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chapter 4 : Meet with Hera

Author here sorry for the delayed update.

I know this story is really slow, so I want to ask you guys do I need to time skip his training with Hera?

[yes]

[no]

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This house is a gift from one of her family members. The beautiful woman is now inside the kitchen, humming around because her grandson will visit her. She has a smile that can charm any man who sees it. A beautiful woman named Hera, a goddess, is preparing some food. She stops what she's doing when she hears a sound.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

Bell and Zeus can now see a village in front of them. They walk on the road with a wheat field farm, golden-colored crops ready to harvest, making it a beautiful view on their right and left. A farmer not far away waves his hand. Other farmers join in, seemingly happy that someone is visiting their village. We can see the farmers have smiles on their faces.

One of the farmers approaches Bell and Zeus.

"Hello, visitors! Welcome to our lovely village. May I know what your intention is in visiting our village? Don't get me wrong, it's just rare for someone to visit our village because of its location, which is not strategic," the farmer welcomes them but waves her hand, scared that they might misunderstand her.

CHUCKLE

"Oh, thank you, but don't worry, little girl. We are here because my grandson and I want to visit his grandma," Zeus answers.

Bell looks at his grandpa and says, "Grandpa, are you flirting again?"

COUGH COUGH

"Anyway, we are here to visit my wife. Her name is Hera. Can you guide us to her house? That would be a big help," Zeus says.

"Ah, I know her. She is very beautiful, and yes, I can help you," the farmer says.

"Thank you. Please guide the way," Zeus says.

Bell and Zeus now follow the farmer. On the road, the farmer greets other farmers and villagers.

"Hey, farmer-san, can I ask you a question?" Bell asks.

"Hmm, sure. What is it?" the farmer looks at Bell.

"Is there a waterfall around the village?" Bell asks.

"There is, but you need a guide for your first time going there. Since the waterfall is hidden among nature, it's hard to find," the farmer explains.

"Thank you for telling me," Bell says with a smile on his face.

"Can I know why you ask about the waterfall?" the farmer asks, curious.

"Nothing in particular," Bell says, looking away.

"CHUCKLE Don't worry, I'm not forcing you. It's just weird that you ask about the waterfall and not about the village," the farmer says to Bell.

"By the way, my name is Amy. Can I know your name?" Amy smiles.

"Bell. Bell Cranel," Bell smiles back.

"Hope we can get along, Cranel-san. You can call me if you want to play," Amy says.

"It's so rare for a young man to come to this village, and on top of that, he's so cute," Amy thinks.

"Thanks, Amy-san," Bell replies.

"Ah, we've arrived. This is Hera's house. I will leave both of you here. I still have some work to do," she says and looks at Bell.

"Later, Bell. Don't forget to call me and play with me," Amy says as she leaves Zeus and Bell.

"Thank you, Amy-san," Bell thanks her.

"Hohoho, my grandson is having his first harem member," Zeus thinks.

"Alright, Bell. I will drop you off at grandma's house and then leave," Zeus says.

Bell nods and walks with Zeus to Hera's house.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"Wait for a minute," a sound comes from the house.

"Bell, don't cause trouble at grandma's house, okay? Also, don't forget to ask about the ring. Lastly, follow everything that your grandma says. Don't ever think to refute your grandma's words," Zeus advises.

"Okay, Grandpa," Bell says with a serious expression.

CRACK

They hear the sound of the door opening. They see a stunning woman standing and looking at them.

"Who is it?" the woman says.

"Hello, Hera. It's been a long time," Zeus says.

"Hoh... you have the guts to stay in this house," Hera says, looking down at Zeus.

"UGH..." Zeus has an arrow shot in his chest. "Please hear me out for a moment."

"Hmm?" Hera is confused and then looks at Bell.

"Fine, tell me fast," Hera crosses her arms.

"First, let me introduce you to my grandson..." Zeus looks at Hera, seeing her expression change for a second. "COUGH, I mean our grandson, Bell Cranel." Zeus notices her expression becoming lighter. 'Close call.'

"Second, I want you to take care of him until he can use magic fluently."

"Third, I want you to give that ring to Bell," Zeus says, looking at Bell.

"And lastly, you can read this letter later," Zeus says.

"So, you are my grandson, huh?" Hera looks at Bell with a fierce expression.

"Hello, Grandma. My name is Bell Cranel. Sorry for the trouble. Please take care of me," Bell politely says.

"Why didn't you send me a letter before, my grandson?" Hera asks.

"I'm sorry for not sending you a letter earlier, but the reason is that Grandpa just told me recently that I have a grandma, 20 days ago," Bell apologizes.

"Oh, is that so? Then it's okay. You seem very polite, unlike someone else," Hera looks at Bell and then at Zeus.

gulp

'Why, Bell? Why did you do this to your grandpa Zeus, who now has a cold atmosphere around him?'

"Grandma, can I ask a question?" Bell asks.

"Sure, sweetie," Hera replies.

"Why did you marry Grandpa?" Bell asks with a confused face.

"Huh? Why are you asking that?" Hera wonders.

"I mean, you look young and beautiful, and Grandpa is just an old man. How could you marry someone who is so old? Instead, you could find someone younger than Grandpa. In the end, why did you choose Grandpa?" Bell expresses all his confusion or rather his revenge.

"HAHAHAHA, that's not wrong if I'm beautiful and young. But the reason I married him is because he is annoying (I love him). Also, he is not old. He is using magic to look old, anyway," Hera says, unable to hold back her laughter.

"Well, honey, I will forgive you for now, but please leave already," Hera says, smiling at Zeus.

Zeus, who sees this, gets goosebumps.

"Cough cough, well, Bell, I will be leaving first. Bye, NIGERUNDAYO..." Zeus says, running away.

A smile appears on Hera's face, then she shakes her head. 'That man.'

"Come in, Bell. I've prepared some cookies," Hera says, getting into the house and helping Bell with his luggage.

Bell nods and follows his grandma. "Thanks, Grandma."

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hello vote time

[Bell with Yuno looks]

[original Bell]

or

[original Bell but when he using grimore he will look a like Yuno. (his hair and eyes changed)]

second question do this apps make it better (just the grammar not storyor plot)?

[YES]

[NO]

because if not i need to change it.

Thank you for the support hehe


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