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This book is way too awesome to be alone. The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page. loved this book. The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction. keep it up
The writing is good, grammar is to the point and story progress fascinatingly. The mystery element around which the story revolves is to the point, and it will make you seek the answers more and more with each passing chapter.
The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author
I've fallen in love with this novel, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!
The opening was just a banger and will hook you up into the story right from the start. The writings are super good and easy to follow. The pacing of the story is incredible and straightforward! Keep up the good work!All the best....
author did a pretty good job depicting the character and the world building is quite fresh.i like it overall.
Love reading this book, Very interesting plot, recommend this book to all readers, will be waiting for the next chapter👍😊 keep up your great work
Just added this i believe I'm really going to like this so you'll definitely be getting a more in depth review soon.
The author surely knows how to conduct a great story amidst the elements of warfare this is great. the beginning was gripping, and excellently crafted by the author. it shows the tension there is stress in the air. id recommend this book!! its very different from books here on web novel
Excellent work of author. I love the world in this book. Excellent plot and characters design. Easy to read. Will recommend to everyone. This book is so good. Can’t wait for the next chapter to release. Author keep up your good work. You’re great author. 👍😊
I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story! This kind of genre usually hooks me, and you're nailing it. Keep up the fantastic work!
This novel reminds me of Saga of Tanya the Evil. Well, that's how I visualize the story as I keep on reading. The writing style is easy to follow and understand. The length of every chapter is quite short although it never fails to the intensity of every chapter. But If there's one thing to point out though, it's probably the introduction of the power of the MC. It takes me a few minutes to understand how her power works. Although, her power is interesting and I'm interested in how it will develop and be integrated into the story.
Amazing opening chapter! I had literal goosebumps. I would prefer the use of past tense and small improvements that I saw others commented on. I love the storyline so far! Keep up the hard work!
I feel like the start can be build up a little more to give more emotions. I like the story and the mystery that surrounds the arrival of the girl. Its written well
This is surprisingly good. Let's talk about the Story, I think the Prologue could be longer, but all in all, it's intriguing to read. The Mystery of the MC is one thing to anticipate, as well. The World Background isn't bad. I like Chaos. I like it better if you could deliver them in which it'll be a hit to our emotions when reading it. Most of the Writing Quality is OK, but you know it, the use of Continuous Dialogue, ("), and the Grammar could be Improved a little by little. Overall? It's an Enjoying Read. I won't remove it from my Library, and I'll wait until it got more Chapters. I wish you the best.
This work will surely catch readers' attention from the first chapter. The flow of reading is smooth while still giving vivid descriptions of character and the scenery. But you should consider narrating in past tense, since it's most appropriate for narration. Also, in a sad scene, you should scan for opportunities to amplify the emotions through your pacing. Overall, the flow of your story is well executed, and I really liked it.
This author has skillfully crafted an engaging narrative that captivates the reader from start to finish. A remarkable ability to create a sense of anticipation and excitement throughout the story. I find myself eagerly turning the pages, drawn in by the author's descriptive language and well-developed characters. Loved it~
I'm loving this novel! The story and world-building is incredibly great. It has a touch of mystery since the meteor that was clashed at the ruin village that was raid by armed soldiers, that meteor seems to manifest and materialize into one of the victims there. Keep writing! ^_^
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The storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the action so well that it enabled readers to have a great read. This is an exciting book that fans would undoubtedly enjoy. It is a gripping adventure with great characters and an exciting plot.
The first chapter is so tragic, and it adds spice to your story! I hope the chapter will be long🤗
This well-written piece is an easy and relaxing read. I enjoyed the world building and looking forward for more! Keep up the good work!
Overall nothing to say other than it's great, get's you wanting to read more and more as you keep reading! Also a very different and interesting plot that I have never seen.
intresting story line, and the world building on just a few chapters makes it really immersive, alongside the easy to understand writing style it's a really good read.
As far as I read, you have managed to create a great build-up to the plot, I am sure when things further unfold we're in for a great surprise.
I love great military stories and this book is one of them. I throughly enjoys and can't wait to continue reading on. The characters are refreshing too! Well done, author.
Read the synopsis and the chapter and true me it's good...I recommend it; if you love demon slayer than you will love this[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The writing is passable and even greater than that. Grammar is fine and readable. I can say I am not bored at all while reading! Kudos for a job well done! [img=recommend]
WOW! I loved how the story dives head-first into a myriad of chaos from the very first page! Although it ended in devastation. I love how sympathy-invoking your show of emotion is and how the characters have quite a realistic feel to them. A fantastic read! Good job!
This is the second time review the novel .Guys , you don't know what you lose by no reading this novel .It is a dramatic masterpiece ! Please support the author that for real is doing a great job !
This book is way too awesome to be alone. The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page. loved this book. The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction. keep it up
The writing is good, grammar is to the point and story progress fascinatingly. The mystery element around which the story revolves is to the point, and it will make you seek the answers more and more with each passing chapter.
