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warning: it was the first time I wrote anything so expect a lot of grammatical mistake.
Dawn lived a life full of regret. He always regretted his life choices. Thankfully, it wasn't over for him.
One night after being lectured by his father he suddenly woke up in a strange new world, filled with magic.
In the magical world, Dawn was able to awaken two Heaven-defying talents never seen before in the history of mankind.
Armed with the power to summon creatures from another dimension and supplemented by his levelling system.
He will stop at nothing to achieve his goal of Eternal life.
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"Oh, you can defeat one barbarian, what about 10,000 barbarians," Dawn said with an indifferent voice.
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this is a great one a hidden gem. would[img=update] love faster updates and it misses words but still one of the best i have read on here monsters are powerful and don't get left behind after the host gets stronger its a problem i have with several novels i have read on here. would love to be able to give gifts to the wrighter [img=recommend]
Keep ut the good work bro Although there are some grammatical mistake but it doesn't matter as long the story continues people are even willing to read on MTL😂
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What can I say.. this novel left me speechless, what a wonderful novel :cries tears of joy: best novel I read in like forever, well executed, author knows what he is doing. Very likable and relatable mc, very good plot and development. All in all, you should absolutely read it!!!!
The writing quality is decent it can use a bit of cleaning up, but is still very clear. The story has a fast development but it's clear enough that you don't get lost. The Mc is a generic loan wolf like most cultivation novels. As for the world there is still a lot to be filled in, but the descriptions are good enough that you can understand what is going on. Overall a decent book, just needs a bit more flare
The novel is different from traditional eastern novel, the author had introduced several new scenerio of his not seen in the traditional ones. The grammatical mistakes are there but they are acceptable. Character are few but have depth to their chracters
So first things first I personally got confused In the few first chaps, but as I read more the stories progression cleared up my confusion, there are a few minor grammatical mistakes but It doesn't Impact the reading quality, personally I like the aspect that the author decided to make technology a supporting role for the cultivation aspect overall I highly recommend reading this book.
Awesome to hear you finally write a story, because i'm like you and now i'm not yet write a story, because my English still bad for write, but for advice you must have learn more about writing and make the reader fall in love with that, skill MC, world building, and story sometimes good sometimes bored, and finally i drop it, sorry bro, but glad to see you start writing, keep it up bro good luck, you have good idea for a story
World building is bit vague, the world mc is in isn't properly explained. His background remains a mystery not much is known about it. Please increase the update stability 2 chapters a day
52 chapters and this novel isn't ranked among the top ten, Update stability- generally one chapter a day. Grammar- there are some mistakes here and there but they can be ignored. Thr writing is somewhat vague if author can improve, then it will be good
Waiting for more, I hope the author keep updating. The pace is a bit slow I hope the author will work on that. The story is Mc focused, white there are side characters, theu aren't explored much.
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The story is engaging with a relatable mc, the cheat is balanced and the power system is new and unique. Although there are some grammatical mistakes by they are acceptable, release frequency is decent.
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Spoiler de révélationVolume 1
- 1 Hopeful tommorow! 1 years ago
- 2 Sudden attack 1 years ago
- 3 Teleport 1 years ago
- 4 Frozen Graveyard 1 years ago
- 5 First summon: Barbarian 1 years ago
- 6 Cunning Clouded leopard 1 years ago
- 7 Flames of war 1 years ago
- 8 Why not? 1 years ago
- 9 Duma Duma 1 years ago
