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I fin the first 27+ chapters. The main problem is that the hero is Ms, and the work is highly concentrated on his achievements, which makes it look fake. + a lot of things are given to him too quickly and easily, there are no losses, no sense of value. The characters are not bad, but they look like animated backgrounds. It would be better if they were independent, had deeper character and didn’t look into the hero’s mouth.
PEAK! PEAK! Peak! Pretty much better than 99% of the author fanfics on this app PEAK! PEAK!
Honestly one of the better skyrim fanfics i have read, the mc has a system but doesn’t get op and broken in 5 chapters. The story is good with new and old characters, and the interactions with reyvin are entertaining. The story definitely does have a lot of comedic elements to keep some of the darker parts a bit lighter. 10/10 would recommend.
So I stopped reading at like chapter 200 or smf and now I plan on rereading, just wanted to ask u author since Sybille is dead do u plan on someone else as the fml or not?, like would u add romance still?
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I don't know anything about skyrim. I have 3 tabs searching things about skyrim, i watched a skyrim lore YT video. 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I first found this at YouTube but I liked it so much that I came looking for it here and found more chapters and even more consistent updates
Greatest Skyrim Epic ever! For now at least. Great storytelling. Best characters. Cool enough action from a reading standpoint. Need more chapters FAST!
I've een reading since Author decided to publish this book and I must say that he captured all the necessary details in telling a story of a reincarnated person in the world of Nirn equipped with lore knowledge. But while it is immersive, I've felt like the MC is nearly curb stomping every enemy he faces. While that is normal considering this is still a wish-fulfilment fanfic, I think it's quite lacking that the MC uses metaknowledge and other facts outside the Elder Scroll Universe. One notable example of this is his unique way of using the Skeleton Key. But still, I look forward for MC to find loopholes and use it to become more powerful. I also wish that the MC has his own set of archnenemies outside of what the Dragonborn is supposed to face. It's already good that he involved the other provinces to expand his power base. A possible avenue for character development or power-ups perhaps? Congratulations for creating a fanfiction in a universe where even the lore becomes complicated and inconsistent.
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Rastislav Keep up the great work You can do this The Witcher fanfic idea after Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale Synopsis: A 19-year-old boy who had played all the Witcher games dies and gets reincarnated into the Witcher at the start of Witcher 2, and He decides to create an empire. He will be feared by his enemies, Respected by his allies, and loved by Women. Escape from Planet Earth characters will Ice Moon Elves instead of aliens. Planet 51 characters will be Highland Orcs instead of aliens Harem 1. Malveera the Mage (Crooked Throne) 2. Yennefer 3. Triss Merigold 4. Kiera Metz 5. Arabella (Hell comes to Frogtown) 6. Cersei Lannister 7. Lena Thackleman (Escape from Planet Earth) 8. Catelyn Tully 9. Lysa Tully 10. Anna Henrietta 11. Jaclyn (Igor) 12. Eva (Igor) 13. Fringilla Vigo 14. Gabby Babblebrock(Escape from Planet Earth) 15. Neera Young(Planet 51) 16. Cheryl Claws (Planet 51) 17. Luna (Planet 51) 18. Peggy Sue (Planet 51) 19. Lily (Planet 51) 20. Susan (Planet 51) 21. Lem’s Mom (no name is given)(custom name is Mandy Korplog) (Planet 51) 22. Sylvia Anna 23. Maria Louisa La Valette 24. Margarita Laux-Antille
Totally worthy of being read, an amazing story with an even more amazing MC, fluent and always entertaining and enjoyable to read, funny when needed and serius too but always good... I have nothing to say against it other than. . . we need Mooore of this Story, Thank you Author-san
This is without a shadow of a doubt the best Skyrim Fanfic Ever, the comedy is flawless(it doesn't feel forced and always makes me laugh with some of the unexpected dialogue). The Story in the beginning was great,though it was getting a bit boring layer on but then bounced back immediately and the best part is we haven't even scratched the surface on the lore of skyrim hek we didn't even reach the dragons return yet. I hope you continue this Fanfic for a long time wish you all the best and thank you for an amazing experience.
