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Erika_Bernwald

the time skips are too frequent and come without forewarning. one moment he is 11 suddenly ace gets a bounty and the luffy too fast. around the war the writing style starts changing drastically for the worse

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liqeye
LV 13 Badge

it was a good start but it failed my expectations. I was expecting some more focus on him researching haki and other skills innovating things with it but they just summarized it by saying 4 years has pass and no explanation. they just say his strong yet and good at teaching. they didn't explain what he learned in the 4 years time skip and focused more on the story. I just thought it could be more awesome if he focus on that cause he has ultimate comprehension.

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D1vineMonarch

I'll be honest, the name of the story caught my attention, but, just reading the synopsis I gave up, just reading it I already felt a headache, if I read the story I'm going to have a stroke...

1yr
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Erika_Bernwald

the time skips are too frequent and come without forewarning. one moment he is 11 suddenly ace gets a bounty and the luffy too fast. around the war the writing style starts changing drastically for the worse

5mth
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liqeye
LV 13 Badge

it was a good start but it failed my expectations. I was expecting some more focus on him researching haki and other skills innovating things with it but they just summarized it by saying 4 years has pass and no explanation. they just say his strong yet and good at teaching. they didn't explain what he learned in the 4 years time skip and focused more on the story. I just thought it could be more awesome if he focus on that cause he has ultimate comprehension.

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11mth
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D1vineMonarch

I'll be honest, the name of the story caught my attention, but, just reading the synopsis I gave up, just reading it I already felt a headache, if I read the story I'm going to have a stroke...

1yr
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