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this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
Warning !!! This trash Author had written ntr in his previous book! Probably some day you will see ntr in this story.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
please update faster because the story is interesting and also makes the mc more fierce so that the npc doesn't get underestimated + the sect leader also needs to be eaten as soon as possible
Good story but greedy author and app developers, it costs 2 fast pass per locked chapter or starts out at 15 coins then increases every chapter afterwards not sure what they are thinking. So many translation errors in grammar and gender nouns it is annoying. suggest making all locked chapters a set price of 10 coins per developers need to give coin rewards as check in, reading etc. if you want a free reading app go to my topia
latest chp has becoming more and more annoying .... why did you create a cultivation system then you destroy it with so called plot
Hey bro, I gave 5 stars alright! Tell me how much you earn from these novels, please okay? Just gave me an estimate... Thanks In advance!!!
the book is enticing but I'm not Fond of the Gods notifications he gets,it's like people are watching him and he doesn't have his privacy.overall the Book is a great no dissatisfaction there.
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All of a sudden doubling the cost per page, this story is not worth reading if it is unaffordable
It seems that this novel is on a comedy side. It's a good comedy novel, I got a laughter sometimes and the Protagonist is funny and clever. Good Job Author! Keep it up!!
The synopsis gives the impression that MC has infinite systems, but that's not true, it's a beta test, it keeps changing systems every period of time.
This one right here. He’s onto something. The revolving systems it’s written well and entertaining with a good MC and a bit of mystery. Don’t forget to read the prologue
quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan, will do a proper review when I know ☺️
Story got ruined when he couldn’t cultivate due to the gods not wanting him to grow.
Read till chapter 36, hmm, how should is say this this novel gave me mixed feelings, Worldbuilding is good but the MCs' cultivation is confusing or muddies the water so to say, I have read some novels like this but I don't know how to rate this the star rating that is given is solely based on the categories given to select by webnovel. if anybody has read further than me than a recommendation is welcomed, but I lost motivation to read on 36th chapter
What is to say about this novel? I hate this author, simply because his writing is good and he just flights on some clouds with 2 novels on pending. I hope to have incontinenta author if u don't finish those novels as quickly as possible. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
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The whole scenario feels forced, and a comedy feels cheap, he gets everything too easily, and author is that creating problems life and right, solving the problem after and creating another cheap problem plot, and transition from one arch to another is smooth as a rocky road.
I, your father the ruler of heavens and all realms in this universe unexpectedly came to earth accidentally, seeing many talents sprout on earth. I made one thousand sets of systems before leaving. If you want one of my systems like and comment 1 or comment 2 for truck kun to send you on your way without any system and comment 3 for Rob to send you in a H world with low-tier cheats.
simple plain i dont like attitude of girls around mc and mc attitude .Not my cup of tea
this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan
Warning !!! This trash Author had written ntr in his previous book! Probably some day you will see ntr in this story.
novel ini bagus, saya juga punya rekomendasi novel fantasi sihir bahasa Indonesia "Kehidupan Bebas dari Yang Mahakuasa (Indonesia Version)"
please update faster because the story is interesting and also makes the mc more fierce so that the npc doesn't get underestimated + the sect leader also needs to be eaten as soon as possible
Good story but greedy author and app developers, it costs 2 fast pass per locked chapter or starts out at 15 coins then increases every chapter afterwards not sure what they are thinking. So many translation errors in grammar and gender nouns it is annoying. suggest making all locked chapters a set price of 10 coins per developers need to give coin rewards as check in, reading etc. if you want a free reading app go to my topia
latest chp has becoming more and more annoying .... why did you create a cultivation system then you destroy it with so called plot
Hey bro, I gave 5 stars alright! Tell me how much you earn from these novels, please okay? Just gave me an estimate... Thanks In advance!!!
the book is enticing but I'm not Fond of the Gods notifications he gets,it's like people are watching him and he doesn't have his privacy.overall the Book is a great no dissatisfaction there.
Read till latest chapter I like the story Hope Author Release more Chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
All of a sudden doubling the cost per page, this story is not worth reading if it is unaffordable
It seems that this novel is on a comedy side. It's a good comedy novel, I got a laughter sometimes and the Protagonist is funny and clever. Good Job Author! Keep it up!!
The synopsis gives the impression that MC has infinite systems, but that's not true, it's a beta test, it keeps changing systems every period of time.
This one right here. He’s onto something. The revolving systems it’s written well and entertaining with a good MC and a bit of mystery. Don’t forget to read the prologue
quick question before I read this is there any yuri in this not a fan, will do a proper review when I know ☺️
Story got ruined when he couldn’t cultivate due to the gods not wanting him to grow.
Read till chapter 36, hmm, how should is say this this novel gave me mixed feelings, Worldbuilding is good but the MCs' cultivation is confusing or muddies the water so to say, I have read some novels like this but I don't know how to rate this the star rating that is given is solely based on the categories given to select by webnovel. if anybody has read further than me than a recommendation is welcomed, but I lost motivation to read on 36th chapter
What is to say about this novel? I hate this author, simply because his writing is good and he just flights on some clouds with 2 novels on pending. I hope to have incontinenta author if u don't finish those novels as quickly as possible. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
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Spoiler de révélation The whole scenario feels forced, and a comedy feels cheap, he gets everything too easily, and author is that creating problems life and right, solving the problem after and creating another cheap problem plot, and transition from one arch to another is smooth as a rocky road.
I, your father the ruler of heavens and all realms in this universe unexpectedly came to earth accidentally, seeing many talents sprout on earth. I made one thousand sets of systems before leaving. If you want one of my systems like and comment 1 or comment 2 for truck kun to send you on your way without any system and comment 3 for Rob to send you in a H world with low-tier cheats.
simple plain i dont like attitude of girls around mc and mc attitude .Not my cup of tea