how it improves and again, Thanks for making it.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book but unfortunately it's starting to look like the author has decided to drop it as an updated in 2 weeks
The story started off good even though it was a bit slow! But later on the Mc just keeps on making bad decisions. Or he makes things he should have no idea how to make or do things he doesn’t have the capability of doing. I liked his background information but it doesn’t come up as often as you think! And he tends to not think things through. An example of this was giving the caravan guard half of his total money and his sword.
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Good story! but Only thing do not make me continue the book, is unrealistic ideas and as gun and wires, don’t feel match in Zelda timelines. Author just throwing items and random.. to make the story unbearable to read for me. Sorry, this book is not in my team catalog. Good luck
Amazing story, by far the best Zelda fanfic - it's creative and has a great plot, I love the merged Hyrule aspect and I feel this is quite a realistic, yet entertaining take on the world.
I love the story, the only possible bad thing I could say is that the MC's power is a little hard to understand, but even then - it's probably meant to be a mystery that will slowly be unveiled (review made as of chapter 44)
Select the correct answer from each drop-down menu. Complete these sentences about medieval plays. were short comedic plays that introduced real characters who were more fully developed than characters in allegories. These short plays helped to the mood in the midst of serious, instructive plays. joe byron ypy oyoy dnhndvshdsfyfvhhvbfrhbfvrhybebfhbfrhbsdfbndbnbdfwbdcbfwbhbchb
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Im really enjoying this, didn’t realize how rare good Zelda fanfics were. It’ good hope this keeps updatingg
Love the story so far excellent pacing and action. Although I do hope to see more chapters.
Loving the story so far Interesting plot and good story development. Hope to see more chapters.
Me sorprendió la estética del personaje, en conjunto con el ambiente de realidad reflejado en la verdadera escencia del mundo demostrando que no todo es color de rosa mejorando la historia y dándole un rumbo que no esperamos
It’s a alright fanfic I recommend other to read it before deciding to follow but for me it’s too meme focused. But again no hate the fic is fine.
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The story is nice 👍 I like it. The fact that you are actually taking creative liberties instead of fallowing canon or plot and still not messing stuff up is amazing. I’ve tried but haven’t succeded Anyway hope you keep going and hope to read more of your amazing fic
The story itself is fine and the general quality is above the average. The main problem comes from the fact that it's written in slang as if it was a 12 yr old.
good FF. hey author make sure one day he manages to reclaimed his throne. because by gerudo law he is the rightful king of gerudo.
idk about the update stability for it as I just found this today but so far I love this story and would like more soon
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i wish it was more ......always liked rare fanfics shame its unfifnished i hope the author at least starts another story if he got bored with this one.
I've struggled hard and long to find even a decent Zelda fanffic. And so I found this beautiful Oasis in the endless sands of a dessert. I finished reading this story last year. And I've been waiting and hoping for an Update or even some news from the author ever since. And if you're reading this, know you've started an amazing Zelda fanfiction and I think it be a shame to see it lost in the sands of time. I hope you're doing alright out there and thanks for making this story.
If I can say, the story is good! I want to see and read till the book is done if the author would let me. huehuehue. Take your time author ☺️. The world as you know it is in the hyrule! duh... Zelda.. I really like how you twist and bring ideas into the world and change them 😁
First off, THANK you for making this fan fic. For a while I've been searching for one, but never could find it. Secondly, I feel like this fic has the potential to be a long one. Games like TOTK or Breath of the wild are so big and so much to do, all the adventures your character could go on, it's alot. So i look forward to seeing how you go about this story, how it improves and again, Thanks for making it.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book but unfortunately it's starting to look like the author has decided to drop it as an updated in 2 weeks
The story started off good even though it was a bit slow! But later on the Mc just keeps on making bad decisions. Or he makes things he should have no idea how to make or do things he doesn’t have the capability of doing. I liked his background information but it doesn’t come up as often as you think! And he tends to not think things through. An example of this was giving the caravan guard half of his total money and his sword.
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Good story! but Only thing do not make me continue the book, is unrealistic ideas and as gun and wires, don’t feel match in Zelda timelines. Author just throwing items and random.. to make the story unbearable to read for me. Sorry, this book is not in my team catalog. Good luck
Amazing story, by far the best Zelda fanfic - it's creative and has a great plot, I love the merged Hyrule aspect and I feel this is quite a realistic, yet entertaining take on the world.
I love the story, the only possible bad thing I could say is that the MC's power is a little hard to understand, but even then - it's probably meant to be a mystery that will slowly be unveiled (review made as of chapter 44)
Select the correct answer from each drop-down menu. Complete these sentences about medieval plays. were short comedic plays that introduced real characters who were more fully developed than characters in allegories. These short plays helped to the mood in the midst of serious, instructive plays. joe byron ypy oyoy dnhndvshdsfyfvhhvbfrhbfvrhybebfhbfrhbsdfbndbnbdfwbdcbfwbhbchb
Spoiler de révélation Im really enjoying this, didn’t realize how rare good Zelda fanfics were. It’ good hope this keeps updatingg
Love the story so far excellent pacing and action. Although I do hope to see more chapters.
Loving the story so far Interesting plot and good story development. Hope to see more chapters.
Me sorprendió la estética del personaje, en conjunto con el ambiente de realidad reflejado en la verdadera escencia del mundo demostrando que no todo es color de rosa mejorando la historia y dándole un rumbo que no esperamos
It’s a alright fanfic I recommend other to read it before deciding to follow but for me it’s too meme focused. But again no hate the fic is fine.
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The story is nice 👍 I like it. The fact that you are actually taking creative liberties instead of fallowing canon or plot and still not messing stuff up is amazing. I’ve tried but haven’t succeded Anyway hope you keep going and hope to read more of your amazing fic
The story itself is fine and the general quality is above the average. The main problem comes from the fact that it's written in slang as if it was a 12 yr old.
good FF. hey author make sure one day he manages to reclaimed his throne. because by gerudo law he is the rightful king of gerudo.
idk about the update stability for it as I just found this today but so far I love this story and would like more soon
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i wish it was more ......always liked rare fanfics shame its unfifnished i hope the author at least starts another story if he got bored with this one.