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So far the story is good as of now there is only 6 chapters and story has already progressed so I think this may be a short story with like 50-60 chapters well these things apart eagerly waiting for the mew chapter release🙂 Also the main character looks a bit realistic he does not do things irrationally
I must say for a new author your work is remarkable though you say english is your third language and this novel may have many gramatical errrors but so far i haven't found one the phrases and sentence are fine and the choices of words too. As for the story it's hard to say since only 3 chapters are avaialable, though the start looks promosing hope it maintains the pace and don't give up in the middle of work. As for the writing style it can be improved further as its not much engaging plus the chapters are also short try to improve that.
ehh, author here! This one right here is my very first novel on this platform I, hope you all like it if there is any error or issue you find then kindly say it I, will try my best to fix it. Also don't expect too much from this novel as am only a beginner 😞
New to this app previously used to read novels on scribbleh@b tried this app and found some really interesting stories this one is also one of then hope to see more such interesting stories in future
So far the story is good as of now there is only 6 chapters and story has already progressed so I think this may be a short story with like 50-60 chapters well these things apart eagerly waiting for the mew chapter release🙂 Also the main character looks a bit realistic he does not do things irrationally
I must say for a new author your work is remarkable though you say english is your third language and this novel may have many gramatical errrors but so far i haven't found one the phrases and sentence are fine and the choices of words too. As for the story it's hard to say since only 3 chapters are avaialable, though the start looks promosing hope it maintains the pace and don't give up in the middle of work. As for the writing style it can be improved further as its not much engaging plus the chapters are also short try to improve that.
ehh, author here! This one right here is my very first novel on this platform I, hope you all like it if there is any error or issue you find then kindly say it I, will try my best to fix it. Also don't expect too much from this novel as am only a beginner 😞
New to this app previously used to read novels on scribbleh@b tried this app and found some really interesting stories this one is also one of then hope to see more such interesting stories in future