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A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.
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Good romance. 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars
AUTHOR I LOVE IT GIMME MOREMOREMORE MC's so ruthless, not some weak spineless slug And the plot isn't boring. The girls are not just hot, they have personality--this is so rare. Just wish there was more chapters.
its cool to see a new book by a great author, i have read his other books and hope he can keep this one going for a long time. ///////////////
Truly give this a chance. Books true beginning is at chapter 5. The Author is really good with prose and cares about the characters. Its something both guys and girls will enjoy. Coz its got both action and romance.
Wow! I was so immersed in reading the story that I forgot the time! Definitely something worth reading!I'm not too far into the story yet, but I'm getting the feeling that MC isn't so simple. Love the comedy though, definitely got me smiling there 😂Great work and more chapters! 🤤
You can't go wrong with this book. The MC is a crack-up. The novel is definitely well-written and has almost nonexistent grammar errors. Good luck author in WSA.
A wonderful story and definitely want to read more of it. Hoping the author doesn’t give up on it just as much wishing for it to be successful. Thanks for the work!
I’m no seer, but I foresee this doing quite a lot better than your previous contracted story just because of how many boxes it checks when it comes to male webnovel readership criteria. Good luck! Dropping a review because I want a part in your success haha :)
Enjoying villain novels, but tired of the same 'in the novel' plot? Caught up to Oshi No Ko or D3's Versatile Superstar and want more? I can't say I'll definitely match up to these works, but I'll do my best. A few notes for any potential readers: Writing quality will be top notch. Lemons will be juicy, and will be labeled. The harem will have 3-4 members, all of them having personalities and motivations of their own. If you don't like most harem books, still give it a shot and let me know what you think. The MC doesn't start off knowing everything, and grows as the novel progresses. Updates- 2-4 chapters per day.
I have been searching for novels to read that are not made by GPT. This... This is the one I found, and I enjoyed reading it. The story was not that typical copy-edit plot, at least for now... That is the selling point. Excellent work, author.
A unique name and an intresting story, with the information in sypnosis and the few chaps I read, There is a huge potential in this novel if the pace and quality is matched. weldone author.
Type your review here. Please write your review as detailed as you can. Your reviews would be very important to the story (at least 140 characters).
Good romance. 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars5 stars 5 stars
AUTHOR I LOVE IT GIMME MOREMOREMORE MC's so ruthless, not some weak spineless slug And the plot isn't boring. The girls are not just hot, they have personality--this is so rare. Just wish there was more chapters.
its cool to see a new book by a great author, i have read his other books and hope he can keep this one going for a long time. ///////////////
Truly give this a chance. Books true beginning is at chapter 5. The Author is really good with prose and cares about the characters. Its something both guys and girls will enjoy. Coz its got both action and romance.
Wow! I was so immersed in reading the story that I forgot the time! Definitely something worth reading!I'm not too far into the story yet, but I'm getting the feeling that MC isn't so simple. Love the comedy though, definitely got me smiling there 😂Great work and more chapters! 🤤
You can't go wrong with this book. The MC is a crack-up. The novel is definitely well-written and has almost nonexistent grammar errors. Good luck author in WSA.
A wonderful story and definitely want to read more of it. Hoping the author doesn’t give up on it just as much wishing for it to be successful. Thanks for the work!
I’m no seer, but I foresee this doing quite a lot better than your previous contracted story just because of how many boxes it checks when it comes to male webnovel readership criteria. Good luck! Dropping a review because I want a part in your success haha :)
Enjoying villain novels, but tired of the same 'in the novel' plot? Caught up to Oshi No Ko or D3's Versatile Superstar and want more? I can't say I'll definitely match up to these works, but I'll do my best. A few notes for any potential readers: Writing quality will be top notch. Lemons will be juicy, and will be labeled. The harem will have 3-4 members, all of them having personalities and motivations of their own. If you don't like most harem books, still give it a shot and let me know what you think. The MC doesn't start off knowing everything, and grows as the novel progresses. Updates- 2-4 chapters per day.
I have been searching for novels to read that are not made by GPT. This... This is the one I found, and I enjoyed reading it. The story was not that typical copy-edit plot, at least for now... That is the selling point. Excellent work, author.