The start is impressive. The flow seemed good and the conversation also paced well. The author did a good job in giving explanations wherever necessary and the writing quality is also good. Keep up the good work author
I've fallen in love with this novel, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
An easy to read novel with good narration and good plot, the sentence structure is on par with most of the good novels here, I hope you keep writing author this is great!
The opening was just a banger and will hook you up into the story right from the start. The writings are super good and easy to follow. The pacing of the story is incredible and straightforward! Keep up the good work!All the best....
author did a pretty good job depicting the character and the world building is quite fresh.i like it overall.
Love reading this book, Very interesting plot, recommend this book to all readers, will be waiting for the next chapter👍😊 keep up your great work
Just added this i believe I'm really going to like this so you'll definitely be getting a more in depth review soon.
The author surely knows how to conduct a great story amidst the elements of warfare this is great. the beginning was gripping, and excellently crafted by the author. it shows the tension there is stress in the air. id recommend this book!! its very different from books here on web novel
Excellent work of author. I love the world in this book. Excellent plot and characters design. Easy to read. Will recommend to everyone. This book is so good. Can’t wait for the next chapter to release. Author keep up your good work. You’re great author. 👍😊
I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story! This kind of genre usually hooks me, and you're nailing it. Keep up the fantastic work!
This novel reminds me of Saga of Tanya the Evil. Well, that's how I visualize the story as I keep on reading. The writing style is easy to follow and understand. The length of every chapter is quite short although it never fails to the intensity of every chapter. But If there's one thing to point out though, it's probably the introduction of the power of the MC. It takes me a few minutes to understand how her power works. Although, her power is interesting and I'm interested in how it will develop and be integrated into the story.
Amazing opening chapter! I had literal goosebumps. I would prefer the use of past tense and small improvements that I saw others commented on. I love the storyline so far! Keep up the hard work!
I feel like the start can be build up a little more to give more emotions. I like the story and the mystery that surrounds the arrival of the girl. Its written well
This is surprisingly good. Let's talk about the Story, I think the Prologue could be longer, but all in all, it's intriguing to read. The Mystery of the MC is one thing to anticipate, as well. The World Background isn't bad. I like Chaos. I like it better if you could deliver them in which it'll be a hit to our emotions when reading it. Most of the Writing Quality is OK, but you know it, the use of Continuous Dialogue, ("), and the Grammar could be Improved a little by little. Overall? It's an Enjoying Read. I won't remove it from my Library, and I'll wait until it got more Chapters. I wish you the best.
This work will surely catch readers' attention from the first chapter. The flow of reading is smooth while still giving vivid descriptions of character and the scenery. But you should consider narrating in past tense, since it's most appropriate for narration. Also, in a sad scene, you should scan for opportunities to amplify the emotions through your pacing. Overall, the flow of your story is well executed, and I really liked it.
This author has skillfully crafted an engaging narrative that captivates the reader from start to finish. A remarkable ability to create a sense of anticipation and excitement throughout the story. I find myself eagerly turning the pages, drawn in by the author's descriptive language and well-developed characters. Loved it~
I'm loving this novel! The story and world-building is incredibly great. It has a touch of mystery since the meteor that was clashed at the ruin village that was raid by armed soldiers, that meteor seems to manifest and materialize into one of the victims there. Keep writing! ^_^
Spoiler de révélation The storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the action so well that it enabled readers to have a great read. This is an exciting book that fans would undoubtedly enjoy. It is a gripping adventure with great characters and an exciting plot.
The first chapter is so tragic, and it adds spice to your story! I hope the chapter will be long🤗
This well-written piece is an easy and relaxing read. I enjoyed the world building and looking forward for more! Keep up the good work!
Overall nothing to say other than it's great, get's you wanting to read more and more as you keep reading! Also a very different and interesting plot that I have never seen.
intresting story line, and the world building on just a few chapters makes it really immersive, alongside the easy to understand writing style it's a really good read.
As far as I read, you have managed to create a great build-up to the plot, I am sure when things further unfold we're in for a great surprise.
I love great military stories and this book is one of them. I throughly enjoys and can't wait to continue reading on. The characters are refreshing too! Well done, author.
Read the synopsis and the chapter and true me it's good...I recommend it; if you love demon slayer than you will love this[img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The writing is passable and even greater than that. Grammar is fine and readable. I can say I am not bored at all while reading! Kudos for a job well done! [img=recommend]
WOW! I loved how the story dives head-first into a myriad of chaos from the very first page! Although it ended in devastation. I love how sympathy-invoking your show of emotion is and how the characters have quite a realistic feel to them. A fantastic read! Good job!
This is the second time review the novel .Guys , you don't know what you lose by no reading this novel .It is a dramatic masterpiece ! Please support the author that for real is doing a great job !