- 10 despair 1 years ago
- 11 Phantom archer 1 years ago
- 12 Body refining rank 5 1 years ago
- 13 mana attributes 1 years ago
- 14 Voidwalker's flow 1 years ago
- 15 Mysterious entity 1 years ago
- 16 goldfire mine 1 years ago
- 17 8 km Down Below 1 years ago
- 18 Ellora's magic 1 years ago
- 19 faceless monster 1 years ago
- 20 white demon 1 years ago
- 21 barbarian king 1 years ago
- 22 New summon - Wizard 1 years ago
- 23 Tribulation 1 years ago
- 24 Soulless Ajanta 1 years ago
- 25 Ender's 1 years ago
- 26 Flow state 1 years ago
- 27 Selling Enders meat 1 years ago
- 28 Wild Star Pavilion 1 years ago
- 29 Abducted? 1 years ago
- 30 Extreme Yin Demon 1 years ago
- 31 Mysterious marble 1 years ago
- 32 BloodMoon Empyrean 1 years ago
- 33 Empyrean trial 1 years ago
- 34 Mary White 1 years ago
- 35 White Haired Young Man 1 years ago
- 36 Light Speed 1 years ago
- 37 Peak of Body Refining Realm 1 years ago
- 38 Rain of Arrows 1 years ago
- 39 Jewel of Emptiness 1 years ago
- 40 Another Unique Skill? 1 years ago
- 41 Mana Bending 1 years ago
- 42 Lucy's Jealousy 1 years ago
- 43 Academy Selection 1 years ago
- 44 The fearsome Potential 1 years ago
- 45 Bowl in one hand 1 years ago
- 46 Strange situation 1 years ago
- 47 Powerless 1 years ago
- 48 Capital of the Empire. 1 years ago
- 49 Avon academy of Magic 1 years ago
- 50 Angela Blackheart. 1 years ago
- 51 Potential Students 1 years ago
- 52 Forceful Sugar 1 years ago
- 53 Conquest? 1 years ago
- 54 Havok Tribe 1 years ago
- 55 Cruel World 1 years ago
- 56 Changes in Summoning talent 1 years ago
- 57 Peculiar Wizard 1 years ago
- 58 Liam Green Heaven 1 years ago
- 59 Ray BlackMansion 1 years ago
- 60 The postive thinker 1 years ago
- 61 Channel Grade 1 years ago
- 62 Where is peace? 1 years ago
- 63 Main army of Havok tribe 1 years ago
- 64 Zampa 1 years ago
- 65 Charismatic Commander 1 years ago
- 66 Disbelief 1 years ago
- 67 Respect the dead 1 years ago
- 68 Dradevows 1 years ago
- 69 Begin 1 years ago
- 70 Cyrus Ripper 1 years ago
- 71 Resolution 1 years ago
- 72 Strange behaviour of the summons 1 years ago
- 73 Channel Contruction Realm Zombie 1 years ago
- 74 Fusion of unique skills 1 years ago
- 75 100 feet behemoth taking action 1 years ago
- 76 Second appearance of Barabrian kings 1 years ago
- 77 One step closer 1 years ago
- 78 Frustration 1 years ago
- 79 Trial 3 completed! 1 years ago
- 80 Lack of Empathy 1 years ago
- 81 Running for his life 1 years ago
- 82 Sea of Zombies 1 years ago
- 83 New skill :Flow Reversal 1 years ago
- 84 Getting serious 1 years ago
- 85 Black Abyss Death 1 years ago
- 86 Channel construction realm 1 years ago
- 87 New Summons! 1 years ago
- 88 Return 1 years ago
- 89 A Barbarian that can speak 1 years ago
- 90 Apple of Vitality 1 years ago
- 91 New summon: Dragon 1 years ago
- 92 Hungry Barbarian 1 years ago
- 93 territory upgrade 1 years ago
- 94 unfair 1 years ago
- 95 fatty Nick 1 years ago
- 96 lab Rat 1 years ago
- 97 Collateral 1 years ago
- 98 Dark wing city 1 years ago
- 99 Noble's 1 years ago
- 100 Ghost poison 1 years ago
- 101 Nothing to feed. 1 years ago
- 102 Second appearance of the dragon 1 years ago
- 103 Greedy senior 1 years ago
- 104 Giant spoon 1 years ago
- 105 Kiara 1 years ago
- 106 Death by a slap? 1 years ago
- 107 targeted killing. 1 years ago
- 108 why does she sound like a salesman 1 years ago
- 109 anyone more ignorant than him 1 years ago
- 110 flame avalanche 1 years ago
- 111 Bug Queen 1 years ago
- 112 what's really important. 1 years ago
- 113 something to die for 1 years ago
- 114 clone machine 1 years ago
- 115 naughty girls should be punished 1 years ago
- 116 no chance to resist 1 years ago
- 117 Setting up a agency 1 years ago
- 118 Phoenix Empire Envoy 1 years ago
- 119 interrogation 1 years ago
- 120 experts also makes mistakes 1 years ago
- 121 lonely at the top 1 years ago
- 122 familiar faces 1 years ago
- 123 once again 1 years ago
- 124 super popular 1 years ago
- 125 hope 1 years ago
- 126 funny situation 1 years ago
- 127 sometimes a beating is the only thing that you need 1 years ago
- 128 what two idiots have in common 1 years ago
- 129 How can someone take him lightly 1 years ago
Writing for fun 😌 English is not my first language and I was thinking about writing from a long time, plan on writing for a long time.After reading all the popular novels in existence I decided to write on of my own