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Story is good but its pathetic its out 2 month and 14 chapters..author makes promises about releasing chapters but then excuse after excuse after excuse..not worth it anymore. Worth a quick read but dont get hopes up for alot of chapters lol 95% its be dropped or take 2 month for like 7 chapters more
im sorry to say if u love dragons u should not read this ... mc is not dragon like at all ... ophis somehow turn our dragonkin into a dragon yet nothing but the inside change he dont become a dragon he stays and looks like an ugly humna that he is to dumb it down a human turned devil but if u just change out the devil part with dragon ... he gained dragon wings and some mini horns ... and of the story itself its just meh intro = clan wipeout.. runs into the forest dies wow he survives now he meet up akeno and her famaly and become their pet lizard that actually dont even look like a dragon so woopie doo im really tierd of all these wanna be dragons stories thats why this one is geting more rage then praise
Shameless review here by author, but this is my hope for the future of my novel. The book was originally a wish-fulfillment idea that I had, but I wanted to not make it pure wish fulfillment. I'll update with a fixed schedule and welcome any and all comments, provided they aren't disrespectful to me, the author, or the readers who might or might not enjoy the book. Give it a try, let me know if you like it, or if you don't, so I can improve it.
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Story is good but its pathetic its out 2 month and 14 chapters..author makes promises about releasing chapters but then excuse after excuse after excuse..not worth it anymore. Worth a quick read but dont get hopes up for alot of chapters lol 95% its be dropped or take 2 month for like 7 chapters more
im sorry to say if u love dragons u should not read this ... mc is not dragon like at all ... ophis somehow turn our dragonkin into a dragon yet nothing but the inside change he dont become a dragon he stays and looks like an ugly humna that he is to dumb it down a human turned devil but if u just change out the devil part with dragon ... he gained dragon wings and some mini horns ... and of the story itself its just meh intro = clan wipeout.. runs into the forest dies wow he survives now he meet up akeno and her famaly and become their pet lizard that actually dont even look like a dragon so woopie doo im really tierd of all these wanna be dragons stories thats why this one is geting more rage then praise
Shameless review here by author, but this is my hope for the future of my novel. The book was originally a wish-fulfillment idea that I had, but I wanted to not make it pure wish fulfillment. I'll update with a fixed schedule and welcome any and all comments, provided they aren't disrespectful to me, the author, or the readers who might or might not enjoy the book. Give it a try, let me know if you like it, or if you don't, so I can improve it.