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Please come back we miss you :( You left it of right on a cliff hanger From what I can see You are writing one of the best fanfic novels on this app please don’t drop it. It is a really good book.
It's good, but the entire time it feels as if it was written by a Renaissance era poet trying to get into a dumb teenage girl's panties - waaaaay too many wordy sentences with mindnumbingly pointless flowery language. Any mundane action like taking a shower suddenly has to have fleur of romanticism; anything that can (and should) be said/described in one sentence takes an entire paragraph instead. It is nowhere near as exasperating as usual lazy xianxia copy-paste since at least there was effort put into it, but it is padding nonetheless even if it wasn't meant to be.
honestly it's a pretty good start although I'm a little hesitant because I'm not really looking forward to if he turns out to be a villain.
I love the concept of the story and can't wait for the the second chapter so I have high hopes for this fanfic
Very interesting work, it’s a pity that the work is more dead than alive [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Please come back we miss you :( You left it of right on a cliff hanger From what I can see You are writing one of the best fanfic novels on this app please don’t drop it. It is a really good book.
It's good, but the entire time it feels as if it was written by a Renaissance era poet trying to get into a dumb teenage girl's panties - waaaaay too many wordy sentences with mindnumbingly pointless flowery language. Any mundane action like taking a shower suddenly has to have fleur of romanticism; anything that can (and should) be said/described in one sentence takes an entire paragraph instead. It is nowhere near as exasperating as usual lazy xianxia copy-paste since at least there was effort put into it, but it is padding nonetheless even if it wasn't meant to be.
honestly it's a pretty good start although I'm a little hesitant because I'm not really looking forward to if he turns out to be a villain.
I love the concept of the story and can't wait for the the second chapter so I have high hopes for this fanfic
Very interesting work, it’s a pity that the work is more dead than alive [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]