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the grammar is horrible. there should be no excuse to have such bad grammar these days with so many free online grammar tools.
it's alright quite the build up but too slow paced and it doesn't matter really mean much in the context of mc being a nacent soul .it's looks like he could be same as core cultivators anyway the writing is good , the detailing is also good especially the involvement of technology in cultivation world but it also comes with the drawback of being same as real world u could use take the idea for our world but u should also modify it in everything and that's very hard process but it's a good novel just not my type do give it a try
I’m not good at writing reviews. I i like this book tho. Please continue author :)
Um I dont really know what to say since I dont write reviews all that often but I really like this book and I hope it doesn't get hidden behind a paywall (I'm on ch 29 and totally invested)
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Just shamelessly writing as review of my own novel... Hello! I am Shateralyn, the author. I am a 2nd year college full of imagination so I decided to write them. You may encounter some wrong grammars along the way, as English is not really my first language. But, I hope to have fully conveyed the meaning of the words I used in my novel.
the grammar is horrible. there should be no excuse to have such bad grammar these days with so many free online grammar tools.
it's alright quite the build up but too slow paced and it doesn't matter really mean much in the context of mc being a nacent soul .it's looks like he could be same as core cultivators anyway the writing is good , the detailing is also good especially the involvement of technology in cultivation world but it also comes with the drawback of being same as real world u could use take the idea for our world but u should also modify it in everything and that's very hard process but it's a good novel just not my type do give it a try
I’m not good at writing reviews. I i like this book tho. Please continue author :)
Um I dont really know what to say since I dont write reviews all that often but I really like this book and I hope it doesn't get hidden behind a paywall (I'm on ch 29 and totally invested)
MORE...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Just shamelessly writing as review of my own novel... Hello! I am Shateralyn, the author. I am a 2nd year college full of imagination so I decided to write them. You may encounter some wrong grammars along the way, as English is not really my first language. But, I hope to have fully conveyed the meaning of the words I used in my novel.