Alright…. I’ve caught up to chapter 243 which is the newest one… and I feel the other readers sorrow. Having to wait for chapters when his book is so good. It’s appalling. 😂😤 I’m reading two other books besides this one and it’s hard to go back to those when this one soooo riveting 🤣 can’t get enough of the n’wahs and The magnificent Lord Scorch! Adventure, intrigue, love, deaths 🥺, dragons, Thu’uming people into meat paste! What’s not to love? I hope you write thousands of chapters as this truly a masterpiece and and I can’t wait for more!!!
The writing quality is good and that I’ve never noticed any mistakes that force me to break that suspension of disbelief that One needs when reading a book. It updates pretty consistently. The story development is good and the character design is also really interesting since he’s a dark elf I don’t know if that’s a spoiler, but it does come up pretty soon I think in the first chapter so he does carry some traits to the dark elf mixed with his tendencies of being human, along with an interesting bloodline addition, kind of murders into an interestingly impulsive yet caring yet vicious character. And world background of Skyrim, but not just Skyrim there is a recognition that Morrowind, the Empire elsewhere, and the Somerset Isles all exist, and their existence does have implications, so it feels a bit more flushed out, then just for those stories that follow the dragon plot line.
This is currently my favourite book to read in my library. I love how the characters are portrayed and the constant humour throughout the story. It’s so good I’ve recommended it to my brother who is also a fan of the series and now we both look forward to the chapter updates and like to discuss some chapters that stand out. Keep up the great work!
I love it. The fic has a lot of hilarious moments and it the people of The Elder Scrolls world seem more real and powerful, adhering more to the lore than gameplay.
It's really good, if you enjoy Skyrim at all you'll love it. There's nothing I would say is bad or there being a glaring weakness. It just a fun read.
Nada que decir, la historia está genial, las actualizaciones son rápidas, y el mc es muy fácil de leer, mi única queja es que no hay suficiente romance, de esos con suficiente azúcar para hacer una torre de mago, después de todo romance y aventura son mis géneros favoritos, a este solo le falta lo primero.
I like this fanfic, btw, who will be the future wife? (his friend from solitude is gone from the story now) I would like Minthara as his wife cuz she also has a chance to become longer lived if u find a good way for it what worlds will he travel to later? lord of the rings? if he doesnt find any wife from skyrim maybe find elf there
Spoiler de révélation I fin the first 27+ chapters. The main problem is that the hero is Ms, and the work is highly concentrated on his achievements, which makes it look fake. + a lot of things are given to him too quickly and easily, there are no losses, no sense of value. The characters are not bad, but they look like animated backgrounds. It would be better if they were independent, had deeper character and didn’t look into the hero’s mouth.
PEAK! PEAK! Peak! Pretty much better than 99% of the author fanfics on this app PEAK! PEAK!
Honestly one of the better skyrim fanfics i have read, the mc has a system but doesn’t get op and broken in 5 chapters. The story is good with new and old characters, and the interactions with reyvin are entertaining. The story definitely does have a lot of comedic elements to keep some of the darker parts a bit lighter. 10/10 would recommend.
So I stopped reading at like chapter 200 or smf and now I plan on rereading, just wanted to ask u author since Sybille is dead do u plan on someone else as the fml or not?, like would u add romance still?
Spoiler de révélation I don't know anything about skyrim. I have 3 tabs searching things about skyrim, i watched a skyrim lore YT video. 10/10[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I first found this at YouTube but I liked it so much that I came looking for it here and found more chapters and even more consistent updates
Greatest Skyrim Epic ever! For now at least. Great storytelling. Best characters. Cool enough action from a reading standpoint. Need more chapters FAST!
I've een reading since Author decided to publish this book and I must say that he captured all the necessary details in telling a story of a reincarnated person in the world of Nirn equipped with lore knowledge. But while it is immersive, I've felt like the MC is nearly curb stomping every enemy he faces. While that is normal considering this is still a wish-fulfilment fanfic, I think it's quite lacking that the MC uses metaknowledge and other facts outside the Elder Scroll Universe. One notable example of this is his unique way of using the Skeleton Key. But still, I look forward for MC to find loopholes and use it to become more powerful. I also wish that the MC has his own set of archnenemies outside of what the Dragonborn is supposed to face. It's already good that he involved the other provinces to expand his power base. A possible avenue for character development or power-ups perhaps? Congratulations for creating a fanfiction in a universe where even the lore becomes complicated and inconsistent.
