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The beginning of the story felt shaky, afterwards the story was really entertaining and a good read. The worlds all mostly have something interesting as twist, which was a very good decision from the author.
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The convenient plot armor induced storyline, definitely caused some inconsistencies along the way. The MC is also a mess, he's really dumb sometimes and author just shrug it off as The Force's side effect. Everything else is great.
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I love the development of this novel so far. I’m a Terror Infinity fan and this is the closes your going to get to an original story of the series
W mc, W characters, W worldsThere's rly nothing to complain about, the MC is smart, (unlike me) the side characters are good, (at least the ones that are alive) the fights get me pumped up, the power balancing is rly good not too weak or op, MC is going at a steady pace. I think that's about everything... WAIT YOU SAID NO HAREM HOLY SHI-
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The story is really good There is definite character development You see MC making stupid decisions but later on he grows and learns You shouldn’t stop reading just Because you don’t like some of his actions at the beginning Read couple volumes? Episodes? And then decide
I don't know why the writers insist on having a naive and dumb mc that anyone who has read the novel for a while hates him. Why really???????
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OK, the story is good, and I like the premise, but my big problem with it is that all the worlds he went to before Naruto had like 15 chapters max, but he has been in naruto for 40 chapters and I get you might like it but the appeal of this ff for me atleast was he went to a world he did a mission and moved on to the next in 20 chapters or less maybe he goes back into the world for like 10 chapters if he wasn't in the world for long and there is stuff he wants to do, If you want to write a naruto ff feel free to do so but this is a terror infinity ff.
Ohwshi! Ohwshi! Ohwshi! SlyOW!!! I enjoyed the Marvel fanfic Author had brought to us before, nothing really disappointed me of his writing style, just satisfying great read altogether. Now, don't get me wrong, if you haven't read SlyOW's previous works before, then I assure you, you've found a gem. And now, Author has this new work! On top of that, one of my all-time favorite novels out there, Terror Infinity. Nothing really much to prove here; just enjoy the great ride!
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gostei da história e acredito que tem um grande potencial! ansioso pelo desenvolvimento de poder do mc
Mc's brain dead, mc acting with his emotions. Low star review because Mc is stupid. the author changes the plot of the novel and makes mc a brain dead person.
This is a very good fanfiction of terror infinity with aspects improved as said in the auxiliary chapter
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Buena lectura y diferente a otros fan-fiction que he leído va por buen camino aunque aveces no me gusta mucho el personaje aun así espero y no se abandone y siga actualizando capítulos Animo y buen dia
I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.
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i haven't read much but i hope that this one won't be dropped like many other TI fanfic even the best one like TI side b, do I will just give 5 star
God, how I've missed a good Terror Infinity. All of them are just dropped, unfortunately. And this one is well-written as well! I hope that you see this one through because it really is good. For a suggestion, if you are looking for one, I would give the Ben 10 universe. It has a high potential for custom missions and great danger/high reward or maybe a severe loss for character building. A lot of tech and potential mutations, for example, osmosian. They would have to be high-cost tough. Anyway I can't wait for more!
Its a really good attempt at a terror infinity like novel. Now i say attempt because the MC Alex has only cleared 2 missions and he hasn't properly established his team yet. But from what i have read already till now and from the other great works from this author. I dont doubt that he will do a good job in that as well. Hopefully he gets a good love interest as well later which drives him even further to survive in this hellhole.
MC is a retard. He wastes his points, even knowing he's wasting them, and for what reason? Because he's a retard.
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The beginning of the story felt shaky, afterwards the story was really entertaining and a good read. The worlds all mostly have something interesting as twist, which was a very good decision from the author.
I love this 😀 Jjdhddufhfjkxdjfhdiddjfbvjckdkrdudjjffjcjfnrkdkfjjcifjfbfjchgksksudkeijffjcjcnffbdjidjffjrjfufufjffngntufifcjfndkeidjfjfjd
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The convenient plot armor induced storyline, definitely caused some inconsistencies along the way. The MC is also a mess, he's really dumb sometimes and author just shrug it off as The Force's side effect. Everything else is great.
