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Écrire un avisit was a good start but it failed my expectations. I was expecting some more focus on him researching haki and other skills innovating things with it but they just summarized it by saying 4 years has pass and no explanation. they just say his strong yet and good at teaching. they didn't explain what he learned in the 4 years time skip and focused more on the story. I just thought it could be more awesome if he focus on that cause he has ultimate comprehension.
Spoiler de révélationthe time skips are too frequent and come without forewarning. one moment he is 11 suddenly ace gets a bounty and the luffy too fast. around the war the writing style starts changing drastically for the worse
it was a good start but it failed my expectations. I was expecting some more focus on him researching haki and other skills innovating things with it but they just summarized it by saying 4 years has pass and no explanation. they just say his strong yet and good at teaching. they didn't explain what he learned in the 4 years time skip and focused more on the story. I just thought it could be more awesome if he focus on that cause he has ultimate comprehension.
Spoiler de révélation
the time skips are too frequent and come without forewarning. one moment he is 11 suddenly ace gets a bounty and the luffy too fast. around the war the writing style starts changing drastically for the worse