Spoiler de révélation Rastislav Keep up the great work You can do this The Witcher fanfic idea after Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale Synopsis: A 19-year-old boy who had played all the Witcher games dies and gets reincarnated into the Witcher at the start of Witcher 2, and He decides to create an empire. He will be feared by his enemies, Respected by his allies, and loved by Women. Escape from Planet Earth characters will Ice Moon Elves instead of aliens. Planet 51 characters will be Highland Orcs instead of aliens Harem 1. Malveera the Mage (Crooked Throne) 2. Yennefer 3. Triss Merigold 4. Kiera Metz 5. Arabella (Hell comes to Frogtown) 6. Cersei Lannister 7. Lena Thackleman (Escape from Planet Earth) 8. Catelyn Tully 9. Lysa Tully 10. Anna Henrietta 11. Jaclyn (Igor) 12. Eva (Igor) 13. Fringilla Vigo 14. Gabby Babblebrock(Escape from Planet Earth) 15. Neera Young(Planet 51) 16. Cheryl Claws (Planet 51) 17. Luna (Planet 51) 18. Peggy Sue (Planet 51) 19. Lily (Planet 51) 20. Susan (Planet 51) 21. Lem’s Mom (no name is given)(custom name is Mandy Korplog) (Planet 51) 22. Sylvia Anna 23. Maria Louisa La Valette 24. Margarita Laux-Antille
Totally worthy of being read, an amazing story with an even more amazing MC, fluent and always entertaining and enjoyable to read, funny when needed and serius too but always good... I have nothing to say against it other than. . . we need Mooore of this Story, Thank you Author-san
This is without a shadow of a doubt the best Skyrim Fanfic Ever, the comedy is flawless(it doesn't feel forced and always makes me laugh with some of the unexpected dialogue). The Story in the beginning was great,though it was getting a bit boring layer on but then bounced back immediately and the best part is we haven't even scratched the surface on the lore of skyrim hek we didn't even reach the dragons return yet. I hope you continue this Fanfic for a long time wish you all the best and thank you for an amazing experience.
Alright…. I’ve caught up to chapter 243 which is the newest one… and I feel the other readers sorrow. Having to wait for chapters when his book is so good. It’s appalling. 😂😤 I’m reading two other books besides this one and it’s hard to go back to those when this one soooo riveting 🤣 can’t get enough of the n’wahs and The magnificent Lord Scorch! Adventure, intrigue, love, deaths 🥺, dragons, Thu’uming people into meat paste! What’s not to love? I hope you write thousands of chapters as this truly a masterpiece and and I can’t wait for more!!!
The writing quality is good and that I’ve never noticed any mistakes that force me to break that suspension of disbelief that One needs when reading a book. It updates pretty consistently. The story development is good and the character design is also really interesting since he’s a dark elf I don’t know if that’s a spoiler, but it does come up pretty soon I think in the first chapter so he does carry some traits to the dark elf mixed with his tendencies of being human, along with an interesting bloodline addition, kind of murders into an interestingly impulsive yet caring yet vicious character. And world background of Skyrim, but not just Skyrim there is a recognition that Morrowind, the Empire elsewhere, and the Somerset Isles all exist, and their existence does have implications, so it feels a bit more flushed out, then just for those stories that follow the dragon plot line.
This is currently my favourite book to read in my library. I love how the characters are portrayed and the constant humour throughout the story. It’s so good I’ve recommended it to my brother who is also a fan of the series and now we both look forward to the chapter updates and like to discuss some chapters that stand out. Keep up the great work!
I love it. The fic has a lot of hilarious moments and it the people of The Elder Scrolls world seem more real and powerful, adhering more to the lore than gameplay.
It's really good, if you enjoy Skyrim at all you'll love it. There's nothing I would say is bad or there being a glaring weakness. It just a fun read.
Nada que decir, la historia está genial, las actualizaciones son rápidas, y el mc es muy fácil de leer, mi única queja es que no hay suficiente romance, de esos con suficiente azúcar para hacer una torre de mago, después de todo romance y aventura son mis géneros favoritos, a este solo le falta lo primero.
I like this fanfic, btw, who will be the future wife? (his friend from solitude is gone from the story now) I would like Minthara as his wife cuz she also has a chance to become longer lived if u find a good way for it what worlds will he travel to later? lord of the rings? if he doesnt find any wife from skyrim maybe find elf there
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