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Writing style changed. All you’ve to do is read until like chapter 30 or above. The character design for all characters is a bit slow but good, the author is just too focused on the MC so most of the chapters are about the MC. However, the author will always write chapters for the characters and my evidence is 29th day of June’s chapter which talks about the MC’s women and how they are preparing a surprise for him. Everything so far is beyond perfect for a first time author. Yes, this is the first work of the author and I’ve never ever seen such a talented author before. Literally, the author got the talent. Despite the strange writing style of the first chapters which reminds me of Wish of the Dragon fanfic, the book will pique your interest from the very first chapters so I really recommend you to read it! Anyways, now I’m going to write 2 more reviews so the book gets rated.
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Oh you reworkee your fics? I hope you can make a better story and have a work in relationship between mc and fmc because your old work is totally garbage
Please upload more chapters!!! You’ve not updated this for a whole week now.
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I’m too lazy to write in detail. Just know that this fanfic is the first work of the author and it’s way too good. 5 stars!
Love it! But can you write more about the world(the Twisted World)? Would be great if you did so.
Great Fanfic. I am very glad that there is no Yuri in this story, I don't really like this genre........................................... ...........
Mennn I see harem and not Yuri, what more can you ask for? ... ... ... .. .............................................................................
(This is another account of mine because my main account was accidentally deleted by my friend) 1- Writing Quality is perfect for my perspective, I can understand everything without taking more than 3 seconds. The author responds to our comments whether the comments are a paragraph's or chapter's, He responds to them all that's if they are questions or a suggestion or other stuffs that require his response. 2- Stability of Updates is beyond amazing, the author uploads several chapters everyday or at least 1 chapter a day. And also, the author leaves a note if he goes on a leave of absence from my knowledge so far. The author even leaves notes at the end of each chapter. 3- Story Development is good so far. It isn't just a knockoff Anime plot and that's it like the majority of the fanfictions. The author's imagination is really nice. 4- Character Design is also good, the main character is himself and I believe he'll always be himself. The women with the MC have their own personalities and they are not just slaves that follow his words all the time around with discussions. The MC even learns from his women and vice versa. 5- World Background is also good and I don't want to spoil you about it, just read the novel and check it for yourselves.
Oh my...Oh no...My fingers slipped and I accidentally gave 5 stars to myself...
My MC is a really selfish person but good with his own family and that's it If you don't like that type of MC then peace out!
Writing style changed. All you’ve to do is read until like chapter 30 or above. The character design for all characters is a bit slow but good, the author is just too focused on the MC so most of the chapters are about the MC. However, the author will always write chapters for the characters and my evidence is 29th day of June’s chapter which talks about the MC’s women and how they are preparing a surprise for him. Everything so far is beyond perfect for a first time author. Yes, this is the first work of the author and I’ve never ever seen such a talented author before. Literally, the author got the talent. Despite the strange writing style of the first chapters which reminds me of Wish of the Dragon fanfic, the book will pique your interest from the very first chapters so I really recommend you to read it! Anyways, now I’m going to write 2 more reviews so the book gets rated.
Spoiler de révélation Oh you reworkee your fics? I hope you can make a better story and have a work in relationship between mc and fmc because your old work is totally garbage
Please upload more chapters!!! You’ve not updated this for a whole week now.
Spoiler de révélation I’m too lazy to write in detail. Just know that this fanfic is the first work of the author and it’s way too good. 5 stars!
Love it! But can you write more about the world(the Twisted World)? Would be great if you did so.
Great Fanfic. I am very glad that there is no Yuri in this story, I don't really like this genre........................................... ...........
Mennn I see harem and not Yuri, what more can you ask for? ... ... ... .. .............................................................................
(This is another account of mine because my main account was accidentally deleted by my friend) 1- Writing Quality is perfect for my perspective, I can understand everything without taking more than 3 seconds. The author responds to our comments whether the comments are a paragraph's or chapter's, He responds to them all that's if they are questions or a suggestion or other stuffs that require his response. 2- Stability of Updates is beyond amazing, the author uploads several chapters everyday or at least 1 chapter a day. And also, the author leaves a note if he goes on a leave of absence from my knowledge so far. The author even leaves notes at the end of each chapter. 3- Story Development is good so far. It isn't just a knockoff Anime plot and that's it like the majority of the fanfictions. The author's imagination is really nice. 4- Character Design is also good, the main character is himself and I believe he'll always be himself. The women with the MC have their own personalities and they are not just slaves that follow his words all the time around with discussions. The MC even learns from his women and vice versa. 5- World Background is also good and I don't want to spoil you about it, just read the novel and check it for yourselves.
Oh my...Oh no...My fingers slipped and I accidentally gave 5 stars to myself...
My MC is a really selfish person but good with his own family and that's it If you don't like that type of MC then peace out!