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The grammar issue does not hinder my continuous reading. This is a story that, um, I can't share with others, but I really like it. Please update more, dear author.
good novel, there are some grammar problem starting at chapter 30 but overall it is still good. nonetheless starting from chapter 115 it is another novel so we expect the author to review his work
This book is a light and enjoyable read! It blends elements of the harem, martial arts, and supernatural genres, but with a twist. The protagonist is not your typical hero but a character filled with human weaknesses. Despite having powerful magic, he continuously learns new skills like martial arts and qi cultivation. The female characters in the book are also quite different from the usual tropes. They are not just emotional supports but each displays an independent and rich personality. Through these characters, the author explores complex human nature and emotional conflicts, adding depth to the story. Furthermore, the author's descriptions of combat scenes are vivid and exciting, making the reader feel like they can hear the whistling and impact of the fights. The protagonist's growth is also captivating, as his transformation is not immediate but the result of numerous hardships and challenges, making his growth process feel authentic.
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This book is so exciting! It has everything: a harem, martial arts, and supernatural powers! The protagonist's magic is an absolute force in this chaotic world! What's more, he doesn't miss out on any of the beautiful women, making it every man's dream! It feels like there will be even more forbidden love later on, which is thrilling! The plot is extremely interesting, each fight is exhilarating, and the protagonist's growth is very reasonable, not an overnight success, which makes it very relatable! I recommend it to those who enjoy reading exciting stories with male protagonists, you won't be disappointed!
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Spoiler de révélation The grammar issue does not hinder my continuous reading. This is a story that, um, I can't share with others, but I really like it. Please update more, dear author.
good novel, there are some grammar problem starting at chapter 30 but overall it is still good. nonetheless starting from chapter 115 it is another novel so we expect the author to review his work
This book is a light and enjoyable read! It blends elements of the harem, martial arts, and supernatural genres, but with a twist. The protagonist is not your typical hero but a character filled with human weaknesses. Despite having powerful magic, he continuously learns new skills like martial arts and qi cultivation. The female characters in the book are also quite different from the usual tropes. They are not just emotional supports but each displays an independent and rich personality. Through these characters, the author explores complex human nature and emotional conflicts, adding depth to the story. Furthermore, the author's descriptions of combat scenes are vivid and exciting, making the reader feel like they can hear the whistling and impact of the fights. The protagonist's growth is also captivating, as his transformation is not immediate but the result of numerous hardships and challenges, making his growth process feel authentic.
Spoiler de révélation This book is so exciting! It has everything: a harem, martial arts, and supernatural powers! The protagonist's magic is an absolute force in this chaotic world! What's more, he doesn't miss out on any of the beautiful women, making it every man's dream! It feels like there will be even more forbidden love later on, which is thrilling! The plot is extremely interesting, each fight is exhilarating, and the protagonist's growth is very reasonable, not an overnight success, which makes it very relatable! I recommend it to those who enjoy reading exciting stories with male protagonists, you won't be disappointed!
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