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this story has many plotholes , pretty much same story like Itachi but still iIshed tears , truly beautiful
Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 0
Let me tell you this Author you deserve my Highest Respect for this Fic the only one that made me go soft during the final Chapters
Even though it was fast paced and short it was beautiful and near perfect for a fanfic. Thank you very much~ 📝📖📚
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It was a bit difficult to read in terms of grammar, however if you can overlook it then the story is well worth the time
this fanfic was short but It was so good. from character design to story development, everything was amazing
It's a great story, and I personally really liked it. The grammar is not very good though but that's the only thing I disliked with the whole story! Definitely recommend that everyone reads this.
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It's one of those different PoV stories, where you dont really change much, just one element, but it slowly with cause and effect starts shaping a whole new story. I like it, and kind of inspiring me to write another Naruto Fic xD. 4.6/5 for me up to the opening 10 chappies. My advice would be to develop the MC's character a bit more, as well as Itachi's new development, for now the MC kind of doesnt have that impact. Maybe give him a quirk? yes watching clouds as laying in the grass is a good start, but give him more character ya know? anyway good luck.
This is a piece of art I liked it a lot but to be honest it ended quickly and I also feel that you did not exhaust yourself in making the main character as his personality is similar to Itachi and the same shape
this story has many plotholes , pretty much same story like Itachi but still iIshed tears , truly beautiful
Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 2 Character Design 1 World Background 0
Let me tell you this Author you deserve my Highest Respect for this Fic the only one that made me go soft during the final Chapters
Even though it was fast paced and short it was beautiful and near perfect for a fanfic. Thank you very much~ 📝📖📚
Spoiler de révélation It was a bit difficult to read in terms of grammar, however if you can overlook it then the story is well worth the time
this fanfic was short but It was so good. from character design to story development, everything was amazing
It's a great story, and I personally really liked it. The grammar is not very good though but that's the only thing I disliked with the whole story! Definitely recommend that everyone reads this.
Such a nice little story would recommend[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].
It's one of those different PoV stories, where you dont really change much, just one element, but it slowly with cause and effect starts shaping a whole new story. I like it, and kind of inspiring me to write another Naruto Fic xD. 4.6/5 for me up to the opening 10 chappies. My advice would be to develop the MC's character a bit more, as well as Itachi's new development, for now the MC kind of doesnt have that impact. Maybe give him a quirk? yes watching clouds as laying in the grass is a good start, but give him more character ya know? anyway good luck.
This is a piece of art I liked it a lot but to be honest it ended quickly and I also feel that you did not exhaust yourself in making the main character as his personality is similar to Itachi and the same shape