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The novel is good but can you add more detailed fighting scenes and not just how determined he was? And the fighting scenes get tiring if it's continuous, please add more content about the system and how it works.
I hope you all enjoy this work. Please feel free to write your honest opinion and let me know where I need to improve in my writing.
I would love it if you are available to continue writing. This book is very good to this point but you seem to have quit writing. has your health gotten bad?
The novel is good but can you add more detailed fighting scenes and not just how determined he was? And the fighting scenes get tiring if it's continuous, please add more content about the system and how it works.
I hope you all enjoy this work. Please feel free to write your honest opinion and let me know where I need to improve in my writing.
I would love it if you are available to continue writing. This book is very good to this point but you seem to have quit writing. has your health gotten bad?