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Author ash, thank you for such wonderful story. I cried at the ending but I love it so much I couldn’t get over the characters when I finished. Though at first I didn’t think the story was that interesting until I reached the time when the ML and FL romance started to get intense! I hope to read more of your books!🥹🥹
Does it end well I don't like the ending of demon prince ?? yet I'm shamelessly reviewing ☺️☺️ cos I'm a fan
I LOVE THIS BOOK ❤️❤️. I'll definitely miss the characters😭, and I also love the ending❤️💖. Dear Author, you did a really good job 👍❣️
Loved this book. It made me laugh and cry. Amazing characters that touch your heart. One of the best books I’ve ever read
I recently discovered this book, and it's been a fantastic read so far with an amazing plot and characters. The pacing is just right. So far so good!
All I can say is don’t judge a book by it cover! I loved it! it was worth my time.👌🏻😘
The first aspect that stands out from this novel is its descriptions. The author is clearly well-versed in descriptive and immersive writing, crafting heartfelt scenes that invoke the desired emotions from readers. However, I'm sometimes overwhelmed by the abundance of adjectives in a single sentence—with minimal commas separating them no less—and have to reread whole paragraphs. Personally, some paragraphs would read easier if they were separated into several sentences with at most two consecutive adjectives.Character-wise, the antagonists and villains were appropriately annoying despite some being cliché, whereas the main character has her quirks. Her sassy personality stands out despite her unfavourable circumstances, and adds a layer of unpredictability to her actions or words. The male lead is kinda pitiable in terms of backstory, but he looks strong enough to overcome it and undergo some interesting development. Arranged marriages/fated partners aren't my favourite tropes, though if executed well, I think this story won't stray into Annoyingville, but rather a journey of mutual healing, overcoming stigmas, and slow, sweet romance.All the best for WSA, author.
Yes! Finally, a beautiful dragon love story that sweeps me away. I am so excited to read this story, please keep up the legacy of this story!
It's a nice story. Only a few chapters and I'm already loving it. Even the synopsis is intriguing. I like it, keep up the good work author 👍❤
Wow😍 just wow!!!😍😍😍 Just read the first chapter and it was AWESOME!!! Another book from my now favorite author, as if the last one wasn't great enough, took the reader on a roller coaster of emotions, had high expectations for your second book, and you certainly delivered right from the first chapter so great job!!! Can't wait for more updates of this book, I have a feeling it's going to be 🔥🔥💯
This book is in a class of it's own. Of the books I have read there is hardly any that comes close in comparison. The book while fitting into the transmofiguration theme one has already come across in other publications. It is the excellent diction, the perfect use of grammar that says the author has an excellent command of the English language which helps to bring out the story most beautifully. I 'm impressed. I will certainly add the book to my library.
Beautiful writing. I was so hooked😍😍. I love the setting. can't wait for more updates. You are an amazing writer😘 Keep up the good work. Plus I love dragons❤❤❤
Immersive world building at first chapter. Alina is a powerfull woman make man trust ber and after that take his dragons's core. This is very nice original plot. Keep writing.
The synopsis alone caught my attention as if there was more to it than some words! The plot twist in the first chapter has quite a taste as well! However, using more advanced vocabulary has the potential to make this novel colourful! Keep it up author!
The moment I started reading your first chapter, I was like 'Wow!'. What a beautiful chapter with the near perfect description for the scene. You really should apply for the contract, it's a really work!
A very interesting plot twist from the first chapter, then it unwinds more and more, the interaction of the characters and the world is well written, each chapter reveals something new about the characters and the place where the main character lives. I hope the author continues to publish the story.
Thank you Ash for writing such a wonderful story.🤧 I will miss the characters, most especially Lilac, she always make me smile while reading any of the chapter she's in.
Author ash, thank you for such wonderful story. I cried at the ending but I love it so much I couldn’t get over the characters when I finished. Though at first I didn’t think the story was that interesting until I reached the time when the ML and FL romance started to get intense! I hope to read more of your books!🥹🥹
Does it end well I don't like the ending of demon prince ?? yet I'm shamelessly reviewing ☺️☺️ cos I'm a fan
I LOVE THIS BOOK ❤️❤️. I'll definitely miss the characters😭, and I also love the ending❤️💖. Dear Author, you did a really good job 👍❣️
Loved this book. It made me laugh and cry. Amazing characters that touch your heart. One of the best books I’ve ever read
I recently discovered this book, and it's been a fantastic read so far with an amazing plot and characters. The pacing is just right. So far so good!
All I can say is don’t judge a book by it cover! I loved it! it was worth my time.👌🏻😘
The first aspect that stands out from this novel is its descriptions. The author is clearly well-versed in descriptive and immersive writing, crafting heartfelt scenes that invoke the desired emotions from readers. However, I'm sometimes overwhelmed by the abundance of adjectives in a single sentence—with minimal commas separating them no less—and have to reread whole paragraphs. Personally, some paragraphs would read easier if they were separated into several sentences with at most two consecutive adjectives.Character-wise, the antagonists and villains were appropriately annoying despite some being cliché, whereas the main character has her quirks. Her sassy personality stands out despite her unfavourable circumstances, and adds a layer of unpredictability to her actions or words. The male lead is kinda pitiable in terms of backstory, but he looks strong enough to overcome it and undergo some interesting development. Arranged marriages/fated partners aren't my favourite tropes, though if executed well, I think this story won't stray into Annoyingville, but rather a journey of mutual healing, overcoming stigmas, and slow, sweet romance.All the best for WSA, author.
Yes! Finally, a beautiful dragon love story that sweeps me away. I am so excited to read this story, please keep up the legacy of this story!
It's a nice story. Only a few chapters and I'm already loving it. Even the synopsis is intriguing. I like it, keep up the good work author 👍❤
Wow😍 just wow!!!😍😍😍 Just read the first chapter and it was AWESOME!!! Another book from my now favorite author, as if the last one wasn't great enough, took the reader on a roller coaster of emotions, had high expectations for your second book, and you certainly delivered right from the first chapter so great job!!! Can't wait for more updates of this book, I have a feeling it's going to be 🔥🔥💯
This book is in a class of it's own. Of the books I have read there is hardly any that comes close in comparison. The book while fitting into the transmofiguration theme one has already come across in other publications. It is the excellent diction, the perfect use of grammar that says the author has an excellent command of the English language which helps to bring out the story most beautifully. I 'm impressed. I will certainly add the book to my library.
Beautiful writing. I was so hooked😍😍. I love the setting. can't wait for more updates. You are an amazing writer😘 Keep up the good work. Plus I love dragons❤❤❤
Immersive world building at first chapter. Alina is a powerfull woman make man trust ber and after that take his dragons's core. This is very nice original plot. Keep writing.
The synopsis alone caught my attention as if there was more to it than some words! The plot twist in the first chapter has quite a taste as well! However, using more advanced vocabulary has the potential to make this novel colourful! Keep it up author!
The moment I started reading your first chapter, I was like 'Wow!'. What a beautiful chapter with the near perfect description for the scene. You really should apply for the contract, it's a really work!
A very interesting plot twist from the first chapter, then it unwinds more and more, the interaction of the characters and the world is well written, each chapter reveals something new about the characters and the place where the main character lives. I hope the author continues to publish the story.
Thank you Ash for writing such a wonderful story.🤧 I will miss the characters, most especially Lilac, she always make me smile while reading any of the chapter she's in.