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I love the development of this novel so far. I’m a Terror Infinity fan and this is the closes your going to get to an original story of the series
W mc, W characters, W worldsThere's rly nothing to complain about, the MC is smart, (unlike me) the side characters are good, (at least the ones that are alive) the fights get me pumped up, the power balancing is rly good not too weak or op, MC is going at a steady pace. I think that's about everything... WAIT YOU SAID NO HAREM HOLY SHI-
Spoiler de révélation The story is really good There is definite character development You see MC making stupid decisions but later on he grows and learns You shouldn’t stop reading just Because you don’t like some of his actions at the beginning Read couple volumes? Episodes? And then decide
I don't know why the writers insist on having a naive and dumb mc that anyone who has read the novel for a while hates him. Why really???????
Very good novel, I hope you don't drop it.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
OK, the story is good, and I like the premise, but my big problem with it is that all the worlds he went to before Naruto had like 15 chapters max, but he has been in naruto for 40 chapters and I get you might like it but the appeal of this ff for me atleast was he went to a world he did a mission and moved on to the next in 20 chapters or less maybe he goes back into the world for like 10 chapters if he wasn't in the world for long and there is stuff he wants to do, If you want to write a naruto ff feel free to do so but this is a terror infinity ff.
Ohwshi! Ohwshi! Ohwshi! SlyOW!!! I enjoyed the Marvel fanfic Author had brought to us before, nothing really disappointed me of his writing style, just satisfying great read altogether. Now, don't get me wrong, if you haven't read SlyOW's previous works before, then I assure you, you've found a gem. And now, Author has this new work! On top of that, one of my all-time favorite novels out there, Terror Infinity. Nothing really much to prove here; just enjoy the great ride!
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Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop. Need an update pls dont drop.
gostei da história e acredito que tem um grande potencial! ansioso pelo desenvolvimento de poder do mc
Mc's brain dead, mc acting with his emotions. Low star review because Mc is stupid. the author changes the plot of the novel and makes mc a brain dead person.
This is a very good fanfiction of terror infinity with aspects improved as said in the auxiliary chapter
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I need Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Buena lectura y diferente a otros fan-fiction que he leído va por buen camino aunque aveces no me gusta mucho el personaje aun así espero y no se abandone y siga actualizando capítulos Animo y buen dia
I enjoy the premise of the story, however the MC and certain developments that transpired in the story is very inconsistent. The character's personality being all over the place, seems like the author wants the MC to be many things all at once, but can't make up his mind on his ethics, morals etc. Not to mention there are already certain plot holes in the story. A complete beginner in combat somehow beating trained veterans. Yes he does have the Super Soldier Serum and The Force, but he got way too strong, way too quick in my opinion. Going from a below average person with strength weaker than most girls in his class(literally what the author wrote), to rivaling that of a soldier. And you may say that he has an advantage in stats etc, but I don't buy it at all. The MC himself beat people with greater stats than him. Overall, The Terror Infinity premise is interesting, everything else in my opinion is subpar. However I still hope the author continues writing, the language usage in this fanfic is much better than most of the fanfics. I just would suggest giving a little more thought to the power up and development of the MC. Making him starting off in a world which normal people can survive in, like the Walking Dead, etc where he can develop his skills. Possibly even giving him a mentor during the first scenario he has to clear, so he may develop survival skills, combat skills and many more. These are just my thoughts.
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i haven't read much but i hope that this one won't be dropped like many other TI fanfic even the best one like TI side b, do I will just give 5 star
God, how I've missed a good Terror Infinity. All of them are just dropped, unfortunately. And this one is well-written as well! I hope that you see this one through because it really is good. For a suggestion, if you are looking for one, I would give the Ben 10 universe. It has a high potential for custom missions and great danger/high reward or maybe a severe loss for character building. A lot of tech and potential mutations, for example, osmosian. They would have to be high-cost tough. Anyway I can't wait for more!
Its a really good attempt at a terror infinity like novel. Now i say attempt because the MC Alex has only cleared 2 missions and he hasn't properly established his team yet. But from what i have read already till now and from the other great works from this author. I dont doubt that he will do a good job in that as well. Hopefully he gets a good love interest as well later which drives him even further to survive in this hellhole.
MC is a retard. He wastes his points, even knowing he's wasting them, and for what reason? Because he's a retard.
well, this novel just got dropped... ;---;