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mc is kind of the ditsy scatterbrain type girl.. her interactions with her spiders are well written. the story is fun, i like the direction. stability of updates would be the only issue
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really good I love the comedy and small interactions you add throughout while not straying fromm the story
Finally, a fanfic that has an MC with a genuine weakness, most of the time they're just lazy power trips that end up reading the exact same way, even with supposedly different characters. So far, this one has kept the power but put a clamp on it that if used, would be interesting to watch. How will the MCU handle a villain that commits crimes so she can avoid doing much worse? How will heroes (other than Punisher) react if they find out her weakness?Hope we get to see. (mostly 4 stars in the categories we haven't gotten to see much of yet).
I am loving the interaction between mc and her minions. can't wait for more. keep up the good work
mc is kind of the ditsy scatterbrain type girl.. her interactions with her spiders are well written. the story is fun, i like the direction. stability of updates would be the only issue
Loving the story crazy narrating capability.............. .................... ........................... ..................... ................. .. ......................... ........... ........
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really good I love the comedy and small interactions you add throughout while not straying fromm the story
Finally, a fanfic that has an MC with a genuine weakness, most of the time they're just lazy power trips that end up reading the exact same way, even with supposedly different characters. So far, this one has kept the power but put a clamp on it that if used, would be interesting to watch. How will the MCU handle a villain that commits crimes so she can avoid doing much worse? How will heroes (other than Punisher) react if they find out her weakness?Hope we get to see. (mostly 4 stars in the categories we haven't gotten to see much of yet).
I am loving the interaction between mc and her minions. can't wait for more. keep up the good work
I loved the read. it's a shame there's no updates 😔😕